Global Warming and deforestation (Title)

Martínez Araujo José Antonio (Autor)

19/02/2024
Introduction
The phenomenon of global warming it’s the most important situation that lurks the humanity because
if the earth grows up one or two Celsius grade the consequences are mortal of all live forms in. And
what’s the relation of this with deforestation, the conversion of gases how methane (CH 3), carbon
dioxide (CO2), ozone (O2), nitrogen oxide (NO), chlorofluorocarbons, among others are principal
actors of this effect and the first conversion of these gases to molecular oxygen (O 2) are the plants and
the principal of make this are the trees. It’s a simple logical process less trees, less components to
make this work and the percentual concentration of the gas is increasing year by year, fossil fuels are
the principal method of making energy. So, one of the activities of reducing the impact in the global
environment is reforestation in conjunction with total unemployment of the use of these fuels.

Development
This situation makes grow up with the industrial revolution (1820-1840) with the coal burning
how first method of make movement in the machines that gradually are increased with the
years in conjunction with the innovation and discover new methods of make more cost-effective
use of this methods are the principial unconcern of the generation of this gas.
But why deforestation is important in this. In first instance, the use of wood how principal source of
charcoal, the construction of houses and factories, make roads of cars, development of new methods
of grow up grocery's product of increase in life expectative, and buildings of solution of governmental
offices, private industry, creation of “new deficiencies” and another large list of causes.
This invasion of green areas and the development of cities help to decrease them. On 20 December of
2015 IMCO make an estimation of 3 billion trees in all the world but this is in 2015, the burn of fuels
began in 1820 in an unconscionable way.
This is in first instance, now we have airplanes, more factories to make cellphones, a greater number
of cars to persons, the impact of gases with the fashion industry and famous people that Taylor Swift,
etc. etc. It´s with the development of society and the culture of burn fossil fuels with the illegal
logging make the perfect way to make the flowers in Antarctica grow back.

Conclusion
The form in the society and private industry “worries” in conjunction with the poor legal forms of
government may act with this problem are alarming, the problem does not the people because what is
the comparative of don't eat meet one day with one artist or enterprises that generate tons of
greenhouse gases of no one makes something how make real the purpose of Agenda 21 with initial
plans of government in addition with more several consequences to the sector with more contribution
of this problem.

2- Choose and publish a paragraph of your selection to show what you want to improve in this unit.
This situation makes grow up with the industrial revolution (1820-1840) with the coal burning
how first method of make movement in the machines that gradually are increased with the years in
conjunction with the innovation and discover new methods of make more cost-effective use of this
methods are the principial unconcern of the generation of this gas.

3- PLAN: Apply all the skills you have acquired and developed in the PLAN stage of this unit
WRITING TASK.

Positive (+) Negative (-)

Increase in life expectative Increased of greenhouse gases
Development in medicine More number of factories
More houses New methods of burning fuels
Creation of works High number of cars

4- DRAFT: Write a first draft based on your PLAN.

This situation makes great results that increase in life expectative, development in medicine, new
methods of make houses and creations new works, that makes grow up with the industrial
revolution (1820-1840) with the coal burning how first method of make movement in the machines
that gradually are increased with the years in conjunction with the innovation and discover new
methods of make more cost-effective use of this methods are the principial unconcern of the
generation of this gas.

5- REVISE: Review your DRAFT for content and structure. You may want to use this unit TASK
checklist as a guideline. Try to identify any incongruence between your PLAN and your DRAFT.
Highlight any necessary changes to improve your DRAFT.
The industrial revolution (1820-1840) makes great result that increase in life expectative,
development in medicine, new methods of make houses and creations new works but, what is the
cost?. Increased in percentage of greenhouse gases result of factories and methods of burn fossil fuels
how first method of make movement in the machines that gradually are increased with the years and
unconcern of generation of this gases are the principal factors of global warming.

6- EDIT: Edit your REVISE stage for language errors. You may want to use this unit LANGUAGE
checklist as a guideline. Highlight any necessary changes to correct your REVISE. This EDIT will be
the final step of your improved paragraph.
The industrial revolution (1820-1840) makes great result that increase in life expectancy, development
in medicine, new methods of making houses and creations of new works but, what is the cost?
Increased in percentage of greenhouse gases result of factories and methods of burn fossil fuels how
first method of make movement in the machines that gradually are increased with the years and
unconcern of generation of these gases are the principal factors of global warming.
7- Publish your final version of this essay prototype in which you highlight your improved
paragraph.
Introduction
The phenomenon of global warming it’s the most important situation that lurks the humanity because
if the earth grows up one or two Celsius grade the consequences are mortal of all live forms in. And
what’s the relation of this with deforestation, the conversion of gases how methane (CH 3), carbon
dioxide (CO2), ozone (O2), nitrogen oxide (NO), chlorofluorocarbons, among others are principal
actors of this effect and the first conversion of these gases to molecular oxygen (O 2) are the plants and
the principal of make this are the trees. It’s a simple logical process less trees, less components to
make this work and the percentual concentration of the gas is increasing year by year, fossil fuels are
the principal method of making energy. So, one of the activities of reducing the impact in the global
environment is reforestation in conjunction with total unemployment of the use of these fuels.

Development
The industrial revolution (1820-1840) makes great result that increase in life expectancy,
development in medicine, new methods of making houses and creations of new works but, what
is the cost? Increased in percentage of greenhouse gases result of factories and methods of burn
fossil fuels how first method of make movement in the machines that gradually are increased
with the years and unconcern of generation of these gases are the principal factors of global
warming.
But why deforestation is important in this. In first instance, the use of wood how principal source of
charcoal, the construction of houses and factories, make roads of cars, development of new methods
of grow up grocery's product of increase in life expectative, and buildings of solution of governmental
offices, private industry, creation of “new deficiencies” and another large list of causes.
This invasion of green areas and the development of cities help to decrease them. On 20 December of
2015 IMCO make an estimation of 3 billion trees in all the world but this is in 2015, the burn of fuels
began in 1820 in an unconscionable way.
This is in first instance, now we have airplanes, more factories to make cellphones, a greater number
of cars to persons, the impact of gases with the fashion industry and famous people that Taylor Swift,
etc. etc. It´s with the development of society and the culture of burn fossil fuels with the illegal
logging make the perfect way to make the flowers in Antarctica grow back.

Conclusion
The form in the society and private industry “worries” in conjunction with the poor legal forms of
government may act with this problem are alarming, the problem does not the people because what is
the comparative of don't eat meet one day with one artist or enterprises that generate tons of
greenhouse gases of no one makes something how make real the purpose of Agenda 21 with initial
plans of government in addition with more several consequences to the sector with more contribution
of this problem.