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FINDINGS
To answer the research questions, 17 essays of participants were collected and analyzed
based on Ellis and Larsen’s theories about errors and mistakes. Grammatical deviations which
were categorized as errors later were analyzed and further classified using error categorization
proposed by Betty Schampfer Azar. There are three sub-sections that subsequently present the
result of error-mistake classification, grammatical errors, grammatical mistakes, and causes of
errors and mistakes.
Table 2 showed that out of 76 grammatical deviations found in the essays, 48 were
classified as errors and 28 were classified as mistakes. The result of error-mistake classification
showed that most participants committed more errors than mistakes. There were 10 participants
that committed more errors than mistakes, 5 participants committed errors and mistakes equally,
and 2 participants committed more mistakes than errors. It means that grammatical deviations
found in the essays were mostly due to the lack of knowledge rather than performance slip.
Grammatical deviations were classified as errors because of participants’ inability to identify the
grammatical deviations, lack of the knowledge of the grammar rules, or inability to reconstruct
the sentences correctly. All of those factors were concluded through participants’ answers in the
interviews. For example, if participants could not identify the grammatical deviation in a
sentence when they were presented one, it means that they were not aware that the sentences
were grammatically incorrect. If participants could not answer questions related to grammar
rules used in the sentences, it means they did not have enough knowledge about the grammar
rules. If participants could not reconstruct their own sentences that contained grammatical
deviations, it also means they did not have the knowledge about the grammar rules and how to
write the sentences properly. The list of factors why grammatical deviations found in the
participants’ essays were classified as errors is shown in the following table
Table 3. Factors of Why Grammatical Deviations were Classified as Errors
Factors Frequenc Percentage
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Participants could not identify the grammatical deviations 37 77%
found in the sentences
Participants could not explain grammar rules used in the 8 16%
sentences (lack of knowledge about the rules)
Participants understood the rules, but are unable to 3 7%
reconstruct the sentences
Total Errors 48
From table 4, it can be perceived that the most common type of errors is run-on sentence
(22.92%). A run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses are connected
improperly (Azar, 2009). All run-on sentences found in the essays were comma splice. A comma
splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined with just a comma (Eastwood, 2002). The
example is in the sentence “When learning activities are carried out online what happens is
more of a learning process, there is no guarantee that students will get character education
from their parents as has been taught in school (P8)”. Both the first and second clauses are
independent clauses, so those two clauses cannot be separated by a comma. Those two
independent clauses must be separated by a full stop to make them two separate sentences or
joined by a conjunction/connector to make it a compound sentence. “When learning activities
are carried out online what happens is no more than a learning process. There is no guarantee
that students will get character education from their parents as has been taught in school” is
the right form. The second example is in the sentence “One example of Covid-19 effects on
education aspects is the way the students learn, the learning activity changed from face-to-face
learning to distance learning or what we often call online learning (P5)”The first and second
clause are both independent clauses, so it can’t be separated only by a comma. One of the option
that can be done to make the sentence correct is by separating them with a full stop. So, “One
example of Covid-19 effects on education aspects is the way the students learn. The learning
activity changed from face-to-face learning to distance learning or what we often call online
learning” is the correct form. Both sentences were classified as errors due to the participants’
inability to identify the errors. When they were presented those sentences, they thought that those
sentences were already grammatically correct.
The second most common errors committed by participants is word choice (20.27%).
Committing this type of errors/mistakes means that participants failed to use words that were
appropriate to the context of the sentences. The example is in the sentence “This reduced activity
causes children to be more limited (P12)”. In this sentence, the word “limited” is not really
suitable with the context. It is true that “limited” means “terbatas” in Bahasa Indonesia.
However, Limited tends to be used where the thing or person has its own limitations. Meanwhile,
the word “restricted” tends to be used where an exterior force, like an authority or rules. So, for
the context of the sentence, the word “restricted” is more suitable. “This reduced activity causes
children to be more restricted” is the correct form of the sentence. This grammatical deviation
was classified as error due to participant’s inability to explain why the sentence is grammatically
incorrect. Participant 12 could feel that something was wrong with the sentence, but unable to
give any further explanation. Another example is in the sentence. “So for those students with
this problem—bad social skills—will have to be given more attention, on their character
building, either from teacher nor parents (P9)” The word “either” is supposed to be paired with
“or” (Azar, 2009). “So for those students with this problem—bad social skills—will have to be
given more attention, on their character building, either from teacher or parents” is the correct
form. This grammatical deviation was classified as an error due to participant’s inability to
identify the error. Participant 9 stated that the sentence was already grammatically correct.
Punctuation error became the third most common errors found in participants’ essays. It
occurred 7 times (14.58%). The most common punctuation errors found in the essays were either
misplaced or missing comma. There were also some cases in which participants put a full stop
between a dependent clause and independent clause, where they were supposed to put a comma.
The example is in the sentence “Furthermore, online learning is considered a complicated
system for some students. Especially those from underprivileged families (P10)”. In this
sentence, there were a dependent clause and an independent clause that were supposed to be
separated with a comma. However, participant 11 put a full stop instead. So, “Furthermore,
online learning is considered a complicated system for some students, especially those from
underprivileged families” is the correct form of the sentence. Another example is the sentence
“Usually, when the class is offline there are some lecturers who do not let students find
answers through the internet (P12)”. There must be a comma after introductory phrase, clause,
or word (Eastwood, 2002). “Usually, when the class is offline” is an introductory phrase, so the
correct sentence would be “Usually, when the class is offline, there are some lecturers who do
not let students find answers through the internet”. Those sentences were classified as errors
because both participant 10 and participant 12 were unable to identify the errors in the sentences.
The fourth type of error, which occurred 5 times (10.42%), is omit a word. It means that a
word or more must be omitted in order to make the sentence grammatically correct. A word must
be omitted from a sentence due to various reasons, such as unnecessary repetition of words,
unnecessary pronouns, and unnecessary conjunctions. The example is in the sentence
“Nowadays, online learning is very popular in this whole entire world (P5)”. The word whole
and entire have the same meaning (Merriam-Webster's Dictionary of English Usage, 1994), so
one of them must be omitted to correct the sentence. “Nowadays, online learning is very popular
in this entire world” is the correct form. Another example is “However, because students have
to study at home, character education during this pandemic period, it feels a little neglected
(P7)”. In this sentence, pronoun “it” is unnecessary. So, the correct form is “However, because
students have to study at home, character education during this pandemic period feels a little
neglected”. Both participant 5 and participant 7 were unable to identify the grammatical
deviations, hence the deviations were classified as errors.
Verb tense errors occur when there are inappropriateness in verb tense uses that affect
meaning and clarity (Azar, 2009) Understanding the context of the sentence or even the context
of the whole passage is a must to analyze verb tense. The example is in the sentence “Although
the concept of online learning existed even in pre-pandemic times, the phenomenon has certainly
reached a completely different level and intensity in these difficult times (P2). The use of simple
past here is not correct. Simple past is used to tell an event that began and ended in the past
(Azar, 2009). Meanwhile, from the context of the sentence, it can be concluded that what the
writer wanted to say was “Pembelajaran daring sudah ada sejak sebelum pandemi”, which
means it exists until now. So, the most suitable tense is present perfect tense. Hence, the correct
form is “Although the concept of online learning has been existed even in pre-pandemic times,
the phenomenon has certainly reached a completely different level and intensity in these difficult
times”. This grammatical deviation was classified as an error because participant 2 was unable to
explain why the sentence was incorrect.
The next error is add a word. It happens when writers eliminate the important word
sentence in their sentences (Azar, 2009). There were 3 add a word errors in participant’s essays
(6.25%). The example is in the sentence “However, many people think it is not a big issue, but
the reality is not (P5)”. Participant 5 was not aware that this sentence contained grammatical
deviations, hence it was classified as an error. The second clause does not have any subject. So,
adding pronoun “it” is required to correct the sentence. “However, many people think it is not a
big issue, but the reality it is not” is the correct form. The same problem occurred in the sentence
“With the activeness of the students, makes the learning process happen well and perfectly
(P12)”. The second clause doesn’t have any subject. “With the activeness of the students, it
makes the learning process happen well and perfectly” is the correct form. Participant 12 was
aware that this sentence was grammatically incorrect, but she failed to give any explanation
about the grammar rule related to the deviation. So, it was classified as an error.
Word form error occurs when there is an incorrect form of the word in the sentence. 2
errors related to word form were found in participants’ essay (4.17%). The example is in the
sentence “Kids who are usually active to play or doing something will feel very uncomfortable
and bored (P16)”. In this sentence, the word “doing” is not supposed to be in the –ing form. It is
supposed to be parallel with the word “play” because it is connected with coordinate conjunction
“and”. So, it must be changed into an infinitive form. “Kids who are usually active to play or do
something will feel very uncomfortable and bored” is the correct form. Participant 16 was unable
to explain the grammar rule related to the deviation, hence, grammatical deviation in this
sentence was classified as an error.
Article errors occur when there is a misuse of articles or missing articles (a, an, or the).
There was 1 article error found in the essays (2.08%). It was found in the sentence “Thanks to
the development of technology, online learning provides students with access to a time and place
for education (P9)”. Article “a” and “an” cannot be used before an uncountable noun (Azar,
2009). Time is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be preceded by article “a”. “Thanks to the
development of technology, online learning provides students with access to time and place for
education” is the correct form. This grammatical deviation was classified as an error because
participant 9 was not aware that the sentence was grammatically incorrect.
The next type of error is word order with 1 error (2.08%). It was found in the sentence
“A new habit that requires a life that is completely limited will cause boredom, not even a few
high school students are stressed due to piled up boredom (P15)”. The word “not” and “even”
are not in the correct order, which makes the sentence meaningless. “A new habit that requires a
life that is completely limited will cause boredom, even not a few high school students are
stressed due to piled up boredom” is the correct form. Participant 15 thought that the sentence
was grammatically correct. So, grammatical deviation in this sentence was classified as an error.
Participants used different wording in answering the questions about the causes of their errors,
such as “I did not know that my sentence was wrong” (P3), “I thought it was correct” (P7), or “I
did not realize that I did not apply the grammar rules correctly” (P11). All of those answers can
be summed up into one cause: lack of knowledge about the grammar rules. So, it can be
concluded that all errors found in the participants’ essays were committed due to participants’
lack of knowledge about the grammar rules. This conclusion was also derived from the fact that
participants was not aware of the grammatical deviations in their own sentences and their
inability to explain the grammar rules as well as reconstruct the sentences. In the questionnaires,
participants were also asked specifically about the causes why the made ungrammatical
sentences. This finding fits to the theory proposed by Ellis (1994), Corder (1991), Richard &
Schmidt (2002), and Larsen-Freeman & Long (2014) that defines errors as grammatical
deviations committed because the writers have not mastered the grammar rules.
Meanwhile, participants gave different answers about the causes of grammatical
deviations that were classified as mistakes. The causes of mistakes committed by participants are
shown in table 6.
4. DISCUSSION
This section explores the discussion of findings that have been presented in the previous
section. There are four aspects of the findings that are discussed in this section: (1) finding
concerning the most frequent errors; (2) errors and mistakes classification; (3) participants’
inability to analyze their own errors; and (4) causes of errors and mistakes.
Conclusion
The result of this research revealed that second semester students of English Department
who took Essay Writing course still made grammatical deviations in their writings. Grammatical
deviations committed by participants were classified into errors and mistakes by using theory
proposed by Ellis (1994). The participants’ errors and mistakes were categorized into
categorization proposed by Azar (1999), namely singular-plural, word form, word choice, verb
tense, add a word, omit a word, word order, incomplete sentence, spelling, punctuation,
capitalization, article, meaning not clear, run-on sentence. It was found that the most frequent
error category was run-on sentence (13 occurrences, %) and the most frequent mistake category
was capitalization (5 occurrences, %) and punctuation (5 occurrences, %). By conducting
interviews, it was found that the causes why participants committed errors were not
understanding/misunderstanding the grammar rules and lack of ability to use grammar rules
correctly, which can be summed up into lack of knowledge of the grammar rules. Meanwhile, the
causes of mistakes committed by participants were lack of concentration caused by fatigue,
carelessness due to deadline rush, and forgetting the rules during writing