In this question the key word is - "Discuss" - so it is open ended - You can break the

questions into many sub parts, Then addressing all the parts properly + giving equal
weightage will fetch you the proper marks, But adding proper examples/data along
with your points will always give that extra 1/2 marks for your answers! In Upsc exam
estioneach
U.PS.C.
No. and every mark is important.
If you already know this, you can ignore this :)
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in this margin)

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Dinadiv imúps is onads Fuuait dewnonay Diss
(250 wioey, 15m)
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Good that you
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democracy
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relevant to the
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Riat t Eduaoy Ad
Conclusion is missing - you can conclude by saying that Reading the
Preamble, Fundamental Rights and Directive Principles together
makes it clear that attainment of socio-economic justice was the
goal of the Republic
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Number of
Questions
(PAPER – II) GS - I

Overall Macro Comments (Feedback)

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Positive Feedback
Introduction is as per demand of the
question.
You have written proper points relevant
to the demand of the question, Good
You have good understanding of the
question.
Negative Feedback
Don't take it is a negative feedback!
Take it as a constructive criticism
1. While structuring your answer – Give
equal weightage to all parts of question.
i.e Examiner can’t reduce your marks
2. Practise more on innovating your
answers using flow charts.
3. Always keep in mind : Break the
questions properly and address all parts
of the question.

4. Structuring your points properly and

adding your points under relevant
subheadings gives more clarity to your
answer. Examiner will understand that
you have understood the question well.

5. Clarity of thought + content is Good.

6. Keep in mind : Try to give the

background of the issue in the
introduction, and then give a connecting
statement to the core demand of the
question and then give proper side
headings and write your points , Doing
this way will look more organized.

7. Need Holistic framework, writing your

answer in a systematic manner.
prioritize your points.

8. improve your skill of presentation of

your answer in a neat and well-arranged
manner

9. Focus more on content enrichment

Marks - 7/15

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(PAPER – II) GS - I

EVALUATION PARAMETERS
Very Good Good Average Substandard

1. Clarity of Thought

2. Context

3. Understanding on the demand of the Q

4. Introduction and Conclusion

Relevance

5. Content/Body relevance

6. Conceptual Clarity

7. Dimensionality and Interdisciplinary

Linkages

8. Examples and Illustrations

9. Presentation

10. Flow and the Structure

11. Language Competence

12. Objectivity

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