ADVANTAGES/DISADVANTAGES

In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

1. Intro
- S1: Paraphrase câu đề (câu dẫn vào)
- S2: pros and cons → opinion (adv > dis; dis > ad; dis = ad)
2. Body 1: Disadvatages of increased life expectancy
- S1: Topic sentence
- S2-S3: Idea 1 → support
- S4-S5: Idea 2 → ssuppor
3. Body 2: Advatages of …1 (despite nó có dis, I believe that ad outweigh dis

Similar to Boddis

4. Conclusion
- summarize pro and cons → confirm opinion

Homework (write at least 250 words)

Deadline:

Intro: In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.

Increased life expectancy ~ extended lifespan ~ longevity ~ increased years of life ~ aging
population

Thesis statement: While extended lifespan has some drawbacks, I believe that the
benefits are much more significant (intro, conclusion)
 Disadvantages
TOPIC SENTENCE: CAM
+ aging population → increase in the
number of people suffering from
illnesses → greater / enormous demand
for healthcare services → burden on
healthcare
+ overpopulation → shortage/scarcity of
housing → poor living conditions ……
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burden on healthcare system
aging population
increase the risk of disease
Enormous demand on health and
services. The rate of suffering from
illnesses and diseases are more higher
as age increases,the proportion of elderly
people with poor health increases and
the number of diseases they suffer from
increases
increase population
become a burden to societCAM
Advantages
TOPIC SENTENCE: XANH
+ live longer → more time to enjoy
personal interests/ enjoy quality time
with family and friends / get opportunies
to fulfill their wishes → promote overall
well-being / increase the sense of
purpose and fulfillment
+ the elderly → a wealth of experience
and knowledge → guide the youth /
impart valuable lessons for the current
generation / sharing valuable
experiences to the youth —> …
+ historical and cultural values for young
people → preserve these values / keep
the tradition alive for a long time →
foster the sense of belonging with past
among young people
Live happily, eenjoyamily
- a longer time with their families
- They can guide the youth a lot of
Benefit from the experience of
an older mind
- If people have a long life
expectancy, society will become
more and more healthy people
get an opportunity to fufill their
wishes
Initially, retired or seniority
people are less healthier, until the
improvements from life
expectancy has been widen and
well-known around the world.