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Body Paragraphs
see
Transition Word
thirdly lastly
:
First ,

next , also
secondly
,
,

another
, ,
finally
,

Sentence (TS)
Topic about
the paragraph will be
·
tells the reader what
·

comes from the

thesis
First of the benefits of school uniforms
EX :
,
one

is less classroom distractions

.

concrete Detail ()
·
from the text/sources
comes
support/prove that the Ts is true
·

helps in uniform "do

to Source 1 students
EX According ,
"

better academically and behaviorally

: .

Commentary (CM)
·

comesfrom YOU -

your explanation of the CD

·

explains how the CD supports TS

EX :
Thisis becausewheneveryonewearsthesamea
make disruptive comments about .
each other

CD
that "uniforms allow
EX : In Source I it states ,
than
students to be more focused at school rather
"
be concerned about trends .

CM

This means
that instead of looking at what their
EX : and trying to chase the trend
,
peers
are wearing
students can instead focus on classwork .

Conclusion sentence (c))

and reminds the reader what
·

wraps up the paragraph

the paragraph was about
school uniform will
EX : As a result , having a

distractions in the classroom

.
mean less