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NATALIE HEMBY
STEPPING INTO THE SPOTLIGHT
BY JOE VITAGLIANO
F
or singer/songwriter Natalie Hemby, step- singing with Dolly Parton and performing on behind her, Hemby finished Pins and Needles,
ping onto the stage of the Newport Folk Jimmy Fallon and all of that. I always say that effectively bringing a multi-decades dream to
Festival this past July was a moment she’s I felt like Forrest Gump—I have no idea how life in the midst of perhaps the least opportune
been building up to for nearly two decades. I got there, but I was there. I took it all in and moment to do so.
“Usually, I’m having to win people over, but really enjoyed it.” “It was so strange—I got my record deal in
this time there were thousands of people there Hemby’s humility is one of her more promi- the middle of a global pandemic,” she said with
and they actually stayed for my set and even nent characteristics, but to take everything she amazement. “Nevermind that for all of my 20s,
clapped for me before I came out on stage and says at face value would be to vastly underes- all I wanted was a record deal. For some rea-
everything,” she said. “I felt like I had won the timate her talent. Listen to any song with her son, my time was when I was 43 years old and
Miss America pageant or something—every- name in the byline and the full extent of her the world was in the middle of a pandemic. I
one was clapping, I kept saying, ‘Thank you so abilities starts to become clear. was just glad to be making it happen at all—for
much!’ I probably stayed on the stage for a lit- So, when she got off the album/tour cycle for it to have all unfolded like this… I’m just so
tle too long, but it was an awesome day, like a the Highwomen and found herself with a bit of grateful.”
childhood dream come true.” time, she started work on her second solo re- All of that led Hemby to that beautiful “Miss
Having written a handful of country music’s cord, Pins and Needles, which finally arrived this America moment” this past July at the Newport
biggest hits over the past decade—including past October. Folk Festival. Now, with Pins & Needles out and
Little Big Town’s “Pontoon,” Kacey Musgraves’ “These songs have come over years and years more and more items getting crossed off from
“Rainbow,” and more—you would expect Hem- of writing,” she explained. “I have an enormous her “childhood dreams” list, she feels like she’s
by to be more accustomed to the sound of ap- vault of songs—probably enough to make five finally getting to do things the way she’s always
plause, but she’s spent the better part of her ca- or six albums—but these all rose to the surface wanted to.
reer behind the scenes. It wasn’t until 2017 that and all we had to do was pluck them out.” “I had so many doors shut on me when I
she finally made her proper debut as an artist, Perusing her backlog and selecting a group of was younger, so far as my artistry goes,” she
with her first full-length record, Puxico. songs that would reflect where her life is now, said. “Now, I feel amazing. There’s part of me
That record was a good foray into finally the end result of Pins & Needles reveals an in- that hopes everyone likes my record, but I’m
getting to sing her own songs, but shortly after timate portrait of Hemby. And embarking on also like, ‘Well, I like my record.’ So, no mat-
it came out, Hemby got involved in another the record-making process in 2019 with Fanta- ter what happens, I’m okay. I think that’s the
project that now cements her name in the book sy Records backing her up, the 44-year-old felt most important thing. You just have to be as
of all-time greats. She joined the Highwomen, better than ever. Until the pandemic hit just a sincere as possible and make the music you
alongside Brandi Carlile, Maren Morris, and few months later. love—the rest is up to other people and God
Amanda Shires. “At that point, I started having a moment of to decide.”
“It was like we were Destiny’s Child except panic, like, ‘Am I even supposed to be doing
I was Michelle and the other three were all this?’” she said. “I think everybody was kinda
Beyoncé,” she said, recalling the whirlwind reevaluating their lives at the time. Ultimately,
Scan here for Natalie
experience that came in the wake of the High- my husband [producer, Mike Wrucke] and I de-
women’s self-titled 2019 record. “They all tour cided to just finish the album. We didn’t even Hemby’s Exclusive
all the time and have it down pat. For me, it know if Fantasy was still on board or not… but “Off the Record”
was like the Lady Gaga A Star Is Born—I was sure enough, they said they absolutely were.” video interview, coming
just thrown into the mix and suddenly we were With an unprecedented amount of support November 8!
W
ith the very first snippet of a vocal lyric “I had this wake-up call,” James says. “Like, like I could do,” he says. “One of the first places
on his band’s newest (and self-titled) LP, ‘Oh my God, this shit is all an illusion. It’s really where I felt like I belonged because I didn’t really
released in October, Jim James, frontman drowning you.’ So, I canceled my streaming ser- fit in school. I always felt like a nerd. I didn’t fit
for the iconic rock group My Morning vices and got off social media. And I saw my pro- into sports. The only place I felt like I belonged
Jacket, makes his mindset abundantly clear. For ductivity go back up, my creativity start to come on the planet was when I was playing music with
James, who these days values hushed moments back. I feel like I became a better listener. I felt a few friends I had.”
as much as he ever has loud ones and contempla- like I became a better person.” Growing up in Kentucky, James fell in love
tion now more than product inundation, the idea James started to read more. He also spends with the rolling green hills, the Ohio River, and
is clear: remove yourself from all that digitally more time with his eyes closed, sometimes the forests. The region gave him a sense of lar-
drowns and get with what’s natural, human, and stretched on a sofa in meditation. It’s not that gesse, which, when combined with his sense of
organically of the earth. Diamonds are growing in he’s against social media or streaming platforms relative placelessness, turned into giant musical
the garden, sings James on “Regularly Scheduled per se. It’s more their un-redeeming, kudzu-like output. My Morning Jacket, formed in 1998,
Programming.” Now we know; look for what’s nature. Instead of interacting with those devices, has released nine studio records. The group has
good in streams that ripple not ones that require the frontman appreciates more human interac- been through early lineup changes and occasions
Wi-Fi. tion and conversation. These are the things that when James wasn’t sure if it would continue
“I try to speak from a place where I’m not inspire his creative heart, enough to undertake through creative burnout—yet it always has and
saying that I have it all figured out,” James says. the almost immeasurable effort it requires to still does.
“I’m struggling just like everybody else with all write and make a record like the 11-track My “Every album is different, really,” James says. “I
of these things. Especially in the pandemic when Morning Jacket. try not to put limits on it.”
we found ourselves so cut off, and one of the only “I just feel like I want to talk to people who The band’s self-titled new record is stellar.
places we thought we could look was social me- are real with me and truthful with me,” James From the looming, rocking “In Color” to the
dia and streaming programs.” says. “People I care about. I feel like it’s about Pink Floyd-esque “Lucky to be Alive” to the in-
But social media’s siren song didn’t offer what spending time being real with people and nur- timate ender “I Never Could Get Enough.” Now
James thought he wanted when he sought their turing those bonds.” that it’s out, though, and as James continues to
pseudo-comforting rays of blue light. Given James’ feeling toward friendships, it embrace what he’s realized in this past handful of
“I just found myself in this really dark, terri- might be no surprise that he began to love music months, he says he’s ready not to look into the
ble place,” he says, “where I was binge-streaming through the camaraderie-rich 1970s television future, but to enjoy the moments presently. For
shit for like eight hours a day, scrolling through program, The Muppet Show. He says the show the 43-year-old, Grammy-nominated musician
my phone endlessly.” spoke to him. He wanted to be Kermit, he want- who’s worked with everyone from Elvis Costello
For Louisville, Kentucky-born James, space ed to be Dr. Teeth, he wanted to be in the sway- to Brittany Howard, it’s about keeping perspec-
and location have always been an important part ing house band the Electric Mayhem. In sixth tive.
of his life. So to remedy the icky feeling brought grade, James began taking guitar lessons and his “Every moment is precious,” James says. “To-
on by an overabundance of screen time, he ven- entrance into rock ’n’ roll continued, both for morrow is never promised. I’m just trying as hard
tured out into the woods—specifically sequoia James’ appreciation of the art form and of the as I can to live each day as best as I can. Every-
forests. He’s since gone out into nature every day space it offered him to be himself. thing is so fleeting. Everything could be wiped
to hike, breathe the air, and remember who he is. “It was just one of the first things I ever felt away tomorrow.”
NEAL
FRANCIS
RESIDENT ARTIST
BY CATHERINE WALTHALL
N
eal Francis’ latest album, In Plain Sight, ment after stealing from the Greek gods. More was a passageway which connected the basement
sounds haunted with the wailings of the specifically, the two artists felt that Prometheus’ of our living space to the rest of the facility.
slide guitar and dreamlike melodies. The punishment embodied the despair and isolation “I had access to the organ [and] choir rehears-
nine-track album dropped on November felt during the crises of the pandemic. al room 24 hours a day, which is just
5, and Francis revealed that this latest record “Can’t Stop The Rain” exists in oppo- super important for my growth over-
has been described as “station wagon rock.” As sition to “Prometheus” with a more opti- “The all as a musician,” Francis continues.
the more relatable version of yacht rock that
bounces with chords of nostalgia, In Plain Sight
mistic flair. The legendary Derek Trucks
is also featured on this glorious track.
luxurious “When our tour got canceled, it was
just an amazing place to be stuck be-
is a record worth diving into. “Derek liked the song and offered to thing about cause of all the space we were afforded
“The first song I recorded was ‘In Plain Sight,’ blow over it. So we sent him a completed and also the things in that building
and then that got the door open to all these mix with vocals, and he sent us four takes
this album that I could dedicate my time to.”
other ideas,” Francis tells American Songwriter. a couple of days later. The first take was was that I Francis moved into the church af-
Despite not making it onto the record in song the one we ended up using, I didn’t really ter a breakup and ended up staying
form, “In Plain Sight” morphed into the scaf- listen to the other ones, the first take was
had days until his record was almost entirely
folding for Francis’ second album. just so perfect,” Francis explains. “He’s a upon days complete. The singer/songwriter
“BNYLV” (pronounced bunny love), was really special individual, and I’m really soaked up the church’s stunning
one such song that emerged after the title track honored that he performed on the track.” and weeks to architecture, built in the English
jumpstarted Francis’ creative process. The track Another track on the record, “Senti- explore these Gothic style, and was moved by the
centers around sorrowful lyrics like We had a mental Garbage,” which was the original building’s ornate roofing and intri-
good thing in the past / Why can’t good things last title track, expresses Francis’ cathartic ideas and cate stained glass windows. “The
forever / True love never lasts / Why can’t this love escape to music. “I was feeling really low beat my head luxurious thing about this album was
last forever. The instrumentals behind the mel- about myself and wanted to be explic- that I had days upon days and weeks
ancholy mood, however, offer a glimpse of hope it about some of the things I didn't like against the to explore these ideas and beat my
with upbeat swirls of ’70s funk. Francis fondly about myself. So [I was] just talking about wall.” head against the wall—and really get
recalls that the track grew from an early morn- vanity and narcissism,” Francis says. “I some deep ideas,” Francis states.
ing writing session. “I just remember being up thought that it was like a cathartic way to Upon completion, Francis dedi-
all night, recording that, putting it together, progress with those perceived flaws.” cated In Plain Sight to Lil, the de facto leader of
and being really proud of it,” Francis says. Overall, the album is an innovative romp the St. Peter’s congregation who allowed him to
Outside of “BNYLV,” the theme of battling through Francis’ musical influences and creativity. become the church’s resident artist. “I'm really
addiction is present in songs like “Alameda One specific influence for the album was the set- lucky to have great people around me,” Francis
Apartments,” and allusions to Greek mythology ting in which Francis created the album. Francis says.
exist in “Prometheus.” Synth and guitar-heavy, spent about a year living in a parsonage attached Altogether, In Plain Sight emerged from the
“Prometheus,” was a song born out of the pan- to a church in Chicago called St. Peter’s UCC. spacious halls of a Chicago church and from
demic. Francis and drummer Colin O’Brien “Our drummer Colin also ended up living the soul of an artist who listened to his creative
related to the story of the mythological Titan. there,” Francis explains. “We had a three-bed- instincts. The result is a bombastic set of songs
Prometheus was sentenced to a cyclical punish- room house attached to the church, and there unlike any other.
D
espite Mo Pitney’s 2020 album title, Ain’t then the other songs, little by little, fell into Despite Pitney’s fondness for this collection
Lookin’ Back, the country singer/song- place.” of songs, the singer/songwriter expresses a de-
writer freely reminisced with American The 12 other songs include tracks like the sire to go even further with his craft. “You make
Songwriter about each stepping stone in syrupy-sounding “Local Honey,” a song that music from a place with as much as you know
his music career. “The first two records I made was unexpectedly inspired by a text message about yourself and your likes and your loves in
were birthed out of a flood of multiple songs,” he received from his mother. “I was actual- the world and all of that at that time,” Pitney
Pitney begins. ly walking into a write with nothing to write says. “And it seems like the moment you put it
His first album, Behind This Guitar (2016), about with Wil Nance and Adam Wood, and in the can, two days later, you've learned some-
features the hit single “Boy & a Girl Thing” my mom texts me and she just said ‘local hon- thing new… I think moving forward I'm going
and got people talking about the Illinois-born ey,’” Pitney says. “Which I tell people because to change the way that I make records.
artist. “Country” sways as a backroad anthem I was all grown up and married [with] kids, so “I just feel clearer about making art than I
while other tracks like “I Met Merle Haggard I didn't think she was sending me a ever have in my entire life,” Pitney
Today” and “Take The Chance” solidify Pit- grocery list to bring home. I walked states, revealing that he’s working on
ney’s carefree approach to life and love. in and I said, ‘My mom just texted “I just feel a new project. “I have a mission or a
Four years after his debut album, Pitney re- me this, could it be a song?’ And clearer about goal for my life that's more than just,
leased Ain’t Lookin’ Back. His second offering about two hours later, we had writ- ‘Hey let's make music and try to get
showcases a more sure-footed, mature artist at ten the song.” making art radio to play it and make a bunch of
the helm of his artistry. “We had 30 or 40 songs Tracks like “Right Now With than I ever money and have a good retirement
that I ended up deciding that these are possi- You” are Pitney's ode to a love and then say sayonara to the world.’
bilities for the next album. Then I started lis- that lasts, and the lyrics express have in my I hope that the music doesn't only
tening to outside songs,” Pitney explains. “The his desire “to fly in the face of our entire life.” serve my pocket, but it really does
closest thing I could say that inspired bringing culture's lack of commitment.” The serve the world for the better… I feel
the ocean into order is when I heard ‘Ain't chorus guarantees a public declara- like I am ready to come out of the
Lookin’ Back.’ tion of faithfulness when he sings, 'Cause I still gate—running out into the world with the
“[‘Ain’t Lookin’ Back’] had a twofold mean- wanna kiss you in a crowd now / Sing my love music that is to come. I think that the music
ing in that the song was very personal to me at songs out loud now / Let everyone that I know now that I've already made has been a foreshadow-
that point in my life,” Pitney continues. “I was know I wrote 'em bout you. ing or a reflection of that.”
really needing to let go of decisions that I've “Mattress on the Floor” continues Pitney’s The first step in this new direction is a new
made or ways that I've been treated or all the impassioned approach to his second album. release of “Old Home Place” that showcases
things that humans go through. I was at a turn- Largely influenced by his marriage —Pitney the all-star band that was present for the first
ing point where it was very crucial that I was tied the knot with musician and vocalist Em- recording. Pitney hints at more bluegrass-fo-
able to let go and not look back and not carry ily Bankester in 2016—the song oozes with cused efforts in the future and remains ever
what was behind me, with me. So I decided to charming soundscapes. On the other hand, hopeful about what is yet to come. Overall,
make [‘Ain’t Lookin’ Back’] the centerpiece of standout tracks “Ain’t Bad for a Good Ol’ Boy” Pitney has proven that his music has, and
the album, which it finds itself in the middle, flexes Pitney’s country swagger, and “Old Home will be, an ever-evolving staple in country
and build around that. Once that showed itself, Place” showcases his bluegrass roots. music.
AIMEE
MANN
A MUSICAL VOICE
BY JACOB UITTI
L
egendary songwriter Aimee Mann remem- Honestly, I would just throw in details to enrich characters, there were not many backstories.
bers putting in the extra work for her acting the lyric and express myself. There’s a real nu- So, she was able to bring her own life to much
role in the 1998 comedy, The Big Lebowski. ance in lyric writing.” of their contexts while writing. Mann, who has
She’d been cast in the film after a success- Songs specifically are amazing creatures for experienced emotional, physical, and mental
ful, though light-hearted audition, and she was Mann. They blend two things: words, which she abuses in her life, said she wanted to be the mu-
set to play a German nihilist. Mann says that loves, and the invisibility and tones of music sical voice of this work.
because the character was a nihilist, she didn’t that almost demand feelings from you immedi- “I related to it,” Mann shares. “I felt like it
expect much acting or dialogue. Yet, she pulled ately upon hearing them. Mann gets a kick out was a really important project to me. I really
one of her scene stars aside and put forth the of this juxtaposition, how the lyrics can conjure wanted to be the person to write the music for
idea of practicing a little something. So, they one thing in the listener’s mind while the music it.”
got together and worked up a short conversa- does another in the listener’s body. The LP concludes with the song “I See You,”
tion about the whereabouts of a hotel key, in “I love the contrast,” she says. which is meant to be the time at the end of the
German. It was a good thing, too. For when it Mann wrote her newest album “in a fever.” show when the women, who are very much at
came time to shoot, the director said, “We’re She’d been approached by a team of producers the center of the performance and living in an
going to zoom in and you guys just talk in Ger- to write the music for a stage production of Su- institution, turn to the onlooking crowd, break-
man.” sannah Kaysen’s memoir, Girl, Interrupted. After ing the fourth wall. For this, Mann had a plan.
They say the way you do one thing is the way a few meetings and agreeing to the assignment, “‘I See You,’” she says, “that’s the last song
you do everything. In this case, that’s especially Mann went to the source material. where the inmates turn to the audience. The
true. Mann is always detail-minded; she loves “I just went to the book,” she says, “and idea is that the women and girls kind of end
intricacies. It’s the superpower she brings to her marked out sections that I felt would make up being therapy for each other and help and
songwriting and the music she makes, which is sense to have the emotional climax be a song.” support each other. That’s what I wanted to get
especially so on Mann’s latest LP, Queens of the She found that there were many characters across.”
Summer Hotel, which is out officially on No- and felt each should have a song. There was a Now that the new record is done and out for
vember 5 via Mann’s label, SuperEgo Records. lot of writing. In the end, she created a 15-track the world to engage with, the 61-year-old Mann
“We ended up having to do this little dia- masterpiece, saturated with emotion, insight, says she’s grateful for the job and the inevitable
logue,” Mann says. “Thank god we’d practiced sorrow, and jaunt. And while the COVID-19 discoveries it provided her. Now, as far as what’s
it!” pandemic has pushed pause on the show’s pro- next? It’s onward toward more work, more life,
For Mann, the magic is in the detail. In the duction timetable, Mann was left with a glori- and more heart-aching surprise via songwriting.
small things that resonate and impact almost ous LP’s worth of tracks. “I love the subterranean nature of it,” Mann
without prelude. Even before she was a profes- “So,” she says, “I went ahead and recorded says. “I love that it can make you feel things al-
sional musician, she adored the keen-eyed songs the record.” most automatically, and sometimes things that
of Bob Dylan, Elton John, and Neil Young. Featuring swelling strings and nimble piano you didn’t even know you felt. That goes for me
From these masters, Mann began to learn about bounce, along with Mann’s almost operatic writing a song. I’ve definitely written something
her own creative voice. voice, the album is heart-wrenching at times. and then looked back on it later and realized it
“I think that pretty early on,” Mann says, “I Unlike The Big Lebowski, Girl, Interrupted is no means something different than I thought it did
realized in other people’s music I enjoyed detail. comedy. In the book, while there were many at the time.”
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‘WE SHOULD BE
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and having fun as the drummer, but Malcolm is a true artist. It’s sincerity.
amazing to see. He writes songs that are so much more amazing and “What’s funny is, now, when I show this music to anyone, I break
complex than anything I could ever imagine. It’s so funny, though, out in sweats,” Wolfhard said. “With the Calpurnia stuff, I’d be like
because we would be recording, trying to figure out what to do next, ‘Check this out, it’s cool.’ But with this record, if I’m showing it to
and we’d ask Malcolm, ‘Do you have anything?’ He’d be like, ‘No, my friends or family, it is seriously nerve-racking. It feels entirely
not really.’ We’d say, ‘No, come on, you’re hiding something.’ Then different. I’m really proud of it.”
he’d open up his iTunes and play a song he was working on and Between the lo-fi drive of songs like “Blue” and the title track,
we’d be like, ‘Holy shit, this is perfect! Why didn’t you show us this and the ethereal soundscapes of tunes like “I Need to Leave the
sooner?’ It was really fun.” Theater” and “You’ll Have to Wait,” it’s clear that Wolfhard is striv-
With that approach, Wolfhard, Craig, and their team—consist- ing for an artistic standard much deeper and more profound than
ing of R Andrew Humphrey and Twin Peaks’ Cadien Lake James one might expect. While on the surface, the album is a lot of fun,
and Colin Croom—created Karaoke Alone, the Aubreys’ debut full- it also carries a weight to it that makes it more than just a flash of
length, which dropped on November 5. Written and recorded over superficial enjoyment. Rather, it captures something deeper, some-
the course of the pandemic, Wolfhard feels as if it might be his thing more revealing of who this modern cultural icon really is.
favorite thing he’s made to date. Releasing this record into the world now, there’s a healthy sense
“This is the first thing I’ve written where I really wrote what I of relief and fulfillment in the air around Wolfhard. Finally getting
felt,” he explained. “I mean, to be honest, with Calpurnia, I was to engage with music the way he’s always wanted to, he’s also finally
14 and was just like, ‘Oh man, this is fun.’ The songs were fun, but getting his work schedule in line with his artistic impulses. And go-
they didn’t really mean anything. This is the first thing where I’m ing forward with Craig by his side, the future looks wildly promising.
writing what I feel, which is more mature for me, I guess. They’re “This feels really great to say, but I actually don’t really know what
not heavy-duty lyrics or anything, but I really mean them.” we’re going to do next,” he said when asked about his plans. “For
With songs that explore the trials and joys of youth—the loss now, I’m taking a break for a few months just to hang out and be an
of innocence, the dizzying impact of navigating a pandemic world adult for the first time. We don’t have a record label telling us what
while trying to become a person—the inventive indie arrangements to do—we could do another single, another record, I really have no
and memorable melodic lilts lining Karaoke Alone make for a truly idea. What I do know is that we’ll keep writing songs. It’s all been
impressive debut, clad with danceable bops and moments of honest really fun, so we’ll see what happens next.”
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zon, and has material for two new albums—an corded songs, which weren’t about perfection, tend to get too caught up in perfection, but
instrumental covers album, featuring reggae says Krieger, but feeling. “When the Music’s the happy accidents are much more a part of
renditions of Bob Dylan’s “Mr. Tambourine Over,” from the band’s 1967 album Strange the feel.”
Man” and the Bee Gees’ 1977 hit “Stayin Days, is layered in guitars, which happened by Embracing more uninterrupted time at his
Alive,” and another R&B and jazz release to accident during a session with Rothchild and studio during the pandemic, Krieger had time
follow. engineer Bruce Botnick, who would go on to to work on the book, new music, and admits
“I do have some words for some other songs,” produce L.A. Woman. that after more than 50 years of touring, he
reveals Krieger of some additional songs he’s “In those days we didn’t have as many possi- doesn’t miss traveling. “It’s kind of nice to
written, “but I’m going to wait for the right bilities as we do now,” says Krieger. “We had have a break from that,” he says. “I’m lucky to
time and the right singer.” eight tracks at that point. I had found a sound have a studio that people really love, so I have
The release of the Doors’ 50th-anniversary that I really liked, and I wanted it to be more all these great musicians who come around all
edition of L.A. Woman, the band’s sixth and like a violin than a guitar, just really smooth. the time to jam, so it keeps me going.”
final album with Morrison in 1971, marks Paul [Rothchild] had a little electronic kit that However murky the history of the Doors
another milestone for Krieger and the band he somehow jimmied the track adding a cou- seems more than 55 years since forming,
and the reveal of a recently discovered orig- ple of layers together with the engineer Bruce Krieger hopes he can shed some light on the
inal demo of “Riders on the Storm”—an un- Botnick, and they got this perfect sound.” cloudier stories and legends of the band, for
marked tape reel unearthed from the band’s After overdubbing a long guitar solo he had diehard and younger fans.
vault of an earlier recording of the tracks in the middle of the song with three of four “It always surprises me how many young
during Sunset Sound Studios sessions with different recordings, Krieger listened back in people are into the doors,” says Krieger, think-
producer Paul A. Rothchild—along with the the control room with Botnick, who had ac- ing of the band’s lasting legacy and a friend’s
previously unreleased reels of “The Change- cidentally left two of the solos on the track, 7-year-old, who has learned most of the Doors
ling,” “Love Her Madly,” and “L.A. Woman,” which they decided on the final recording. guitar licks. “Kids today just love it. It shows
as well as “Riders.” “It’s very rare when you get your perfect me that we really did touch a core not just
L.A. Woman was a prime example of The sound,” says Krieger. “It just so happened that with people of our generation, but it will keep
Doors fluidity together in the studio, and a it worked perfectly, which doesn’t happen going for a while. When Jim passed away, I
more unorthodox approach to recording, ev- very often. There’s something to be said about thought ‘well that’s it. Nobody will care about
idenced in the rawness of many of their re- having unlimited tracks. Sometimes people the Doors anymore,’ but I was wrong.”
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Storyteller
BY KATHERINE YESKE TAYLOR
The beloved rock band kicked hood.” That list also included lots he says, “but we were always happy.
things off with “Times Like These,” of stories about Foo Fighters, as well There were times when the elec-
their 2003 hit single—and on as Grohl’s days as the drummer for tricity got shut off, or the heat or
this night, the hopeful lyrics seem the seminal grunge band Nirvana. the phone. Or my mother would say,
particularly poignant, especially As Grohl began writing, it quick- ‘Guess what’s for dinner? Scrambled
when frontman Dave Grohl sings, ly became clear that this should egg sandwiches!’ And [my sister
It’s times like these, you learn to live be more than just a series of social and I] were like, ‘Yay!’ not realizing
again. Throughout the three-hour media posts, so he ended up turning there was only six pieces of bread
show, there’s a palpable euphoria it into a book, The Storyteller: Tales and four eggs in the fridge.”
in the cavernous space, with many of Life and Music, which was pub- The other driving force, Grohl
audience members crying tears of lished on October 5 (via Dey Street says, was the music itself: “From
joy as they sing along. Books). “It was really fulfilling—I an early age, I realized that that
Two months later, during a call really got into it,” he says. “When was my lifeline, or that was my best
from his Los Angeles home, Grohl I hit ‘send’ on the last story, I got friend, and I would do anything to
reflects on what that show was like really emotional because I didn’t keep it.” He was so driven to play
for him and his bandmates. “I think want it to end. It’s the same feeling that he wasn’t even dissuaded by
that if anyone felt emotion in the as completing a song.” the fact that he couldn’t initially
audience, it was probably just a In The Storyteller, Grohl de- afford to buy a drum set. Instead,
sliver of what we felt because it was scribes how he worked his way up he drummed on pillows in his bed-
fucking amazing,” he says. “We had from being a music-obsessed high room, trying to copy what he heard
been looking forward to that for a school dropout playing in punk on his favorite albums. After he was
long, long time.” bands to becoming one of the most able to get a guitar, he taught him-
While Grohl is relieved that celebrated and influential artists self to play using a stack of Beatles
things are getting back on track, it’s of the past thirty years. Even as he songbooks. All of this was, he says,
not like he’s been idle during the tells harrowing stories from his half- a crucial learning experience for
past year and a half. “When the starved early days, when he could him.
world shut down, I thought, ‘Well, barely scrape up enough cash to “After doing that for hours and
maybe I’ll start an Instagram page live on convenience store corndogs, hours and hours every day, you
where I write [about] these outra- he makes it clear that his passion start to notice the subtleties in the
geously cool experiences that I’ve for music has never wavered. arrangements, or the shape of a
had—this will give me something Grohl credits his mother with composition, or the different types
to do because I can’t just make instilling this grit and work ethic of harmonies, and then the lyrical
lasagna every night for my kids,’” in him. “Growing up in Springfield, qualities of each song,” Grohl says.
he says. “I made a list of thirty or Virginia in a little house, with my “So just through total obsession, I
forty stories, and it ranged from mother working three jobs trying to started to form this idea of how mu-
everything from blowing up my make a public school teacher sala- sic is made or should be.”
neighborhood with fireworks to ry work as a single mother raising Grohl started writing his own
meeting Little Richard to parent- two children, we never had much,” songs when he was 11 years old.
Judges Panel:
Paul Stanley (of KISS), Julian Casablancas (of The Strokes), Vance Joy, Sean Foreman & Nathaniel Motte (of 3OH!3), Ziggy Marley, JD
Souther, Yola, Martina McBride, Taylor Momsen (of The Pretty Reckless), Michael Franti, Paul Hoffman (of Greensky Bluegrass),
Maggie Rose. Vince Herman (of Leftover Salmon), Colton Dixon, Carolyn Dawn Johnson, Kat Cunning, Josh Kelley, Meegan Voss
& Steve Jordan, Kameron Corvet, Tim Montana, Ronnie Baker Brooks, David Schulhof (CDO, LiveXLive Media), Steve Robertson
(VP A&R, Atlantic Recs), Sara Knabe (VP A&R, BBR Music Group), Lee Dannay (VP A&R, Thirty Tigers), Patch Culbertson (GM/Sr.
VP of A&R, Big Loud Records), Kyle Lee (Head of Hip-Hop and R&B Artist Relations, Fender), Blain Rhodes (GM/VP A&R, Taperoom
Music), Tracy Gershon (President, Northern Lights Music Publishing), Jonathan Stone (Co-Founder/CCO, Rocket Songs), Rob Lindquist
(Co-Founder, Songfinch), Craig Havighurst (Host, The String Podcast), John McBride (Owner, Blackbird Studios)
A FOLLOW-UP to her initial volume of archives, NO CURRENT discussion about Eric Clapton can
released in 2020, Archives Vol. 2 follows Joni keep from stumbling over the obvious elephant in
Mitchell through one of her most prolific peri- the room. It comes in the aftermath of the uproar
ods, the era leading up to her major masterpiece, about the guitar great’s anti-vaxxing commentary.
the beautiful album Blue. The box delves into the That’s not to say Clapton didn’t understand the se-
roots of those initial outings, courtesy of demos, riousness surrounding COVID and the pandemic
alternate versions, and a number of live tracks. that followed. It forced him to cancel his annual
With more than 120 of said unreleased offerings, it appearance at London’s Festival Hall, creating the
could be considered a must for any Mitchell fan. impetus to record the all-too-familiar material he
The concert settings themselves are worthy of would have performed and assemble another mod-
note, given that they shift from small club set- ified collection of his greatest hits.
A seasonal record with vibe tings to more spacious venues, including Carn- Not that he had to do any heavy lifting. With his
featuring originals, covers, and standards. egie Hall, the Paris Theatre, and the realms of reliable backing band in tow—Nathan East (bass
the mass media, including appearances on the and vocals), Steve Gadd (drums), and Chris Stain-
BBC and The Dick Cavett Show. Having the op- ton (keyboards), as well as longtime producer Russ
Peak Vinyl includes bonus dub LP portunity to hear classics like “Urge for Going,” Titelman—he already had the familiarity factor in
The Sounding Joy. “A Case of You,” “Big Yellow Taxi,” “Both Sides his favor. So too, it wasn’t like he hadn’t revisited
Now,” and “For Free” make for the album’s most much of this material before. After all, “After Mid-
satisfying soundbites, all of which find a waif-like night,” “Layla,” “Bell Bottom Blues,” and “Tears in
Mitchell imbued with confidence and creativity. Heaven,” are staples of a solo catalog that extends
Also out this holiday season: Oddly enough, the March 1968 performance at back some fifty years, much of which was similarly
Le Hibou Coffee House in Ottawa was recorded recorded acoustically in the past. The fact that he
by Jimi Hendrix, who turned out to be one of her released an actual “unplugged” album that shared
most ardent admirers. some of these same staples 25 years ago would seem
That’s not to negate the demos and outtakes, to reek of redundancy.
although much of the material that would later On the other hand, having the album offered
see release seems to have emerged fully formed in a variety of formats—DVD+CD, Blu-ray+CD,
with only minor differences between the seminal 4K UHD+Blu-ray, 3 LPs pressed on yellow vinyl,
incarnations and the finished versions. Still, that DVD+BD+CD, and a deluxe edition packaged in
does leave room for some intriguing offerings— a 40 page 12”x12” hardback photo book—provides
among them, a song called “Jesus,” recorded in a needed hint of novelty. Likewise, staging the per-
1969 at a friend’s New York apartment in Chelsea, formance in an old English manor house sans any
the locale that also inspired “Chelsea Morning,” audience other than Clapton’s wife Melia is a dis-
and a Blue outtake of interest titled “Hunter.” tinction as well. The real redeeming factor is the
Many of the offerings find Mitchell in stripped- inclusion of some classic covers (Fleetwood Mac’s
down settings, ideal and organic. “Black Magic Woman” and “Man of the World”),
A version of her singular standard “River” pro- some seminal blues standards (“Got My Mojo
vides one of the most intriguing entries, thanks to Working,” “Rock Me Baby”) along with the tracks
the inclusion of French horns. A booklet boasting he’s covered before (“Key to the Highway,” ““No-
liner notes and unseen photos from Mitchell’s ar- body Knows You When You’re Down and Out”).
chive should provide further enticement, even for Ultimately then, this is classic Clapton. A career
those needing to dig into their couch cushions as a consolidation, consider it simply a worthy revamp.
10th Anniversary Deluxe Edition means of covering the cost. — LEE ZIMMERMAN — L.Z.
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YOU MAY NOT recognize the name but it’s likely TWO YEARS AGO, the future of My Morning Jacket
Neal Casal has contributed his talents to an act was in doubt. “We didn’t know if we’d make an-
you’re familiar with. He was an integral player other record again,” admits frontman, singer/song-
in the roots/jam/indie singer/songwriter scene writer Jim James in the press notes for this self-ti-
for decades, as backing guitarist for Ryan Adams tled release. After all, the band had not been in the
(2005-09), Chris Robinson Brotherhood (2011- studio together since the 2015 sessions that yielded
19), Hard Working Americans (2013-17), and two volumes of The Waterfall, they hadn’t head-
too many others to mention. But Casal was also lined a tour in four years, both James and longtime
a prolific solo artist, releasing 14 albums during guitarist Carl Broemel had released and toured be-
a career tragically cut short by suicide in 2019. hind solo albums and James as primary songwriter
Before he left though, he touched countless lives was burned out. But after four successful 2019 con-
with a magnetic personality described as gentle, certs, the five-piece realized their chemistry was
spiritual, loving, and even incandescent. impossible to duplicate and recorded these eleven
This sprawling homage featuring 41 of his origi- songs, pre-pandemic. As usual, the music is diverse,
nal compositions by as many different artists is a la- although, with James’ uniquely keening vocals and
bor of love. His longtime manager Gary Waldman a rootsy approach anchored in Americana, MMJ’s
spearheaded the project co-produced by Wide- albums have always been unpredictable.
spread Panic’s Dave Schools. The contributors Once again, the group walks a musical tight-
are a who’s who of indie roots rock, country, and rope that includes the country-influenced, catchy,
singer/songwriters combined with a mix of less- “Least Expected,” the propulsive rock of “Penny for
er-known acts and an impressive female presence. Your Thoughts,” and the dreamy, wistful “Out of
The music sticks closely to the melodic and Range Pt.2.” The peppy “Lucky to be Alive” shifts
wistful roots folk/pop/rock that Casal careful- to a harder edge as James sings about the need to
ly shaped. Some selections burn hotter such as play live with Well they cut off all the bread that used
Warren Haynes’ nearly nine-minute “Free to Go” to keep us fed—so thanks for coming to the show.
that channels Neil Young’s wiry intensity and the Epics like the socio-political “The Devil’s in the
Allman Betts Band’s soulful, moody “Raining Details” (nine minutes) that evolves from a sweet
MAKE THE MUSIC Straight Down.” Casal was a world traveler and ballad to Broemel’s multi-tracked jazz sax break,
that informed this disc’s heartfelt title track per- and the tender, psychedelic “I Could Never Get
YOU WANT TO MAKE! formed by Steve Earle at his most sensitive. Enough” (at eight minutes) account for a quarter
Some selections are transformed substantially of the running time. They show MMJ stretching
from Casal’s recordings such as Jimmy Herring’s out without devolving into meandering noodling.
PROFESSIONAL soaring instrumental “Bird with No Name” and the The appropriately titled “Complex” combines
SONG DEMOS sweet “Day in the Sun” (from Casal’s 1995 debut)
stripped down to acoustic guitar and voice by Susan
hard and progressive rocking, moves to a searing
Broemel guitar solo, and finally distorts James’ vo-
Tedeschi and Derek Trucks. Each piece is exquisite- cal for a disorienting ending.
G R E AT P R I C E S
ly crafted to bring out the best in them and you get That last misstep notwithstanding, MMJ returns
the sense that Casal would have approved. in a big way for this comeback of sorts. There are
After the last note fades 3¼ hours after the first, enough twists to keep even longtime fans on their
TRY US ONCE & H E A R it’s impossible not to be stirred by the personal toes. It’s what makes them so consistently intrigu-
T H E DIFFERENCE! and emotional investment each performer brings. ing and will hopefully keep the members inspired,
Hopefully, this tender and often moving tribute and inspirational, for the foreseeable future.
makes others aware of his name and frustratingly — H.H.
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“THIS IS A country singer/ ONE CAN ONLY imagine the chagrin felt
songwriter record. It’s just by Rounder label bigwigs when Rob-
unapologetically me,” says ert Plant and Alison Krauss decided
Hayes Carll in the notes to not to immediately follow up their
his eighth album in a de- six-time Grammy-winning, platinum
cade. It’s a self-deprecating collaboration (2007). Those frowns
statement describing a su- have likely now turned upside down
perb set that ranks as one of as the unpredictable ex-Zeppelin
his finest. frontman and his bluegrass-based
Like John Prine, Carll musical compatriot give their unlike-
has a clever, concise style of ly partnership another go.
communicating serious con- Like the prior release, Raising Sand,
HAYES CARLL cepts, frequently through ROBERT PLANT & ALISON KRAUSS this roof-raising collection produced
dark humor, displaying RAISE THE ROOF by T Bone Burnett features some of
YOU GET IT ALL world-weary truths under- the same musicians and is predomi-
(DUALTONE) (ROUNDER)
neath wry lyrics. Better still, nantly comprised of obscure covers
he cloaks these anecdotes in dusted off and rearranged, often rad-
melodies you’ll be singing after the first spin. ically, by the vocal duo. Both are in fine form and even though they only
From the Chuck Berry/Stones-inflected rocking of “To Keep from Being sing a few leads together, there is a clear artistic connection reflected in the
Found,” where the protagonist is on the run from an ex, to “Help Me Re- song choices and performance.
member,” a heartbreaking story of an aging parent fading into dementia, The set runs from the swampy, moody, fiddle enhanced reimagining
Carll focuses on life’s struggles and complications. of folk legend Ola Belle Reed’s dark, banjo-driven “You Led Me to the
The rootsy singer/songwriter shifts to swamp rock on the sardonic Wrong” and a relatively straight-ahead version of Geeshie Wiley’s “Last
“She’ll Come Back to Me” listing oxymorons like Dolly just can’t sing and Kind Words Blues” to Plant digging into the Chess catalog for the soul
2+2 is 5 to describe the unlikelihood of his estranged wife returning. Like nugget “Searching for My Love,” originally performed by Bobbie Moore
most of Carll’s songs, it’s clever with a biting undercurrent of tragedy. & the Rhythm Aces. Some less obscure selections originally by the Ev-
Brandy Clark guests as both co-writer and the duet voice for “In the erly Brothers (“The Price of Love”) and Lucinda Williams (the Ran-
Mean Time,” a melancholy ballad of a couple that remains together even dy Weeks penned “Can’t Let Go”), find both singers harmonizing, the
though their life is crumbling. The combination of voices with Kenny latter in a slow, rockabilly interpretation that rides an organic groove.
Greenberg’s crying pedal steel is moving, reflective, and genuine. Krauss delivers an elegant, melancholy reading of Merle Haggard’s “Go-
The honesty in Carll’s gritty, everyman vocals as he sings Goddamn the ing Where the Lonely Go” as Plant enters for the heartbreaking chorus.
way I love you from the song of that name reflects the hopelessness of a Folk guitarist Bert Jansch, a strong influence on Led Zeppelin’s acous-
relationship he can’t get over even though he realizes it’s a dead end. tic musings, is revived by Krauss’ vocal on the meditative and eerily per-
Most selections are sung in the first person, imbuing them with rugged cussive “It Don’t Bother Me.” The opening version of Calexico’s “Quat-
rectitude as Carll confronts his trials with dogged determination and dry, tro (World Drifts In)” infuses shadowy global beats as both singers join to
sometimes pitch-black wit. It makes the listener root for him as they would tackle the spiritual lyrics. It may have taken 14 years to arrive, but Raise
a friend relating his challenges in often comical ways, encouraging you to the Roof is another gem from the Plant/Krauss/Burnett team. It’s surely
confront yours in a similar fashion. — H.H. as powerful as, and possibly better than, the twosome’s impressive debut.
Hopefully, we won’t have to wait as long for the next one. — H.H.
(Chorus)
What was your inspiration for writing “Don’t Waste the Rain”?
The ability to control life and death is a very powerful thing, and the respon-
sibility that comes with making such decisions is immense. This went through
my mind as I read a newspaper article last year that detailed the plight of a small
hospital in rural Louisiana. Located in an area where COVID was taking an in-
credible toll on the population, the hospital found itself in a position where it had
too few ventilators for the number of critically ill patients who needed to be on
a ventilator. The doctors at this hospital found themselves with the unenviable
task of determining which patients stood the best chance of living if placed on And let’s not forget talented musicians like Trey Hensley and Molly Tuttle, who
a ventilator, and those patients who would simply live or die based on their sheer are lighting up the Bluegrass and alt-folk worlds.
will to survive.
For this song, I chose to explore the topic from the perspective of an older pa- How do you find time to write amid life’s many demands?
tient and how they may have responded to the situation. Would they forego treat- A couple of years ago I was fortunate enough to write with singer-songwriter/pro-
ment on a ventilator to allow a younger person the chance to live? The story is ducer Will Kimbrough. Will said, “Make music every day.” It’s a phrase he repeats
told through that of an aging oak tree that has lived a long productive life. Like every so often on his social media feeds and I live by those words no matter how
any forest, the bigger, older trees must come down, to allow sunlight and rain to busy I am. One time I came up with a chorus while my car was going through
reach the younger trees. the carwash. Another time I wrote a verse as I sat in a waiting room. There is no
substitute for time spent writing, creating melodies, or even just coming up with a
Have you written music for this lyric? If so, how would you describe it? good title. I believe the more you write, the better songwriter you become, so keep
I didn’t write music for these lyrics but did have a basic melody for the verses and writing no matter how busy you are.
chorus. Shortly after I finished the song, a friend in East Nashville did a rough
recording (guitar-vocal) of the song for me. Though the subject matter of the song What is your idea of a perfect song?
is somewhat sad, the melody and tempo are slightly upbeat…hopeful. I don’t think there’s such a thing as a per-
fect song, but a damn good one grabs the
What keeps you motivated as a songwriter? listener with a great first line and a strong
My desire to create lyrics and melodies which lead a listener to feel some kind of melody, then keeps them there with a sto-
emotion is why I write songs. Knowing that what I write could spark a memory for ry that makes them feel something. It’s a
someone which brings them joy, makes them cry, or makes them want to sing, is song that someone listens to and wants to
what it’s all about. sing along with because they find mean-
I also find the more I learn about the craft of songwriting and the more I im- ing in it. John Gorka’s song “Love is Our
prove my skills, the more I want to use those skills to write more songs. Whether Cross to Bear” comes close.
it be a workshop, an article in American Songwriter magazine, listening to pod- Other songwriters who have definitely
casts, talking to other songwriters, they are all helping me to become a stronger helped shape who I am as a songwriter are
songwriter. Richard Thompson, John Prine, and Bri-
an Wilson. Thompson and Wilson aren’t
Are there any songwriters, artists, or events that have especially inspired you only great lyricists, but they are geniuses
lately? when it comes to music. Prine was, you
There are so many young artists and songwriters creating incredible songs right know, just John f***in‘ Prine. His phras-
now. It really is a listener’s market. I like the work of Noah Gundersen, Jaimee ing, his incredible metaphors, the way he
Harris, Tyler Childers, Lori McKenna, Billie Eilish, Margo Price, John Moreland, drew you into the songs he wrote, made
Phoebe Bridgers, Ruston Kelly, Jason Isbell, Brennen Leigh and so many more. listening to him so special. It still does.
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Their unique features include a built-in watt-
the fretboard make for easier guitar soloing and
age attenuator allowing super low wattage to
bending notes. Like other instruments in the
full live power. The XLR line output with the
line, the “C” neck shape helps the transition.
volume knob is an onboard direct box to pro-
Maybe it's my big hands, but it felt good under
vide a line directly to the PA system with no
my fingers—different, but good.
microphone needed. The Tone Masters are
Before we move off the neck, it’s worth
designed for easy firmware upgrades with a
mentioning that the fingerboard is made of
USB port, a light-up jewel that changes color
Pau Ferro, a South American tonewood with
to match the mode, and a ground lift. Ameri-
a smooth feel and sonic characteristics similar
can Songwriter tested one at a live gig and the
to rosewood, but lighter in color and harder.
Tone Master Super Reverb was dependable
PLAYER PLUS ELECTRIC GUITAR Fender has been using it for some years now to
and sounded great. Fender Tone Master amps
comply with CITES laws regulating how rose-
also weigh almost half of their tubed counter-
wood is traded internationally. As it turns out,
parts do. Prices start at $899 street. Leave your
When you have instruments as popular as Pau Ferro is more than just the right ecological
heavy tube amp at home and take a Tone Mas-
Fender’s Stratocaster—it’s not a stretch to use choice, it has a warm tone and snappy attack,
ter to the gig.
the word iconic—you’d want to be especial- creating a crisp, clear sound that compliments
ly careful about any changes you make to it, Stratocasters and Telecasters.
wouldn’t you? Why fix something that’s not While the 12” radius fingerboards might be
broken? Well, though clearly nothing is bro- the biggest playability change, newly-voiced
ken, the design team at Fender has managed noiseless pickups and upgraded electronics are
to engineer some changes into the company’s a feature I really appreciate. With the Player
most popular models with the launch of their Plus line, Fender designers took a hard look
new Player Plus series. I was curious, if not a at not just what sounds good, but how pickup
bit skeptical, about what Fender could add to impedances match so that switching between
or change about the Stratocaster HSS, one of pickup configurations doesn’t result in dramat-
the key instruments in that line. Here is what ic (usually unwanted) changes in volume. A
I found. unique feature of the Stratocaster HSS (don’t
First off, know that in addition to the Strato- miss this one) is that the push-pull tone knob
caster HSS, the Player Plus series updates sev- splits humbucking pickup that activates a coil-
en popular instruments that promise improve- split mode. Two additional features found at
ments in tone, playability, and style. In stores each end of the strings are locking tuners that
soon, you’ll see Player Plus versions of the icon- come standard and a two-point tremolo with
ic Stratocaster, Stratocaster HSS, Telecaster, improved block steel saddles.
Nashville Telecaster, Jazz Bass, Jazz Bass V, and The Player Plus Stratocaster HSS offers se-
Precision Bass. rious changes in feel and playability plus the
Like most guitar players, I’ve seen more than new pickups and electronics implementation,
a few Stratocasters over the years, but I was but most importantly, all this is not at the ex-
immediately struck by the visual impact of the pense of the classic Strat tone. It’s not a new
gradient finish of the Belair Blue Stratocaster instrument, but it is a logical evolution—one
The H.E. stands for harmonically enhanced and you can engage
this switch to add harmonic color to the highs in your signal. I would
have preferred a low-end harmonic switch but this is a small com-
plaint. It’s likely I’m in the minority here. The color from the H.E.
control is beautifully tuned and fairly subtle. I kept it around nine or
10 o’clock but I raised it as much as three o’clock without hearing
too much nasty harshness. There’s a handy notch filter control with
Q width for the frequency control and you can switch this in and out
as needed. It’s also channel assignable. I liked both switches around
11 o’clock on channel one (my direct signal) but I can see this being
really useful if you connect a mic on channel two and need to cut
feedback by sweeping through the offending signal.
That brings us to the main meat of this unit which is the preamp/
EQ section for both channels one and two. That’s right, separate
controls for each channel. There’s low (120hrz), low mid (590hrz),
mids (880hrz), presence (2.8khrz), and treble (10khrz). It may seem
odd to have presence before the treble but when you know exactly
what frequencies they represent it makes more sense. The EQ is ex-
tremely well-designed and musical and super easy to dial in a great
tone for your instrument. My preferred settings for my direct signal
were low at two o’clock, low mid at one o’clock, mids at 11:30, pres-
ence at eight o’clock, and treble at 10 o’clock.
There’s individual gain for each channel, phantom power for the
XLR input and each channel has a customization switch for violin,
guitar, and bass. Oh and there’s a 1/8" aux input jack for iPods or
what have you for in-between set music or prerecorded accompani-
ment. Seems like they thought of everything!
Additionally, there’s a threaded mic post on the bottom of the
EDB-2 H.E. in case you want to have it on a mic stand next to you
while you play for minor adjustments during your set. Personally, I
Headway New Acoustic kept it on the floor since I was running other pedals in the effects
loop but I can see how having it that close could make your gig life
much easier.
Preamp/Blender Honestly, I almost forgot I was playing directly while using the
EDB-2 H.E. When I combined it with a microphone I could have
easily recorded with it and no one would have been the wiser. I
tried my James May passive tri-contact mic pickup system, my LR
By Ed Pettersen Baggs under saddle active pickup, and I even pulled out my old-
est guitar with a Fishman Rare Earth magnetic pickup and ran all
three through the EDB-2 H.E. vigorously. The only real changes I
Have you struggled endlessly to get a great direct acoustic sound at made were slight EQ and level adjustments. No matter which mic I
gigs? Do you combine under saddle pickups with microphones? Do ran through it, I was able to easily get great results fast. The phan-
you want more hands-on control of your signal? Maybe the fine folks tom power worked beautifully with a large-diaphragm condenser
at Headway heard your pleas and developed the EDB-2 H.E. just for mic. Blending between the direct injection signal on channel one
you. and the mic on channel two was actually fun. No matter where I
In essence, the EDB-2 H.E. is a preamp/blender designed specifi- placed the mic I got great responses. Frankly, the DI signal was so
cally for acoustic guitar, double bass, violin, and any other acoustic good I could forgo the mic if I didn’t have one around or wanted to
instrument that employs an onboard pickup, but it is much more simplify my set up and I wouldn’t feel like I was sacrificing much.
than that. Being able to run my effects in the loop was so freaking cool I
Let’s start with the basics. There’s an XLR output that can be got lost for hours. I don’t know if you could ask for more from any
switched between output 1, output 2, or summed. There’s a 1/4" acoustic-based device. This is the latest in Headway’s evolution of
line out if you prefer to use a regular guitar cable as your output portable acoustic preamps and they have obviously listened to musi-
source. My favorite feature is the send and return jacks so you can cian feedback as well as not resting on their laurels and continuing
insert any effects or devices you already own into the signal chain. to push the envelope. I’ve heard several well-known acoustic groups
So handy and thoughtful. There’s a reverse polarity switch per chan- use their units and after playing with it a few days that’s no shock to
nel (nice!), an on/off switch, and an earth/lift switch for the XLR me. At around $349 street Headway’s EDB-2 H.E. is a no-brainer.
output.
INDEPENDENTS
ing a garden of hypocrisy. Gliers clearly doesn’t ing immediate accessibility and a remarkably
pull any punches. (sethglier.com) warm embrace. Ballads such as “Wish About
Her,” “Anthem 467,” “Life Behind Bars,” and
Terri Hendrix “Iceberg” share a series of wistful refrains. Or-
Pilgrim’s Progress rall makes music tailor-made for a wide audi-
(Project 5.5) ence, all the more reason why this particular
BY LEE ZIMMERMAN
Terri Hendrix has earned any number of set of songs ought to be the vehicle for his
A
accolades over the course of her more than belated breakthrough. (robertellisorrall)
nother gathering of releases by independent 30 year career, including accreditation as an
artists that deserve wider recognition. Official Texas musician and any number of Bob Schneider
other awards in her native Austin. Her latest In A Roomful of Blood
The Royal Hounds offering, Pilgrim’s Progress, shares a few of the With A Sleeping Tiger
A Whole Lot of Nothin’ many reasons why she consistently manages (Shockorama Records)
(Self-released) to collect those kudos. It’s filled with songs Winner of nearly five dozen Austin Music
The Nashville trio known as the Royal Hounds that ring with light-hearted sentiment and Awards—among them Best Album, Best
proffer a reverential rockabilly approach laced an appealing, unaffected approach that’s both Songwriter, Best Musician, and Best Male Vo-
with humor and exuberance. Lead vocalist and fresh and familiar all at the same time. The cals—he’s easily the most decorated artist in
stand-up bassist Scott Hinds adds a deliber- opening track “Me and the Moon Aren’t Austin music history. This latest album offers
ately goofy persona to the proceedings, but he Speaking” sounds like a vintage sing-along, ample evidence as to why he’s been so suc-
and his colleagues—guitarist Matheus Canteri with a charm and finesse of a singular stan- cessful. It’s a conceptual effort of sorts, an au-
and drummer Nathan Place—bring a balance dard. “Wildflowers,” “The Piney Rose,” “Blues tobiographical journey from childhood to the
to the music that gives it its push and polarity. Stay Away From Me,” and “Fisherman’s present. Yet even without delving into de-
Their new album reflects that clever construct Blues” ring with the same resiliency. Hendrix tails, the songs ring with resiliency that aims
while also allowing them to venture further surveys the songs of others—Kris Kristoffer- for universal appeal. The decidedly subdued
than their narrow confines of previous efforts. son, John Prine, Bob Wills, Randy Newman, “Lord of the Flies,” “The Band Plays On,” and
“Cheap Drunk” is a sturdy rocker that’s far and Cindy Walker, among them—but it’s her “Small Dreams” contrast in tone and tempo
more frenzied than most of the music they’ve cheery delivery and down-home designs that with the upbeat exhilaration of “I’m A Man,”
shared before. “I Just Can’t Two Step” finds allow her to make them her own. Venerable “The Sun’s Coming,” and “The World Turns
them regaling in a vintage down-home sound pedal steel player Lloyd Maines lends support Blue,” but the music manages to remain con-
that’s charmingly tied to a tongue-in-cheek. behind the boards and in the studio on mul- sistently compelling throughout. Schneider’s
“Door #3” and “Corn Fritters” put their instru- tiple instruments, ensuring that comfort and ranking in the top tier of today’s current crop
mental prowess front and center, while “In the caress receive the same emphasis as always. of singer/songwriters is still assured. This is,
Rickety Pines” shares a frenzied tempo and vo- (terrihendrix.com) after all, an excellent album.
cals of a call and response variety. Their most (bobschneider.com)
diverse effort to date, A Whole Lot of Nothin’ Robert Ellis Orrall
serves up plenty of something. 467 Surf and Gun Club
(theroyalhounds.com) (Fixation Records)
Despite his reputation as
Seth Glier a hitmaker, label entre-
The Coronation preneur, and prime mover
(MPress) in Nashville’s indie scene,
Seth Glier isn’t your typical singer/songwriter. Robert Ellis Orrall remains a
Other than the fact that he’s a constant road well-kept secret, even after a
warrior who would play up to 200 shows a year career that spans several de-
prior to the pandemic. He’s also an outspoken cades. Consequently, having
advocate for autism awareness. While earlier written several chart-top-
albums leaned toward a more acoustic stance, pers for other artists and re-
The Coronation integrates elements of rock, corded 14 albums of his own,
pop, folk, electronic, and even some hip-hop it’s long past time he got his
to create a stirring sensual experience. The due. Fortunately, his new
swirling take on Joan Osborne’s signature album, 467 Surf and Gun
song “One of Us” offers but one example, but Club may be the record that
other tracks such as “A Gift,” “Poison on the does just that. An homage
Roots” and “Breathing It Back” further re- to neighborhood environs,
flect the outer realms of Glier’s ingenuity and it’s filled with any number
imagination. So too, with themes that focus of sunny songs, all imbued
on narrowing the social divide, promoting with the perquisite hooks,
tolerance, and sharing a positive perspective ready refrains, and melodies
in general, Glier’s gift finds its full focus. Since once considered radio-ready.
the dawn of time, it’s been going down, Glier “Morning Song,” “Here in
MEASURE
hits, “Love Me Do” is
based on a three-note
hook, an idea that dates
way back. See “Three
Blind Mice” (16th cen-
Three-Note Magic tury), Holborne’s “Fairy
Round” (17th century),
S
“Clair de Lune” (19th
ome hit songs—“Louie Louie,” “Whole century), and “Black
Lotta Love,” “Bad Guy,” for example— Hole Sun” (20th centu-
aim to induce dance fever via a heavy ry). It keeps on truckin’
beat and a whole lotta repetition. At today in “Everlong” by
the opposite end of the spectrum, we find “Yes- the Foo Fighters, coming
terday” or “Beyond The Sea,” songs that favor up momentarily.
melody over beat. Unfortunately, while “melody Relax and tune in on
versus beat” is grounds for a debate over person- the title hooks in the
al preferences, it fails as an engineering concept. playlist below. Note the
As songwriters, we can’t help but hanker for ease of remembering a
something a little more nuts-and-bolts. three-note hook. No-
The hook—that catchy, thematic combo of tice how you can feel it
words and melody that typically contains the coming, which sets up a
title of the song—has engineering appeal. De- pleasurable cycle of an-
pending on how much variation you apply to ticipation and reward.
the hook, you can cook up anything from “My Finally, notice how the
Sharona” (lots of repetition, little variation) to hook helps structure the
“Yesterday” (lots of variation). song. The hook—plus its promise of the three-note hook to come. “Red
“Variation” means altering one or more char- repetitions and variations—are like bolts. Ev- Red Wine” has a contrast-y tagline, goes to my
acteristics of the hook, yielding offspring such as erything else is a way to bridge the gaps between head. “Stand By Me” has “Dar-lin’, dar-lin’”
“identical melody, different words,” or “identical the bolts: (2+2). The first two verses of “Rhiannon” are
rhythm, different notes.” Each variation elicits “Tea For Two,” “Blue Suede Shoes,” “Stand variations on the title hook.
a different emotional response. In the timeless By Me,” “Brown Eyed Girl,” “I Got You (I Feel “Everlong,” by the Foo Fighters, straddles the
playground of the subconscious, variations over- Good),” “Song Sung Blue,” “Red Red Wine,” spectrum from heavy beat to sophisticated mel-
lay each other like “musical rhymes,” forming “Peggy Sue,” “Rhiannon,” “Yesterday” (note the ody. The song is a struggle between a joyful two-
complex webs of feeling that differ with each brilliant melodic rhyme between “Yes-ter-day” note hook and a dark three-note hook against
listening. and “far a-way”). a headbanging rhythm. The joyful hook, “La-
Where pure repetition leads toward ecstasy, Will any three notes do? Technically, yes. Sol,” enters on “Hel-lo.” The dark three-note
musical rhyme leads toward vividly personal ex- But better to keep it simple. The spirited cho- hook, “Do-Ti-La,” enters on “e – ver – long.”
periences. This is what people mean when they rus of “Wa-ter-loo,” for example, is “La-La-Sol.” The message, underscored by meaningful melo-
say a song is “timeless.” It’s not just nostalgia— That’s it, yet BBC viewers chose “Waterloo” as dy, is that love brings joy but cannot last forev-
it’s the magic of musical rhyme. the greatest Eurovision song of er. The argument continues in variations: Down
Skillful use of variation is how The secret all time in 2020. The secret has with me is a “Do-Ti-La” rhyme. “I throw my – self
to get it. to do with melodic words, small in – to” mixes both hooks and arrives on the
Take the Beatles’ first No. 1 has to do with groups of tones with clear emo- uncertain tone “Re.” No wonder “Everlong” was
hit in the U.S., “Love Me Do”
(1964). The hook repeats five
melodic words, tional connotations. “La-Sol”
has been the melodic word for
arranged for a string quartet.
times in the first verse. Was rep- small groups “joy” since the time of Queen Creative Challenge
etition alone enough to bring Elizabeth, as shown in the joyful Three-note hooks are clearly recyclable. “One
on Beatlemania? No. The hook of tones with opening riff of Dowland’s “My Fine Day,” for example, is “Sol – La – Sol.” Steal
is catchy, so the repetition is clear emotional Lady Hunsdon’s Puffe”: “Do- a three-note hook and write yourself a song.
delightful, but each repetition Sol-Sol-La-Sol.” We will hear
is slightly varied: 1.) Love, Love connotations. “La-Sol” again in “Everlong.” Outro
Me Do, (the hook); 2.) You But first, “Waterloo” has one In Solfa singing, syllables stand for scale tones.
know I love you, (same melody, rhyming lyric); more lesson to teach us. “Joy To The World” makes a perfect textbook:
3.) I’ll al – ways be true, (same melody, rhyming Nowhere in the first 18 bars of “Waterloo” do “Do – Ti – La – Sol – Fa – Mi – Re – Do.” “Over
lyric); 4.) So please... Love Me Do, (same lyric, we find a three-note hook. Instead, we hear two- The Rainbow”? Sing “Do – Do – Ti – Sol – La
melodic rhyme) 5.) Oh, Love Me Do (same lyr- note hooks on My, my and Oh yeah and some – Ti – Do.”
ic, bluesy melodic rhyme). Each repetition has a sinewy rising and falling lines that build toward
slightly different feel, which triggers an experi- the climactic chorus. Hooks are often accompa- DAVID ALZOFON is a former editor for Guitar Player magazine and the
ence greater than the sum of its parts—in short, nied by contrasting material like this. The two- author of two books, most recently, Compose Yourself!: Songwriting
And Creative Musicianship in Four Easy Lessons. He teaches guitar in
magic. note hooks, for example, are pregnant with the San Diego, California.
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LYRICALLY
BY PAT PAT T I S O N
SPEAKING
“Places We Won’t Walk” Part 2: Sonics
Say verse two aloud. Feel how the long-i opens
you up, makes the lights brighter, the build-
ings taller, and the party lively. The quality of
Though r modifies the vowels in floor and
shore, the aw sound is still present, creating
a hint of an aaaa balanced rhyme scheme. It
the open ah sound (the way it’s formed in the makes this verse the least unstable section in
mouth) actually has an effect on the scene. the song. (Even if the impact of the r creates
W
Maybe call it sonic prosody. Special kudos to an abba rhyme motion, it’s still the only sec-
ords have more than meanings. Words line two: tion in the song where each end-line rhyme
have sounds, and the sounds themselves connects with another end-line rhyme.) Note
can be arranged to create motion, and Buildings grow to dizzy heights. the bonding of decorate/waves/places, further
thus e-motion. Sounds affect language, stabilizing the section. And
rhythm, and melody. They fill in the scaffold-
ing of structure with a whole collection of col-
The back-vowel (lip vowel) Words have notice stroke giving won’t a lit-
in grow takes us to the son- tle boost too. Though the short
ors and nuance. They can highlight ideas. They ic basement, then moves sounds, and fourth line still does its de-sta-
also, as we'll see, can affect the balance and sta- to the front vowel (tongue bilizing work, the sonic fabric
bility of a section. vowel) short-i in dizzy before
the sounds feels the most solid, adding a
We’ll look primarily at the vowel sounds in
Bruno Major’s “Places We Won’t Walk,” both
exploding into the ah of the themselves can “that’s the way it is” air of final-
word heights. Say the line. ity to the refrain, preparing for
their arrangements and their qualities. Vow- Feel it rise. be arranged to the final “Yes, alas…” chorus.
els dominate songs because they’re the tone
generators of language; we hold them out, not
Now feel the contrast be-
tween the brightness of the
create motion, This is where the hammer
falls. Isolation from each oth-
consonants. That’s not to ignore that there’s a city’s vowel sounds and the and thus er is inescapable. The first two
real banquet of alliteration in this lyric, even sounds of the refrain: In plac- words of the chorus take on a
in the w’s of the refrain. There’s a lot going on es we won't walk.
e-motion. deeper color:
sonically here. Listen to verse one: Less color in these front
vowels and the darker aw sound in walk. You Children cry and laugh and play
Sunlight dances off the leaves, a can hear the comedown, the disappointment. Slowly hair will turn to gray
Birds of red colour the trees, a The chorus’ long-a end-rhyme targets place We will smile to end each day
Flowers filled with buzzing bees, a in the refrain. In places we won't walk
In places we won't walk. x
Children cry and laugh and play Now hair turns gray, fading without the oth-
Verse one rhymes the long-e sound in the first Slowly hair will turn to gray er’s presence, slowed down and diminished by
three lines. Since we’re expecting a fourth We will smile to end each day the r’s in hair and turn, and consigned to the
line long-e rhyme– expecting to hear the In places we won't walk darkness of the back vowel in turn. Alas, in-
sound again when we hear the second stressed deed.
syllable of the refrain line: In places we won't The sonic spotlight enhances the first meta-
walk phorical use of the refrain (see last issue). A *****
We gets a little added emphasis, gets a little life span is a place only metaphorically. We’ve spent two issues on three aspects of
spotlight. It’s a targeting technique– choosing Long-a is a diphthong, made up of short-e this song. How much of what we’ve seen was
rhyme sounds to spotlight a word in your title and long-e: eh, ee. Say it aloud, very slowly. intentional, and how much either instinctual
or refrain. Not saying Bruno Major did that Now watch that pattern repeat in the last two or accidental? Hard to know without inside
intentionally. But he could have. lines: information from the writer, but it really
Verse two uses the long-i sound, and not doesn’t matter. The more interesting question
only in the end-lines: We will smile to [end each] [day] is “How much of it could be intentional?” How
Neon lights shine bold and bright In [plac][es we] won't walk much of the structure and sonics could have
Buildings grow to dizzy heights been consciously chosen, intended to support
People come alive at night The repetition casts additional spotlights on the main message and metaphor of the song?
In places we won't walk both place and we. More importantly, it iso- Even more to the point, how much of the
lates the vowel sounds in won't walk, high- song you’re writing is intentional, and how
Long-i is a diphthong, ah as in father, and lighting them by contrast! Additionally, the much “just happens?”
short-i, ah being our most open sound. It’s repetition of the eh, ee sound four times cre- As usual, information is king. You can’t
right at the point of the vowel triangle: ates something like a sonic cadence, stopping compose with something you didn’t realize
a little short, further isolating won’t walk. was there. Another good reason to study and
Verse three rhymes the end of the refrain, learn
walk:
BETWEEN
THE RHYMES
Writing Lyrics An Artist Would Sing
M
any times when I’m mentoring SongTown
songwriters, I come across a truly great
song that no one is ever likely to record.
For a multitude of reasons, it’s possible to
write something awesome that artists just aren’t
willing to sing. I’m going to explain some of the
top “cut killers” in this article to help you learn
to avoid those mistakes and start writing lyrics
an artist would sing.
The most common issue I come across is that
a lyric that makes the singer look bad. Most art-
ists aren’t going to sing a song about cheating on
their spouses. If they sing a song like that, every
girl in the audience who has been cheated on
instantly hates them because they remind her
of her scumbag ex. Artists are hyper-conscious
of the way a song will make them look to their
audience. Ninety-nine point nine percent of the
time, an artist is going to stay “on brand.” They puts down or hurts anyone in the family. Addi- Bruno Mars and my song talks about the sing-
are going to sing songs that reflect an accurate tionally, most spouses of artists don’t want their er working on an assembly line, I’m asking the
picture of who their fans think they are. Artists significant other singing about being a cheater audience to forget who Bruno Mars really is
also don’t want their audience thinking they are because that opens the door for eager groupies and pretend along with him that he’s working
cheating scumbags. or fans to try to get that to happen. If you’re try- in a factory. Most audiences aren’t going to be
A related issue—less common but likely even ing to write commercially, you have to be super willing to go along with that. They would likely
more deadly—is a lyric that makes an artist’s aware of the implications your lyric could have be saying to their friends, “Does he really think
family member look bad. Early in my career, on the family members of the artist. we’re going to believe this?” Fans know who the
I wrote a great song called “The Shadow of a The third big reason songs are often “written artist is. They likely paid big bucks to come to
Man.” It was a story about the singer as a teen- for no one to sing” is that they don’t have a big the show and this person is a superstar to them.
ager seeing his father sneaking into the house enough idea. I heard a great song one time about We have to keep that in mind if we want an
across the street. He sees the shadows of his barbecue. It was really well written, but it was artist to sing our songs.
father embracing the woman who lives there such a niche topic that it’s unlikely to get re- Don’t ask the audience to suspend reality too
through the curtains. The son loses all respect corded. It went into all of the different kinds of often or in a big way. Like we talked about ear-
for his father and the dad becomes a “shadow of rubs and super detailed information that you’d lier, you have to stay “on brand” for your artist
a man” to him. When I turned it in, my pub- likely only know if you were on the competitive and that includes writing lyrics that sound genu-
lisher said, “This is the best song I’ve heard that barbecue circuit. ine and honest coming out of the artist’s mouth.
will never get cut.” I was so disappointed and Artists are usually looking for songs with The highest compliment you can be paid as a
asked him why. really wide appeal. They don’t want to sing a commercial songwriter is to have an artist’s fans
He explained to me that if Luke Bryan cut
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song that only 10 people in their audience care think that the artist wrote the song. When that
that song, lots of people would think it was true. about. They want to find bigger, broader ideas happens, you know you’ve done your job well.
They would believe that his dad actually cheat- that EVERYONE in the crowd can relate to. Pay attention to those “cut killers” and you
ed on Luke’s mom. Everywhere they went in That’s why so many songs are about life, love, can improve your chances of writing a song an
their little hometown, people would be thinking and loss. We have all experienced those things artist would sing.
or asking, “Did you really cheat on her?” or “I so we can relate. We haven’t all competed in the Until next time, write on!
can’t believe you stayed with him after he cheat- barbecue world.
ed!” Luke isn’t going to do that to his parents. When you are trying to write lyrics an artist
It’s just not going to happen. An artist is never would sing, you want to be sure that the idea MARTY DODSON is a seven-time, No. 1 hit songwriter who has had
going to record a song that hurts their spouse or appeals to everyone, or almost everyone, in the songs recorded in country, rock, pop, bluegrass, K-Pop, J-Pop and
any other family member. Many artists let their audience that the artist sings to. musical theatre. His greatest songwriting achievement is knocking
Psy out of the #1 spot in South Korea with his song “Bounce”. He
spouses help them pick the songs they record, Finally, another “cut killer” is asking too co-founded SongTown, the world’s leading songwriter education
site, with fellow hit writer Clay Mills and is passionate about teach-
so you’re going to get a sure veto if the song much of the audience. If I’m writing a song for ing people to write better songs.
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BEHIND THE SONG
“AMERICAN KIDS”
Written by Shane McAnally, Rodney Clawson & Luke Laird
Performed by Kenny Chesney
BY JOE VITAGLIANO
needed that. Then we came up my success. And as luck would lieu of this one was ‘Girl Crush,’” McAnally
with a title—‘American Kids’—but that didn’t have it, before he even finished listening to said. “We joke about that all the time—‘Amer-
mean anything without that chorus line but- the song, he was turning to me saying ‘This is ican Kids’ was nominated for Song of the Year
toning everything up, which I love.” it! This is the song!’ By the time we landed, at the CMAs, the ACM Awards, and the
In that session, “American Kids” was official- though, I was freaking out, so I told him that Grammys, but all three went to ‘Girl Crush.’
ly born, but it still took some time before it end- it was on hold.” So, let’s be honest, it kinda worked out best for
ed up with its eventual owner, Kenny Chesney. But that didn’t deter Chesney for one mo- everyone!”
L
et me take you back to the beginning of
our song. Kevin [Bacon] and I were both
at our apartments in Manhattan. His two
kids were in school there, and my son was
in his second day of college up-state. We hear
lots of comments about “didn’t hit me at first”
or “didn’t seem real.” But, it became real for
me when returning to my apartment building
on the Upper West Side a week after 9/11—
there was a yellow ribbon on the front door.
I knew it had to be for the young NYFD fire-
fighter who lived in our building.
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