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- Whether Harbourside Concert Series featuring classical music would be popular with young
people
- Ways to promote the event in school
- Other possible ac?vi?es to promote classical music in school
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Candidate A Let’s talk about the problems of the cleaning
(Level 3-4) sessions. For me, it would be a burden. Because of
the study, we focus on our academic results; they
ohen consider themselves losers if their results do
not live up to the expecta?ons of parents or
teachers, so students work hard; if we require the
cleaning sessions, it will be a burden for them and
increase the unnecessary pressure on them.
Candidate C actually under exam-oriented system in Hong Kong,
(Level 5) schools ohen have to focus on preparing students
for their public exam such as the DSE; so probably
teachers have a lack of ?me for teaching stuff in
order to catch up with the dse syllabus, let alone
arranging those cleaning sessions. So one of the
problems that may arise, as candidate A has just
men?oned, is that there may not be enough ?me for
us to impose cleaning sessions, given that students
are so burdened by their academic studies, and they
will just be exhausted or weary or ?red aher class;
so probably they might not even feel mo?vated to
do so. So do you think that umm the educa?on
system nowadays is one of the problems that we
might need to consider when imposing those
cleaning sessions in our ?metable?
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Task 8 Sample 1:
Lv 4 Lv 5**
Introduction
Introduction
1. No wheelchair ramp
The first problem is the wheelchair ramp The first major problem of the cinema is that it has no
access onto the stage. Luna will be on wheelchair ramp access onto the stage. However,
stage for discussion purposes aYer considering that the filmmaker Isabel Luna will be on
screening. She just had an accident and stage for discussion purposes after screening, having a
Brighthouse Cinema failed government Another reason why Brighthouse Cinema should not be
inspecBon in 2016 and lost its license for chosen has to do with its failure to comply with the law.
12 months. Besides, cinemas must be By virtue of its failure in the government hygiene
cleaned at once per day. Besides, while inspection in 2016, its license was lost for 12 months
the government requires that the since then. Besides, their recent violation of the
cinema be cleaned at least once per day, regulations also lowers our confidence towards their
Brighthouse Cinema is only cleaned cinema. They only have cleaners to clean the cinema
once per two days. once per two days, despite the government regulation’s
3. Inadequate signage
To ensure the audience’s safety, all exits Another problem is associated with its insufficient
should should have the word “Exit” in signage. With a view to ensuring safety of the
English and Chinese. However, only audience, the law provides that any cinemas should
English Language was seen on the signs have exits all indicated by illuminated signs with the
in Brighthouse Cinema. word “Exit” in English and Chinese. Despite so, only
impossible to be launched.
only has four ushers. This will give rise to a high degree
Conclusion
The problems of Brighthouse Cinema
are summarised in the above. The problems of Brighthouse Cinema are summarised
Task 8 Sample 2:
IntroducBon
Screening of The Electronic Durian will be held on 19th June 2019.
However, upon site visit performed by Alia on 5th April 2019, it is
found that the Brighthouse Cinema is not in conformity with our
requirements. It is suggested not taking the cinema as the choice of
venue for the screening. This report summarizes shortcomings of
the Brighthouse Cinema.
1. Absence of wheelchair
First and foremost, one major reason why the Brighthouse
Cinema is unsuitable has much to do with the lack of
wheelchair ramp access onto the stage. As a result of the
serious accident, Isabel Luna, our guest of honor, is now in
her wheelchair and unable to walk. In light of her immobile
condiBon, it is more than essenBal to have wheelchair
access.
5. Safety concern
The last factor we have to consider is its level of safety.
Despite being required by the law that all exits signs should
be in both Chinese and English, the signages in the cinema
are only shown in English. In other words, it may slow down
the evacuaBon in case of any emergency.
Conclusion
It is hoped that we do not consider the Brighthouse cinema
considering the great number of defects it has in various aspects. We
should think and discuss thoroughly before coming to a decision of
the venue choice.
Task 9 Sample 1
ExciBng, right? Indeed, but that was not the most exciBng part of the
film! The most hilarious part of the film has got to be the metal
noodles scene. It is deemed as one of the most hilarious scenes of
the film. Want to know what the scene is all about? Well, I won’t be
spoiling you with too many details. Go watch the film yourself and
you will be astonished.
Be it the theme, the plot, or the metal noodle scene, the Electronic
Durian is more than mesmerizing! What are you waiBng for? Come
join our Visual Media FesBval and watch this hilarious movie in no
Bme!
Task 9 Sample 2
Looking for a science ficBon thriller? I’m sure “The Electronic Durian”
will be your cup of tea! Being named the best movie of this
millennium, “The Electronic Durian” is definitely a movie you can’t
miss in our annual Visual Media FesBval in June.
Pucng aside the main theme of the movie, the plot is interesBng as
well. The plot is set in 2030 with a girl named Sammi. StarBng the
movie with the scene where it’s Sammi’s first day at her first job at
the operaBon, it is shown that she had a normal life at the start.
What comes aYer is the scene showing how the corporaBon tricked
its employees into wearing its lenses. Guess what? From the
moment onwards, they were in the ideal world created by the
corporaBon. It was not unBl Sammi took the lenses off, and here
comes the turning point of the movie! She suddenly saw the real
world, not the one the corporaBon created, kicking off her troubles.
Looking for more spoilers? Go check the remaining plot yourself in
our annual Visual Media FesBval!
You are a secondary 6 student who has been thinking about what to pursue upon gradua;on. Everyone in
society has been telling you that it is important to get into university, as it is the only way to acquire
success.
·Discuss whether you think university educa;on is necessary for one to acquire success.
Hello students! Do you want to get into university? Are you plagued
by insurmountable stress, worrying about whether you can get into
university? Soaked in a uBlitarian society, we oYen hold a delusional
belief that entering university is the only path to success but I am
here to dispel this erroneous myth! Read on and delve into this
arBcle! I'm sure that you will feel reassured aYer reading this.
What’s more, the term success is subjecBve. While others may deem
acquiring monetary gains as acquiring success, it is generally
acceptable if your opinions are against the mainstream. As opposed
to adhering to society’s stereotypical beliefs to study around the
clock, isn't it more meaningful to do something that you are truly
fond of? In terms of monetary rewards, you may even acquire an
astronomical amount of money, with the YouTuber Emi Wong being
a striking illustraBon. Feeling weary of the rigid work of her job, Emi
Wong abandoned her tradiBonal 9-5 job, stepping into the unknown
to start her YouTube channel. Believe it or not, she transformed into
one of the most renowned YouTubers in Hong Kong by filming her
workout rouBne and traveling vlogs, earning approximately
$300,000 per month. This sounds very cool, doesn't it? On the
contrary, if studying is not your cup of tea, you will be trapped in a
vicious cycle of academic pressure and despair for your enBre
university life. Envisage yourself studying QuanBtaBve Finance at
UST, which is notorious for its fierce compeBBon and boredom. For
all the fame and fortune that you have acquired, you wake up to the
fact that your enBre four years have gone down the drain in studying
something that you are fed up with. Don’t you feel demoralized? So,
students, bear in mind that all roads lead to Rome, and never should
you pursue university educaBon if you are reluctant to do so.
Steve Jobs once said, “Life is short, it bejer be worth it”. Remember
that you only live once and never should pursuing a path that does
not belong to the mainstream and be deemed as inferior. So,
students, don't be afraid. Swallow your trepidaBons, leave your ivory
towers, and venture into the unknown in no Bme! While the slope
ahead is steep and the road ahead is long, you are not the lijle birds
that are doomed to demise but the eagles that are desBned to soar!
However inBmidaBng the obstacles ahead are, all the pains will be
seared with your rock-solid determinaBon. Remember that
Everyone can become a shining diamond as long as he pursues his
dreams!
AYer all, society values diversity and you can dazzle with your own
trajectory. It is not the end of the day even if you fail to get into
university. So, what are you waiBng for? Embark on your dream and
become the next dream catcher before you regret it!
Sample Essay 2
The following comment appeared in the editorial of Hong Kong Post:
You are the chairperson of your school’s Heritage Club. Express your views by writing a letter to the editor of Hong Kong Post.
Dear Editor,
The topic of the loss of craYsmanship has hit the headline, with
criBcs lambasLng teenagers for their apatheBc actude towards
tradiBonal arBstry. Despite such fierce denunciaBon, it is my strong
convicBon that there are sBll other contributors to this issue, so the
young are never the only one under fire. In the following, I am going
to shed light on the reasons for the lack in interest of adolescents
towards age-old art forms, and my suggesBons to address this
problem.
words, our society is not giving any fresh impetus to the tradiBonal
performing arts.
Apart from the government, social media influencers may also take
advantage of their high visibility to aid promoBon. Considering that
adolescents lack connecBons with the sole-remaining craYsmen in
Hong Kong, it is crucial to offer a channel to link between youngsters
and art performers. Thanks to the prompt advancement in
technology, social media plaworms have thrived to have ajracted
tens of millions of users in Hong Kong. According to the
quesBonnaire conducted by the Home and Youth Affairs Bureau in
late August this year, which surveyed youngsters aged below 30,
68% of the respondents reported spending more than 3 hours on
social media. It is the best testament to the influence of these
plaworms. Given that the youngsters are inclined to abandon
themselves in scrolling Instagram reels and YouTube shorts, Key
Opinion Leaders can avail themselves of this trend to promote
tradiBonal art forms. Videos with first-hand experiences serve as a
catalyst for their curiosity and enthusiasm, which can be prolonged
by further messaging with the influencers. The Standard
commented, “SaBsfying youngsters’ curiosity is the prerequisite to
encouraging them to pursue these age-old yet valuable cultures.” It
goes beyond disputes that social media is a bridge between
teenagers and convenBonal arBstry.
Yours faithfully,
o Exercise
1. (2022 Q9) 學生們沉迷於電子遊戲到深夜,以至於他們經常不得不熬夜才能
完成作業。
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3. (2019 Q2) 隨著越來越多的國際人才而非本地畢業生被聘用,本地人民對自
己在當今全球經濟中的競爭力時刻保持警惕。
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5. (2021 Q5) 社群媒體影響者的不實評論會引起粉絲的強烈抵制,導致粉絲數
量迅速下降。
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7. (2020 Q2) 最近,南山邨與彩虹邨及益昌大廈一起躋身香港十大最適合
Instagram 拍照的地點。
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9. (2018 Q3) 上週我收到了一些同事的來信,信中表達了他們對在辦公室外收
到電子郵件的擔憂,並對公司缺乏相關政策表示遺憾。
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11. (2022 Q3) 如果您有堅定不移的信念,您將能夠克服遇到的任何挑戰,無論
是資金緊張還是市場的激烈競爭。
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13. (2018 Q4) 我對動物發自內心的熱愛使我立志成為一名獸醫。
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15. (2018 Q5) 家長和老師往往只是想盡辦法令學生的學業成績再創新高,而犧
牲了他們的身心健康。
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17. (2022 Q2) 我在主持 Teen Chat 的過程中上到最大的一課是,一旦你踏出了第
一步,你就已經打開了實現目標的大門。
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19. (2021 Q6) 每天在感恩日記中記下我感激的事情,每次翻閱感恩日記時,我
的幸福感都會持續下去。
11. Encumbrance
• Despite the encumbrance of the absence of a stage and an array of realistic props, it
was still an ecstatic experience.
• (由於缺乏家人的支持,我成為一名飛行員的職業抱負受到了阻礙。)
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13. Culminate
• Years of hard work and dedication culminated in his achieving the prestigious award.
• (如果沒有團隊的通力合作,完美的表演不可能在觀眾面前達到高潮。)
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• As dress watches saw more time in the spotlight this year, one of the great shifts
we noticed here at Style was that formal timepieces are often paying more overt
homage to days gone by.
• (親自參觀過長城後,我對無數為了保護國家而不遺餘力建造長城的人們表示了更大
的敬意。)
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• Giving thanks for outrageous abundance inoculates us from / against the sense of
fear, failure and discontent we sometimes experience. Better still, it creates a path
towards success, joy and fulfilment.
• (監控應用程式只是預防孩子上網時受到可能遇到的各種危險。)
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18. Face the problem squarely / head-on / directly // don’t beat around the bush /
dodge the issue.
• Your inability in completing the work boils down to the fact that you constantly beat
around the bush.
• (正視問題,才是找到妥善解決方法、不斷進步的良藥。)
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19. Put something on the back burner = not dealing with something now because it is
less urgent
• Never put your priorities on the back burner just because of fear. Your
insecurities will just make for failure.
• (他把家庭放在次要地位,以換取名聲和成功。)
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20. Metaphor: Resting is just like putting fuel in the tank // filling a vehicle with fuel
• Do not feel guilty when you take rest from the overwhelming work you are dealing
with. Resting is just like filling a vehicle with fuel, without which you cannot progress
or even experience burnout easily.
• (就像給汽車加滿油一樣,休息可以補充能量,這對我們堅持不懈地繼續長途跋涉尤其
重要。)
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21. Pat yourself on the back = congratulate yourself / give yourself a little praise
• Thanks to our collective endeavour to practice for this competition, we have finally
claimed our well-earned champion! Let’s pat ourselves on the back because we did
it!
• (出色地通過 DSE 考試並不容易,但你做到了!你真的應該稱讚一下自己!)
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1. Students are too hooked on playing video games until late hours that they often have to stay up late
to finish their schoolwork.
2. Thanks to the gorgeous costumes, interesting plot and wonderful singing, I was so absorbed in the
Chinese opera that I lost track of time.
3. With more international talents being recruited instead of local graduates, people from the local
community are wary of their competitiveness in today’s global economy.
4. Individuals are on guard against others’ attitudes and judgements. As a result, they refrain
from wearing yoga pants and leggings for everyday wear.
5. A dishonest review from a social media influencer will attract backlash from fans, leading to
a rapid fall in number of followers.
6. Although her outspokenness on social media platforms often triggers backlash from
netizens, she still wins the hearts of many fans with her unique music.
7. Recently, Nam Shan Estate joins Choi Hung Estate and Yik Cheong Building in the list of top
10 places in Hong Kong to take Instagram photos.
8. Some suggest traditional arts combine forces with social media in an effort to increase
penetration in the young generation.
9. I received letters from some colleagues last week expressing their concerns about emails
received out of office and lamenting over the lack of company policy to address this issue.
10. I received letters from some colleagues last week expressing their concerns about emails
received out of office and lamenting over the lack of company policy to address this issue.
11. If you have an unshaken belief, you will be able to overcome any challenges that come in
your way, be they financial constraints or fierce competitions in the market.
12. Many citizens hold an unshaken belief that putting on food warning labels is tantamount to
changing people’s eating habits, yet I am not entirely convinced.
13. My love for animals from the very bottom of my heart makes for my aspiration to be a vet.
14. Lamentably, the environmental friendliness of electric vehicles did not make for high sales
figures, and this has much to do with the lack of charging facilities in the city.
15. Parents and teachers often only look for ways to spur students’ academic results to new
heights at the expense of their physical and mental wellness.
16. The policy to review each other’s work is implemented with the aim to spur club members
to be cultivated individuals.
17. The biggest lesson I have learnt in the process of hosting “Teen Chat” is that once you have
taken the first step, you are already opening the door to achieving your goal.
18. St George’s School paved the way for the finals with no lost games in this season. On the
other hand, Royal College unlocked the final game with a key after fighting tooth and nail
against Smith’s School last week.
19. Jotting down things that I am grateful for every day, my happiness is perpetuated every time
I flip through my journal.
20. The most controversial point of fresh graduates is that they value work-life balance more
than the older generation, who would always extend their work hours to out of office
hours.
21. (#11) Given the lack of support from my family, my career aspirations of becoming a
pilot were encumbered.
22. (#12) Having amended the company’s policy, workers are provided with a higher
degree of leeway in personalizing their schedule and choosing their desired working
environment.
23. (#13) But for the team’s collaboration, a flawlessly executed performance would not have
reached its culmination in front of the audience.
24. (#14) News of the death of Korean actor in an apparent suicide has sent shock
waves across the global entertainment industry.
25. (#15) Having personally visited the Great Wall, I have paid greater homage to the
myriad of individuals who spared no pains in constructing it in hopes of protecting
their country.
26. (#16) Your frustrations in the past are actually pointing you to some of your biggest
wins in the future.
27. (#17) The monitoring apps simply inoculate kids against all sorts of danger they may
encounter while surfing the Internet.
28. (#18) Facing the problem squarely / head-on / directly is the panacea of finding an
appropriate solution and moving forward with progress.
29. (#19) He put his family on the back burner in exchange for fame and success.
30. (#20) As if filling a vehicle with fuel, resting replenishes our energy, which is the
prerequisite to continuing our long odyssey relentlessly.
31. (#21) It’s not easy to pass the DSE exam with flying colors but you made it! You
should really pat yourself on the back!
32. (#22) Our workplace design has not kept pace with the changing employee
expectations at all.
33. (#23) Many fell victim to financial fraud given the misleading advertisements which
had successfully wooed them.
34. (#24) Despite all the odds that she encountered during her teenage years, she still
managed to rise to challenge and live a successful life.
35. (#25) The encouraging words from her coach fueled her determination to wrestle
with forthcoming challenges that may arise from her path to becoming a professional
athlete.