Critical Evaluation For Improvement

Comp 3

What Needs to be Good Change Add Notes

Improved (BAD)
First Shots (10s) Unstable Flighting after 10-15s gets Clutter on desk in Shot 1 Establishing shot with a J and Tone down volume of
better L cut. keyboard if continuing with
that

Lighting too warm + bad Stable camera shots after Allow for more headroom so Plan Transitions instead of Avoid lights too close to the
shadows 30s 10-15s head not cut off (Camera) constant Jump cuts. subject

Drastic change in lighting from Script. Start inside office Plan Angles for each character
Warm to cool

Lack Of audio consistency + How aberrations interact with More mobile shots. I.e orbiting
Aircon him and each other (consider around the head.
one or two)

Lack of continuity Voice over for certain parts.

Cuts too Early (edit error)

Voice over unclear mixes to

much (Edit +film error

Choice of sound effects (edit

error)