Name of Author: Ahmed Name of Reviewer: Alaa Eddine Ait Abdelouahad

Diagnostic Essay Peer Review

1. Was the first sentence interesting to you? Why or why not?

The first sentence was very interesting for me because it contains a fact that we should
everyone know it

2. How many paragraphs are there and what is each paragraph about?
There are three paragraphs plus the introduction and conclusion in this essay. All three
paragraphs give some words that express how the author feels about writing

3. Does the writer identify three words describing them as a writer? What are they and do they
explain why they’ve chosen these words?

The writer identifies three words that describe his self as a writer which are rational,
perfectionist and creative. Also, he explains why he choose these words.
4. Are there grammar mistakes? Can you write down some of them here?
No there is not

5. What is one thing you really liked about this essay?

I like the depth and the information given

6. What is one thing that really needs to improve?

The style should be more formal

7. Has the writer shown any awareness of MLA style formatting? If yes, what?
No, he did not