Rephrase "Beam off sunlight flashed over Jim and his sister ,Mary getting ready to do something exciting!they was over the moon as it was finally the day they have bin waiting for months jim sneaks into the kitchen without his mother noticing and Mary sneaked on the other side to get the ingredients. Then Jim followed the recipe closely while Mary listened to him and whisked the eggs in a mixing bowl. After they fi wished making the cupcakes Mary put them into the oven the and they both waited patiently.both Mary and Jim were happy beyond words as this was their first time making cupcakes for their mother by themself. There was a fragrant aroma coming out of the perfectly baked cupcakes as Jim took them out of the oven. Then "ouch" Jim exclaimed soft trying not to wake his mother up. Mary took an icepack out of the fridge and put it on the burn area where Jim had. "mom will be worried if she see this " Jim thought as he took out the icepack out of his hand. Thankfuly it was recover soon enough . they both were relieved. Their mother woke up and sat on the sofa comfortably. Unexpectedly their mother was shocked to see that Jim and Mary brought the cupcake ." happy birthday" they both exclaimed and was beaming with pride. Their mother was proud of them and they all has a family celebration. The memory of them surprising their mother be etchedin Jim's and Mary's mind forever.they was on cloud nine when they said happy birthday to get. They hope that is will happen again .they decided to make more specially."" Baking Surprise Success. Default (GPT-3.5) Rephrase "Beam off sunlight flashed over Jim and his sister ,Mary getting ready to do something exciting!they was over the moon as it was finally the day they have bin waiting for months jim sneaks into the kitchen without his mother noticing and Mary sneaked on the other side to get the ingredients. Then Jim followed the recipe closely while Mary listened to him and whisked the eggs in a mixing bowl. After they fi wished making the cupcakes Mary put them into the oven the and they both waited patiently.both Mary and Jim were happy beyond words as this was their first time making cupcakes for their mother by themself. There was a fragrant aroma coming out of the perfectly baked cupcakes as Jim took them out of the oven. Then"ouch" Jim exclaimed soft trying not to wake his mother up. Mary took an icepack out of the fridge and put it on the burn area where Jim had. "mom will be worried if she see this " Jim thought as he took out the icepack out of his hand. Thankfuly it was recover soon enough . they both were relieved. Their mother woke up and sat on the sofa comfortably. Unexpectedly their mother was shocked to see that Jim and Mary brought the cupcake ." happy birthday" they both exclaimed and was beaming with pride. Their mother was proud of them and they all has a family celebration. The memory of them surprising their mother be etched in Jim's and Mary's mind forever.they was on cloud nine when they said happy birthday to get. They hope that is will happen again .they decided to make more specially." ChatGPT "Radiant sunlight beamed over Jim and his sister, Mary, as they excitedly prepared for a long-awaited day. They were thrilled as they snuck into the kitchen, Jim discreetly grabbing ingredients while Mary whisked eggs in a mixing bowl. Following the recipe diligently, they made cupcakes together for the first time. A delightful aroma filled the air as they baked and eagerly awaited the results. In the midst of their happiness, a minor mishap occurred —Jim accidentally burned himself, quickly soothed byMary's swift response with an icepack. Relieved that the injury wasn't severe, they continued their baking adventure. When their mother woke up, she was pleasantly surprised by the birthday cupcakes, leading to a heartwarming family celebration. The cherished memory of surprising their mother lingered in Jim and Mary's minds, leaving them elated and hopeful for more special moments ahead, planning to create more heartfelt surprises in the future."