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Topic: In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? Use specific
details examples to explain your opinion. (Version 1)
Answer:
Online learning is among the prevailing trends in the education sector that have
emerged in the context of the Covid-19 pandemic. As far as I’m concerned,
although students and academic institutions alike have found numerous benefits
of this platform, there is a flip side to the coin.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of online learning that explain why
e-learning may be the greatest revolution in today’s education. The most
significant would be that this method is an efficient concept of education during
the setting of the pandemic. As a matter of fact, the current increase in its
adoption by schools is to direct their actions toward the alignment between local
and global policies to overcome the transmission of the Covid-19 and guarantee
the regulation of academic curriculum. Furthermore, another noteworthy feature
of online classes is reduced financial costs. This is owing to the fact that online
learning eliminates the amount of money spent on student transportation,
student meals, and study materials, which is also beneficial to the environment.
On the other hand, although online degree programs are designed to eradicate
some of the challenges of the traditional educational environment, there are
several hurdles that students and instructors must overcome. Firstly, there are
minimal physical interactions between students and teachers. To illustrate, many
students have trouble learning with hardly any interactions and might find that
they are unable to work effectively in a team setting, which can be a reason for
the higher drop-out rates among students. Secondly, one of the biggest
disadvantages of online learning is the increased opportunities to cheat. In fact,
some students are too dependent on several apps to assist with their
assignments, which leads to failure for teachers to assess their real abilities, as
well as creating a certain dependence on despicable schemes.
In conclusion, online education has both advantages and shortcomings. Although
it is an excellent learning method that can help develop a student’s performance,
it should not replace conventional education as it cannot fully replace the human
relationships that develop in a group.
Marking Criteria:
Format 1/1
Content 3.5/4
Language Use 1.5/3
Accuracy 1/2
Total 7/10
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Commenter version 1: Vu Hoang Giang