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Question 2:
A)
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Freehold covenants (FCs) are promises made between freehold landowners, which may
require one to do something or refrain from doing something on their land.1 For the current
FC to be binding on Oti, its burden must run with the farmland located beneath Garden
Cottage (GC). Therefore, Oti must be aware of the common law and equitable rules on
passing the burden of an FC. Passing the burden of restrictive and positive covenants is not
possible at common-law,2 although in equity the burden of restrictive covenants can run with
the land.3 It is therefore more preferable for Oti to follow the equitable rules on passing the
burden of an FC. Tulk v Moxhay4 has compartmentalised the equitable rules into five steps.
covenants limit what a landowner can do with their land (i.e. use land only for residential
with their land (i.e. maintaining communal areas).6 Justifications for the allowance of the
burden of a restrictive covenant to be passed in equity include that it allows for the covenantor
(covenant creator) of the servient land to be unable to actively breach the FC. 7 The covenant
made between Emily and Lisa, restricted how Emily was to use GC. Emily was not permitted
to use GC as a public residence for multiple families. Therefore, it can be said that Emily’s
covenant is restrictive.
1
Chris Bevan, Land Law (2nd edn, OUP 2020) 457
2
Austerberry v Corporation of Oldham (1885) 29 Ch D 750, [1885] 5 WLUK 19
3
Ibid, 773 (Cotton LJ)
4
Tulk v Moxhay (1848) 41 ER 1143, (1848) 2 Ph 774
5
Crest Nicholson Residential (South) Ltd v McAllister [2004] EWCA Civ 410, [2004] 1 WLR 2409
6
Thamesmead Town Ltd v Allotey (1998) 30 HLR 1052 (CA)
7
n1, 481
4
Secondly, the covenant must ‘touch and concern’ the land of the original covenantee.8 In P &
A Swifts Investments9 a three-limb test was devised in order to meet this requirement. The FC
must benefit the freeholder of the land, it must affect the nature, quality or value of the land;
and must not be expressed to be personal to the covenantee.10 As a single family would not
cause too much noise pollution or mess to the surrounding farmland, the covenant thus has
beneficial properties to the landowner (Lisa). This same line of reasoning can be said to have
a positive effect on the quality and aesthetic of the farmland. Finally, there is no express
wording of the covenant being made personal to Lisa. As the three-limb test has been met, the
Thirdly, there must be land capable of benefiting from the FC. To satisfy this step, the
dominant tenement ((DT) land benefiting from the FC) must be clearly identifiable; the
covenantee must have either owned or had an equitable interest in the DT at the time the FC
was formed; and the covenant must have been granted to benefit the DT. 11 Albeit the facts
lack a thorough description of the farmland; they do explain that it consists of two adjacent
farmhouses (one being smaller with a large garden) and thus so it is reasonably identifiable.
Evidently at the time the FC was made, Lisa was the legal freeholder to the farmland. Finally,
it can be inferred that the restriction of one family living in GC helps to maintain the
appearance and real estate value of the farmland. Therefore, the farmland is capable of
8
Rogers v Hosegood [1900] 2 Ch 388, [1900] 7 WLUK 14
9
P & A Swifts Investments v Combined English Store Group Plc [1989] AC 632, [1988] 3 WLR 313
10
Ibid, 633 (Lord Oliver)
11
n1, 483; London & South Western Railway Co v Gomm (1882) 20 Ch D 562, [1882] 3 WLUK 13
Next, there must have been an intention for the FC to run with the servient land. This
intention expressed, s79(1) of the Law of Property Act (LPA) 192512 will provide a safety-net.
Unless contrary evidence is presented, s79(1)13 provides a presumption that the covenanting
parties intended for the FC to run with the land to their future successors. 14 As no words
exclude the use of s79(1) in the deed, it is presumed that Emily intended for the burden to run
As the servient land (GC) is registered, the covenant must comply with the relevant
registration and notice requirements under the Land Registration Act (LRA) 2002.15 Sections
28(1) and 28(2) LRA 2002 ensures that the FC remains of priority, so long as it was made
‘first in time’ ahead of other interests.16 However, s29 LRA 2002 provides an exception to
those provisions. According to s29, if the successor in title to the covenantor has purchased
land for valuable consideration and notice of the covenant has been entered onto the Land
Registry, the FC will still take priority over any unprotected interests.17 However, if no notice
of the covenant has been entered onto the register, it will not be binding on the new purchaser
The facts fail to mention whether Emily’s covenant was made ahead of any other interests
relating to GC, so it is uncertain if s2819 would apply. Moreover, more information is needed
12
Law of Property Act 1925, s 79(1)
13
Ibid
14
Re Royal Victoria Pavilion (Ramsgate) [1961] Ch 581, [1961] 3 WLR 491
15
Land Registration Act 2002
16
Ibid, ss 28(1) and s28(2)
17
n15, s 29(1)
18
n15, s 29(2)(a)(i)
19
n15
as to whether notice of the covenant has been entered onto the Land Registry. So, Oti must go
to her local Land Registry office to see if notice of GC’s covenant has been enlisted on the
register. If it has, then she is bound by the covenant but if not enlisted, she is not bound by it.
by the covenant, as not enough information has been given about whether notice of the FC
B)
beneficiary is specified. Secret trusts such as HSTs need not comply with the Wills Act (WA)
183720 as they operate ‘dehors’ (outside) of wills; although academics argue the support for
this line of reasoning is not convincing.21 To determine the validity of ‘clause (b)’, Gorka
must have executed a valid HST. For HSTs to be valid, Ottaway v Norman explained three
Firstly, Gorka must have intended to create a trust. Intention to create a valid HST can be
done through the three certainties of intention, subject matter and the objects of the trust. 23 For
intention, the testator should use authoritative language to show an explicit intent to create a
trust. ‘Clause (b)’ is clearly an imperative statement detailing Gorka’s demand for Oti to hold
his estate on a trust. For the subject matter, the property and the beneficial interests must be
20
Wills Act 1837
21
David Wilde, ‘Secret Trusts: Dehors the Wills Act (Not the Will)’ (2020) CPL 163
22
Ottaway v Norman [1972] Ch 698, [1972] 2 WLR 50 (Brightman J); Blackwell v Blackwell [1929] AC 318,
[1929] 67 ALR 336
23
Kasperbauer v Griffith [2000] WTLR 333 (CA) (Peter Gibson LJ); Knight v Knight (1840) 49 ER 58 (ChD)
clear. For the objects of the HST, it must be clear as to who the beneficiaries of the trust are.
‘Clause (b)’ clearly states that Gorka’s estate is the subject of the trust, whilst his letter
expresses Luba to be the object of the trust. Therefore, there is a clear intention to create an
HST.
Secondly, the trust must have been communicated to Oti. Testators must communicate their
intention to create a trust and their proposed terms regarding how the trust property is to be
held to their intended trustees.24 This communication to the trustee must take place before or
when the will is finalised.25 Most importantly, the communication to the trustee should be
consistent with the will. In Re Keen,26 the testator’s letter containing instructions on how the
money would be distributed, was ineffective as it was inconsistent with the clause in the will.
The letter was given to the trustees before the will was executed but ‘clause 5’ indicated that
Oti’s case can be distinguished from Re Keen27 as there is consistency between the
communication and ‘clause (b)’ in the will. Gorka’s communication (both parol and written)
to Oti of his intention to create a trust took place before the will was executed. This
communication corresponds with the wording of ‘clause (b)’ which states that communication
has already occurred. Therefore, Gorka has effectively communicated the trust to Oti.
24
Re Boyes (1884) 26 Ch D 531, [1884] 3 WLUK 101
25
Wills Act 1837, s 9; Iain McDonald and Anne Street, Equity & Trusts Concentrate: Law Revision and Study
Guide (7th edn, OUP 2020) 118
26
Re Keen’s Estate [1937] Ch 236, [1937] 1 All ER 452
27
Ibid
Lastly, Oti must have accepted the trust. This acceptance can be done expressly or through
trust. Therefore, it is likely that a court would follow the judicial reasoning from Moss v
Cooper28 and hold that Oti’s silence equates to acceptance of the trust; and so, the final step
needed for a valid HST has been satisfied. In conclusion, it can be said that ‘clause (b)’ is
valid as all of the requirements needed for a valid HST enlisted in Ottaway29 have been met.
Although, as the beneficiary of the HST (Luba) died thirteen months before Gorka, it is worth
noting what effect this has on Oti. According to s25 WA 1837,30 when a beneficiary pre-
deceases the testator, the trust will lapse in time (fail). Although, the common law has shown
some exceptions to this rule in Re Gardner.31 Romer J explained that when a beneficiary
under an HST predeceases the testator, the trust would not fail but instead the trustee will hold
the property on a resulting trust for the beneficiary’s estate.32 Critique has surrounded Re
Gardner, particularly the illogical rationality of its decision but nevertheless it can still
apply.33 So therefore, Oti must now hold Gorka’s residual estate on trust for Luba’s estate.
28
Moss v Cooper (1861) 70 ER 782 (KBD)
29
n22
30
Wills Act 1837, s 25
31
Re Gardner [1923] 2 Ch 230, [1923] 3 WLUK 113
32
Ibid (Romer J)
33
Ho Siu, 'Keeping Secrets: A Critical Analysis of the Justifications for the Doctrine of Secret Trusts' (2015) 3
NE L Rev 75, 89
Bibliography:
Primary Sources:
Cases:
- Crest Nicholson Residential (South) Ltd v McAllister [2004] EWCA Civ 410, [2004]
1 WLR 2409
- London & South Western Railway Co v Gomm (1882) 20 Ch D 562, [1882] 3 WLUK
13
- P & A Swifts Investments v Combined English Store Group Plc [1989] AC 632,
Legislation:
- Land Registration Act 2002, s 28(1)
Secondary Sources:
Books:
- McDonald I and Street A, Equity & Trusts Concentrate: Law Revision and Study
Journal Articles:
- Siu H, 'Keeping Secrets: A Critical Analysis of the Justifications for the Doctrine of
- Wilde D, ‘Secret Trusts: Dehors the Wills Act (Not the Will)’ (2020) CPL 163