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    Women still face inequality in the workplace and home. Studies show that women have fewer job opportunities than men and are underrepresented in leadership positions. Additionally, traditional gender roles often assign household chores like cooking and cleaning to women while men remain seated after meals. However, the situation has begun to slowly change for the better in recent years, though much work remains to be done to fully resolve issues of gender inequality. Future generations may continue to see further positive changes.

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    Women still face inequality in the workplace and home. Studies show that women have fewer job opportunities than men and are underrepresented in leadership positions. Additionally, traditional gender roles often assign household chores like cooking and cleaning to women while men remain seated after meals. However, the situation has begun to slowly change for the better in recent years, though much work remains to be done to fully resolve issues of gender inequality. Future generations may continue to see further positive changes.

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    Women still face inequality in the workplace and home. Studies show that women have fewer job opportunities than men and are underrepresented in leadership positions. Additionally, traditional gender roles often assign household chores like cooking and cleaning to women while men remain seated after meals. However, the situation has begun to slowly change for the better in recent years, though much work remains to be done to fully resolve issues of gender inequality. Future generations may continue to see further positive changes.

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    Essay about women international´s day

    It is widely known that... S


    It is a fact that there´s an inequiality problem
    related to women and men.

    Firstly, It has been proven by studies that women


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    have less work oportunities than men and the
    most important job positions are occupied by
    them. For example, ...
    Secondly,/ Addiotionally...
    Another place where inequality can be seen is
    the household chores. That is not my case
    because in my house we all do the same things
    in the same proportions but that does not
    happen in every home. We take for granted
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    that women most do the dishes after meals
    while most men tend to remain seated at the
    table.
    What about your own idea?
    To conclude
    I think that each passing year things are
    starting to change for the better but there´s a
    lot of work to do. There´re many years ahead
    for the problems of inequility to be resolved
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    but in my opinión the future generetions are
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    going to see that changes.
    FEEDBACK: Hi Betha! I can tell you will nail essays. If this is your first attempt, I can´t wait to see
    what you will be capable of achieving. You made an excellent use of PASSIVE VOICE sentences.
    Well done there!
    Here are some tips for you;
    CONTENT: 3 12/20
    1) Never use contractions (see red circles) LANGUAGE:3
    2) Never make self-reference (my, we, etc)
    ORGANISATION:3
    3)Use examples to illustrate your point.
    4) Always use a topic phrase at the beginning of each paragraph (To start with, On the other hand, COM.ACH:3
    Last but not least, However, etc)
    5) Don´t forget to include your own idea.

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