1. His top-choice schools were Harvard, Yale; and Princeton.

A) NO CHANGE
B) Harvard, Yale, and Princeton.
C) Harvard, Yale, and, Princeton.
D) Harvard Yale and Princeton.
2. Jonah, everyone seemed fairly certain, was going to get into one of
those schools.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Jonah everyone seemed fairly certain
C) Jonah, everyone seemed fairly certain
D) Jonah everyone seemed fairly certain,
3. Everyone hoped, he would get in, after his brother and two sisters had
gone to their first-choice schools.
A) NO CHANGE
B) hoped, he would get in, after his brother, and
C) hoped, he would get in after his brother, and,
D) hoped he would get in after his brother and
4. The hungry buffoon was thinking of lots of things: peanut butter
cupcakes, chocolate donuts, crispy duck and pig’s trotters.
A) NO CHANGE
B) The hungry buffoon was thinking of lots of things,
C) The hungry buffoon was thinking of alot of things
D) The hungry buffoon was thinking of lots of things;
5. London is a very old city but has many modern buildings.
A) NO CHANGE
B) London is a very old city, but has many modern buildings.
C) London is a very old city: but has many modern buildings.
D) London is a very old city but has many, modern buildings.
6. Four people worked on the project: only one received credit for it.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Four people worked on the project - only one received credit for it.
 C) Four people worked on the project, only one received credit for it.
D) Four people worked on the project; only one received credit for it.
7. Elaine has three daughters; Amy, Michaela, and Christine.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Elaine has three daughters’ Amy, Michaela and Christine.
C) Elaine has three daughters, Amy, Michaela, and Christine.
D) Elaine has three daughters: Amy, Michaela, and Christine.
8. Dogs—particularly pure breeds—are prone to health problems.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Dogs, particularly pure breeds are prone to health problems.
C) Dogs particularly pure breeds — are prone to health problems.
D) Dogs, particularly pure breeds—are prone to health problems.