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Corrected Twara Choksi - C&C Practice 2
Corrected Twara Choksi - C&C Practice 2
Corrected Twara Choksi - C&C Practice 2
Compare Give an account of the similarities and differences between two (or more) items or situations,
and referring to both (all) of them throughout. In language and literature, this may involve finding
contrast and evaluating the significance of similarities and connections between texts and requires the
student to make a literary analysis
Glossary
brooding engaged in or showing deep thought about something that makes one sad,
angry, or worried
cogs a wheel or bar with a series of projections on its edge, which transfers motion
by engaging with projections on another wheel or bar
Read the attached excerpt and watch the attached video, to respond to the question that follows:
Source 1:
Smoke pumping into the sky,
A Gothic Skyline filled with black
Black architecture,
Dominating a brooding landscape
No individuality survives,
Everyone dressed the same, skin pale to the eye
Morbidly cold to the touch,
Mere machines
Task: Compare and contrast how the creators of both sources portray ‘disregard of individual identity’.
(AL 7-8)
Being unique is a great thing to be in todays world, where being unique is appreciated acknowledged, but
what it was the other way around? What if being your own self was a crime, what if you had to fit in and be
common, bland like others to survive? Source 1, is an excerpt which effectively describes a dystopian world
with individual identity not being accepted…Similarly, Source 2 is a video which describes a world where
there are pretties an uglies and where you have to be pretty to survive,Both the sources can be compared
and contrasted to portray the concept of ‘disregard of individual identity’ on the basis of Narrative, Tone, &
Techniques.
Source 1, has a first person point of view which has effectively showcased how disregard of individual
identity works in a dystopian worlds. For example 1st POV is used in “No place to voice my ideas,
Dangerous ideas crushed by those in control…Merely a subjugated citizen!” This is showcased effectively
by First POV as it helps the reader to understand that the author himself is facing disregard and how his
ideas are cushed by those in control, and how is identity is thrown away in such a world. On the contrary,
Source 2 has a second person point of view where in the video, on a show called Autodale, the narrator is
setting the notion in minds of kids of how the world has classified people based on their identity into
“pretties” and “uglies”. In (3:50) and throughout the whole video, the person narrating sets a standard of how
the children will be when they grow up. All in all, both the source effectively convey the idea of diregard of
individual identity but through different narratives.
The Source 1 has a dark, evil tone which convinces the audience that the world that the author lives in is
filled with darkness and that there is no hope for the ones. The lines “Blackness permeating everywhere,
Flesh providing no warmth” tell us how dark and black the world he lives in is and how the creators
individuality is crushed. SImilarly, Source 2 has an dark, imposing tone where the show/ person in autodale
is telling the children the standard they should follow to be pretty and what happens to all the uglies. In
(1:25) The narrator is showing them the landscape of uglies and setting a program in their mind of how their
future life would be also, crushing their individual identity.
Source one has used literary techniques suh as imagery to describe the setting of a gloomy, morbid,
dystopian world filled with darkness. The lines “Blackness permeating everywhere,Flesh providing no
warmth” show how dominating and brooding this world really must be. On the contrary, source 2, in
(2:17-2:27)has used symbolism by showing pictures of people lying in heaps bloodied with tags on their
head show why they are ugly like “fat, gay, divorced, etc.”. Both the sources have effectively used
techniques to show how both the dystopian worlds portray the idea of ‘disregard of individual identity’.
To sum up, both the sources showed a world where there is no regard for individual identity and where
people have to be like other people or be “pretty” to survive. Both the source have several similarities and
differences on the idea of ‘disregard of individual identity’ on the basis of Narrative, Tone, & Techniques.