Comentario [WU1]: In EMAILS, we

don’t include this information

Dear job recruiter. Dear Sir/Madam , 1

I am writing to apply for the position of Customer Service Representative in the campus of
Liverpool.

I am interesting interested in this job position because it is/it would be a good opportunity to
improve my work experience and my English skills. I have worked in customer service for other
companies in customer service like Balay and Bosch , and the total of my experience is three Comentario [WU2]: Word order
2
years . In all of them I have worked in the international department. Comentario [WU3]:

In reference at to my students qualifications I have a B2.1 level certification issued by with the Comentario [WU4]: WHICH
LANGUAGE??????
EOI of Pontevedra recognition and also I talk can also speak Spanish and Galician.

I think I would be a good candidate BECAUSE…. and I do not have problems to move to Comentario [WU5]: YOU NEED TO
GIVE THE REASONS
Liverpool.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely, / Yours faithfully, (if you start with “Dear Sir/Madam ,”)

Xoel Estévez Alonso

1 Although expressions like “Dear recruiter, “ or “Dear Human

Resources Manager,” may be used nowadays, I recommend that in the
exam you use the traditional greetings expressions like “Dear
Sir/Madam,” or the name of the person you’re writing to “Dear Mr.
Smith,” . And with a comma at the end, not a full stop.

2 This sentence needs rephrasing:

“I have three years’ experience working in customer service for other
companies like Balay or Bosh.”

* You don’t cover all the points because you don’t say WHY you
would be a good candidate.

* You need to practise your writing skills because many sentences need
rephrasing 