9.

Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of

community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch
television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is widely believed that Television has numerous adverse effects on family relationships and
social interactions. many activities on daily routine life. I partly agree with this assertion. While
it may be true that this device has a few disadvantages, others seem to be unaffected by
television.
On the one hand, the prevalence of television has certainly posed some contributed to the danger
for family life and the any sense of community. Firstly, the members in the family often
concentrate on the small screen in family times which strongly affects family relationships. To
be more specific, when being addicted to watching TV, they would have less time to
communicate with each other which leads to a lack of care and eventually weaker bonding
among family members. Additionally, watching television is likely to prevent
viewers from
taking part in social activities. Some people have less chance to communicate with friends and
people surrounding them because they spend the most time watching television. Consequently,
they are not willing to take part in spend less time on extracurricular activities and can not
improve communication skills.
Despite having numerous drawbacks, I believe that television still brings a number of
positive influences things to many people in the new era . First and foremost, the small screen
has created opportunities for family members to gather and interact together. It seems to me that
television has a wide range of interesting programs that appeal to people of all ages such as ... .
Consequently, it provides a is a meaningful time for family members to can discuss their favorite
shows and share opinions after a stressful day. In other words, watching television allows people
to keep them selves informed of the latest news and broaden their
have a chance to learn a large amount of
knowledge. As a result, they can easily find common topics to initiate conversation s
with new friends or socialize discuss with your close friends
In conclusion, television has negative impacts on family relationships and a sense of community,
but this device still has some positive things.

TA: 7
CC: 6 (chú ý t ni còn b sai)
VO: 6 (cn dùng a dng hn, mt s cách din t dài dòng)
GR: 6+
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