I have a laptop and it its barnd brand is HP .

It is very convenient and portable

anywhere (portable là đủ về nghĩa rùi nha) . We I can look up information,
entertain, listen to music, … (k dùng dấu ba chấm khi viết nha) through
computer networks with the laptop. First , it's very convenient, everything you
need is built into the system such as network connections , editor (editor là biên
tập viên còn ) editing , watching videos . Second , it’s popular , (k viết 2 câu
bằng dấu phẩy, chấm câu vào nha) everybody very like a laptop , It is
everywhere, indispensable in life (1) . Third , it is portable , a laptop in small , easy
to use so you can take it with you when you travel , you prepare a backup charger .
Fourth , it is affordable , a ( chỗ này cx chấm câu và viết hoa chưa a nha )laptop
costs much less than the many different electronic devices most people have in
their houses now . Final , it is guaranteed , (chấm câu tiếp nha) a laptop promises
that if you a are unhappy with the system for any reason in the first year , you can
return it for a full refund .
Laptop is a product very good (3)and you can give 4 stars.
Sữa: Second, it’s popular. Everyone likes to have a laptop. It is an
indispensable part of life. (1)
(2) về ý thầy không nói gi mà phải viết tách câu bằng dấu chấm.
Third, it is portable. A laptop is small and easy to use, so you can take it with
you when you travel, but remember to bring a backup charger.
(3) a product very good là sai nha vì thầy nói là tính từ đứng trước danh từ
mà. Phải ghi là a very good product nha