A good essay includes these:

1. Introduction (Many people believe/ many people claim that / It is generally

known / Some people agree that/ it is generally accepted / it is believed by many
(adults)
 Very general, short, just to introduce the reader to the topic, catchy,
rhetorical question.

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2. first idea in depth (linkers, 2-4 sentences)

 To start with / firstly, / in the beginning Argument 1.
 What is more, / moreover, / additionally, / furthermore, Argument 2

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3. second idea in depth (2-4 sentences)

 Secondly, / Not only this, but that / To continue with Argument 1
 What is more, / moreover, / additionally, / furthermore, / Due to that fact
Argument 2

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4. your own idea (DONT FORGET TO WRITE THAT AT FIRST) / third idea
in depth (2-4 sentences)
 Finally, / Eventually, / To finish with / Lastly, Argument 1
 What is more, / moreover, / additionally, / furthermore, / As a result,
Argument 2

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5. conclusion (summary, your opinion)

 To sum up, / In summary / In conclusion / To conclude with / All in all
 My opinion is / I believe / I´d say / To express my opinion / I strongly
believe / I think / I reckon= think

Must include:
1. Logical arguments
2. Neutral (semi-formal language)
3. B1/ B2 language
4. Linkers
 You should avoid:
1. Repetition
2. Contradictions
3. Short forms of verbs, jovial language, slang

An example:
Introduction
Many people believe that (general statement)

Point 1
Firstly, argument1. What is more, argument2

Point 2
Secondly, argument 1. Additionally, argument 2

Point 3
Lastly, argument 1. Moreover, argument 2

Conclusion
To sum up, (summary).
I believe, (my opinion).