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Level One Writing Supplement (Revised Jan 18th 2017)
Level One Writing Supplement (Revised Jan 18th 2017)
Translation
An independent clause = a group of words that includes a subject and a verb, and it communicates a
complete thought or idea.
A simple sentence = contains one independent clause and ends with a period.
Remember that a sentence needs punctuation. Use a period (.), an exclamation mark (!), or a question mark (?) at
the end of a sentence. Do not use a comma (,) at the end of a sentence!
Simple Sentence
= an independent clause + a period
Mechanics
Adapted from from https://americanenglish.state.gov/files/ae/resource_files/developing_writing_1.pdf
Use Capital letters at the beginning of sentences, for names for nationalities and for the days of the week. Use a
period (.) at the end of sentences.
Copy the sentences, and make all the corrections that are necessary.
Using commas in a series. We use a comma between all the members of a list, or a series.
Example: We need eggs, cheese, milk, and bread.
Copy the sentences, and make all the corrections that are necessary. Use capital letters when they are needed.
1. what do you see hear feel and smell? __________________________________________________________
2. i see cars people houses stores and factories __________________________________________________________
3. the largest cities in the world are new york city mexico city tokyo los angeles shanghai buenos aires paris and peking
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4. people are using more food fuel water and air
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5. they are planning cities building roads finding water putting up houses and limiting growth
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6. the growth of cities is a problem in europe africa asia north america and south america
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7. what are we doing about the traffic the noise the pollution and the crowding?
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You can combine two sentences into one sentence. Use a comma (,) and a coordinating conjunction such as and,
but, so, and or. The new sentence has two equal independent clauses with a subject and a verb. It is called a
compound sentence.
For example:
1. Jennifer was good at science. Her sister had trouble with writing.
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2. We can go to the new chicken restaurant. We can order in.
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3. That movie scares me. I don’t want to watch the movie.
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4. We passed through passport control. The four of us boarded the airplane.
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6. I really disliked that teacher. I still wanted to take his class.
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Read the following email. Circle the most appropriate coordinating conjunctions.
Dear Dania,
I have a few hours before my next class, so / but I’m trying to catch up on my emailing. This semester is difficult, but /
or I’m enjoying it. I’m taking two English classes, and / so I’m also on the student council. Being on the council has
taught me a lot, but/ so it takes up a lot of time.
Studying takes up most of my time, and / but I try to find time for sports too. I’ve got to keep in shape! This weekend I’m
going hiking with some classmates. Do you remember the time we went hiking, and / so we couldn’t find our way back?
Your visit is in just two weeks! I’m really looking forward to seeing you, and / but I’m sure we’ll have a great time. You
can stay in my dormitory, and / or we can stay at my parents’ house. Which would you prefer to do? My parents don’t
live far away, and / but I know they will want to see you.
Let me know which bus you’re taking, or / and I can meet you at the station. Take care! Kyoji
Now reread the first paragraph of the letter. Underline the subject(s) with one line and the verb(s) with two
lines.
Complete these rules about coordinating conjunctions. The examples in Kyoji’s letter to Dania can help you.
Use when the information in the second sentence is a result of the information in the first sentence.
Compound Sentence
*Many writers choose not to use a comma before the coordinating conjunction and.
There are three more coordinating conjunctions: for, yet, and nor. These are usually only used in formal writing.
Complete these sentences with your own ideas. Remember that each main clause needs a subject and a
verb.
1. It is starting to rain, but _.
2. I don’t want to study Chemistry tonight, so _.
3. This weekend my friends and I will go to a movie, or _.
4. I’m reading a lot of books in English, and .
5. After class I’m going to a movie, so .
6. Last year I watched TV a lot, but _.
7. I’m excited about graduating from Uninorte, and .
8. Julian is too young to drive a car, but .
9. We can fly to Medellin, or .
10. Studying alone is boring, so .
11. .
12. .
My name is June Taylor. My daughter Sara lives in Fairbanks, Alaska. I live in Fairbanks, Alaska. I am a working mother. I
work as a camerawoman for a T.V. station in Fairbanks. My job is interesting. I enjoy it. I didn’t always work. I didn’t
plan to work. I started to work ten years ago. This is my story. I married Charles Taylor in 1966. We were very young.
Charles was a salesman. He liked to move. We moved to a new city every year. We lived in Chicago. We lived in Detroit.
We lived in Miami. We lived far from our families. Charles wanted a large family. I wanted a large family. I didn’t plan
to get a job. I planned to stay home with the children. Sara was born in Miami. Charles was very happy. I was very
happy. I stayed home with Sara. We moved to Alaska the next year. I didn’t have a job. I had a hobby. I liked to take
pictures of Sara. I learned to take very good pictures. I started to sell them. It wasn’t a real job. I always worked at
home. Charles suddenly became very sick in 1972. He had cancer. He died after six months. I had no money. I had no
job. I had no education. I had no friends. Then a T.V station in Fairbanks saw my pictures. They
asked me to work for them. I am very lucky to have the job. I can earn
enough money for Sara and me. We are independent. I don’t worry about the future any more.