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Introduction :Give the background Maam Jovie We change the introduction, we tackle
of the personnel when it comes to what are the situation of the
No. 1 their life as maintenance : their job maintenance personnel.
position, salary, co-worker, to give
us the idea why the researchers
wants to explore the area.
Perspective as a researcher why
the maintenance personnel are the
subjects of the study. What is their
situation, what are your
observations?
What is the primary purpose of the Maam Jovie The purpose of this study is to explore
study? Elaborate. What are the the challenges maintenance
challenges they encounter, that’s personnel on selected resorts of
should be the purpose of your Panglao, Bohol. This study aims to
study. develop a picture of the personnel’s
No. 1 challenges in terms of their job
Revise your introduction : 1 whole position, salary, co-workers, service
page attitude and communication.

Theoretical Background : use the
No.2 Expectancy theory which is
relevant to the study
Legal Basis : Choose one only
No.5 Labor Code of the Philippines,
choose the section that best suits
for the study.
Literature Review : To be
No.7 reviewed.
Maam Jovie We change our theoretical background
and we use theoretical that are related
to our study.
Maam Jovie We choose the legal basis that are
related for our study.
Maam Jovie This article discusses the challenges of
low-level employees at selected
resorts of panglao. Janitorial and
maintenance experience.
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Significance of the study : mention Maam Jovie This study will be conducted to
the maintenance personnel determine the Challenges
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No.12 Maintenance Personnel on Selected
Resort in Panglao rendered by the
hospitality students
Research Design : Mention that Maam Jovie We change our research design and
this is a qualitative study we mention also the qualitative study.
No.13
Chapter 2 : start with another page Maam Jovie Our chapter 2 is start in another page.
No.18

Chapter 2:
Transcript data We make a data transcription table
No The personnel should talk in group Sir Mark
40-41 what are the challenges
encountered for ex. They lack
communication bacause they’re
ashame to communicate to the
guests.
Be specific with the resorts badge, We Use 4 star resorts for our
if you are considering 4 star Sir Mark respondents like the amorita resort and
resorts, use 4 star resorts as your south palms resort.
respondents.
Communication aspect : what are
the challenges of the personnel as Sir Mark We make a data transcription table
No.40- to communication, you have to
41 state that there is a language
barrier ex: the maintenance
personnel cannot speak english
very well.
Use thematic analysis in your We use thematic analysis in our
No. chapter 2 Sir Mark chapter 2
31

Write the common answer of the We use themes and codings in our
No. 42 respondents like for example in the Sir Mark chapter 2
results of salary but be it in “
themes”
Service attitude -there is no
challenge in service attitude
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What specific challenge have the

experience? You have to change
service attitude into something like
that.
You can use direct quotations in Sir Mark
stating chapter 2. We use direct quotations in our
chapter 2

What is the coping mechanism of Sir Mark

the challenges being mentioned
above. Like in their job position
how did they cope with the
challenge, you state that in chapter
2
No. Similar answer should be grouped
31-40 together, then add citations.
According on our respondents, their
coping mechanisms when handling
issue and challenges were when they
are stressed on their workplace,
Maam Jovie
We make a data transcription table,

The answers of the respondents Maam Jovie

should be the basis of your
interpretation.

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