Writing an essay (2)

It is said by some that all teenagers have to own some cooking skills when
they’re at a young age. Therefore, more and more youngsters nowadays are
efforting to join in a lot of cooking class. In my viewpoint, I personally believe
that it is necessary for them to learn a lot of cookery skills, but I don’t think all
of them should spend their time achieving this field.
Concerning the first idea, there is no doubt that cooking skills have played a
really important role in everyone’s life these days, especially young teenagers.
For example, some young people have to stay at home alone in some days as
their parents have to work out during the period. As a consequence, teenagers
won’t have their mother to cook for them, so they have to do everything by
themselves instead of their parents. Thus, in this situation, they really have to be
skilled in cooking to make all the food for them.
Another point worth noting is that