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8. It is the Constant Image of your Face
Dennis Brutus (1924-2009)
Dennis Brutus was born in Salisbury, Southern Rhodesia, in 1924. A coloured South
African, he was an anti-apartheid activist in the 1960s, He was eventually imprisoned and
blacklisted by the South African authorities who also banned his poetry from publication in
South Africa, Brutus was forced to flee the country and after spending some time in Britain
became a political refugee in the U.S.A. in 1983, Although he was accepted and honoured for
his writing in America, he still yearned to return home to his own country. This poem was
written during this period. When apartheid was finally dismantled in South Africa, the new
government, in 1990, invited Brutus to return to his beloved homeland. He did so, making his
home in Cape Town, where he passed away in 2009.
A. SUMMARY
The persona is caught between his love for his homeland and his gratitude toward adopted
country, He claims that the latter has treated him so well that he feels guilty for remaining
loyal to his first love, his homeland. He uses romantic imagery to portray the complicated
nature of his feelings about the triangular relationship in which he finds himself.
B. ANALYSIS
To fully understand this poem, the poet's own background should be considered.
The central concern in the poem is the overwhelming love felt by the persona for his
country and the simultaneous gratitude he feels for his adopted country. This causes a
conilict between his professed loyalty to his “first love” and the feeling that he is betraying
his second home by not committing his love entirely to her.
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The poem uses the extended metaphor of a love triangle to illustrate the conflict the perso,
feels about each of his loves. His predicament is that he is being well treated ang takey
care of by his current lover but his heart is also with his first love with whom he Cannot be
at this time. He is grateful for the former's demonstrations of love to him and feels guilty
that he cannot return her devotion as whole heartedly. He also feels that he is betraying his
homeland by his attachment to his adopted land and feels guilty for enjoying it so much,
At the end of the poem he achiev
ome measure of reconciliation as he comes to terms with
his ambivalent feelings for both places. His guilt at enjoying his adopted land is assuage |
by the hope that, under the circumstances, his own land, being just as understanding,
more so, will forgive him
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C. MAJOR THEMES
i. Love:
The conflicting love for homeland and adopted country is compared to the relationship
between a man and his two lovers. The theme is expressed through the images of constancy
and tenderness in order to demonstrate the attraction of both women who are the “loves” of
the persona and to explain the difficulty
the man faces in having to choose between them.
ii, Loyalty and Betrayal:
Loyalty is demonstrated by both the Persona and his lover. The lover by his chair represen!’
his adopted home. She is “
Constant” or faithful and always with him. She has “blackmailed”
the persona with her beauty and her “protectiveness” and he feels a deep gratitude and
appreciation for all she has done for him, In spite of this, he tells her that she can “claim ™
loyalty” for his land “takes precedence of all this] loves” The fact that his heart is elsewhe™
troubles the persona who feels that he owes his allegiance to the countey that has of
him refuge, and he feels that he is betraying her. At the same time he is demonstrating
loyalty to his own land,
iii. Guilt and Ambivalence:
The conflict in the poem is centred on the guilt the persona feels at his inability to 8° =
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about abandoning his own country
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7iv. Patriotism:
The guilt that the persona feels at being comfortable in another country comes from an
inherent sense of nationalism which becomes 2 challenging decision to negotiate when
the citizen migrates. Relocation of the person does not necessarily mean transfer of
allegiance to the new country and immigrants are often confused as to which country they
should support. Naturalized citizens are required to swear allegiance to the new country
but the vocal declaration does not necessarily mean that the previous emotional ties are
relinquished. In the poem, the persona still speaks of “my land” and “my country” as his
heart refuses to surrender ownership.
D. POETIC TECHNIQUES
i, Form:
The poem is written in free verse comprising two nine-line stanzas with lines of varying
lengths. The absence of a rhyming scheme, usually a reflection of harmony, is effective in
suggesting the internal conflict that the persona faces.
ii, Tone:
The tone of the poem is one of ambivalence and guilt as the persona tries to reconcile the
ambivalent emotions he feels for his two loves.
iii, Mood:
The mood created by the poem is pensive and reflective. The problems caused by dual
allegiance require deep introspection and the reader is left to contemplate the conflict.
E. LANGUAGE
i Imagery:
‘The central image in the poem is that of a woman gazing tenderly into the face of her lover
while kneeling at his chair, her own face clasped gently in his hands. It is an enduring image
Of the love between two persons but the image is ironic in that the devotion of the woman
isbeing betrayed for even as her lover caresses her face, he is thinking guiltily about his love
for another,
2ii Metaphor .
The entire wenn is an extended metaphor in which the vat oS eee to th
love relationship between a man and woman, ‘The metaphor Tu’ ys as an Persona,
political situation and ethical dilemma. ‘The legal language used, - a and)
convicts’, suggests that the persona is comparing himself to a penn on tra or treason
where he is put on trial for professing love for another country while owing allegiance to
another who has the superior claim of being his birthplace, 7
Another metaphor that suggests the persona’s reasons for leaving his homeland is “my wor
of knives” which implies that he has to contend with a dangerous, treacherous existence,
could also be a self- reference to his own treachery toward the faithful woman at his knee,
iii, Diction:
He calls her an “accomplice” who “blackmail[s]” him with her “beauty”, “protectiveness’
and “tenderness”, The incongruous choice of words shows how conflicted he feels about all
she is offering him, as if he is simultaneously blaming and appreciating her. He also seems
to suggest that they are both complicit in his act of “treason” since she aided and abetted his
act and also seduced him with her love.
iv. Alliteration:
‘The repetition of the exhalatory “f” sound, along with the sibilance of the “s” sounds
contribute to the muted, reflective tones in the first stanza, Words like “constant” and “facé’
with their hushed tones, illustrate this.
iv. Consonance:
‘The repetition of the internal “t” sound aid combined with the other sibilant consonaats
nd of low, muttered speech, a whisper amidst silence reminding us that the
speaker is speaking to himself. ‘The line,
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QUESTIONS
1. Describe the experience being conve
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xplain why the persona feels conf i
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how how the idea of betrayal ig atic ae ns towards his two loves.
4. Identify one major poetic device and e € poem.
‘ xplain its i
in conveying the poet's vision, P' effectiveness
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