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    The document summarizes feedback on two activities. For Activity 1, the writer's use of descriptive imagery to paint vivid settings was praised, though the lack of a clear sequence or order of events in the draft was noted as a weakness. For Activity 2, the ideas presented were deemed accurate and the imagery helped bring the information to life, but following a proper sequence of events would have improved understandability. Overall, the combination of ideas and literary elements engaged the reader.

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    The document summarizes feedback on two activities. For Activity 1, the writer's use of descriptive imagery to paint vivid settings was praised, though the lack of a clear sequence or order of events in the draft was noted as a weakness. For Activity 2, the ideas presented were deemed accurate and the imagery helped bring the information to life, but following a proper sequence of events would have improved understandability. Overall, the combination of ideas and literary elements engaged the reader.

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    The document summarizes feedback on two activities. For Activity 1, the writer's use of descriptive imagery to paint vivid settings was praised, though the lack of a clear sequence or order of events in the draft was noted as a weakness. For Activity 2, the ideas presented were deemed accurate and the imagery helped bring the information to life, but following a proper sequence of events would have improved understandability. Overall, the combination of ideas and literary elements engaged the reader.

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    The document summarizes feedback on two activities. For Activity 1, the writer's use of descriptive imagery to paint vivid settings was praised, though the lack of a clear sequence or order of events in the draft was noted as a weakness. For Activity 2, the ideas presented were deemed accurate and the imagery helped bring the information to life, but following a proper sequence of events would have improved understandability. Overall, the combination of ideas and literary elements engaged the reader.

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    ACTIVITY 1:

    STRONG POINTS

    - The way she paints the image in my mind which is she use the descriptive imagery so well. She
    visualize the setting of her draft.

    WEAK POINTS

    - She did not comply with the sequence or oder of events in her draft.

    ACTIVITY 2:

    CLARITY OF THE IDEA PRESENTED

    The information in her draft is accurate and based on facts. I can see the image in my mind because of
    the way she use the imagery.

    APPROPRIATE CHOICE OF LITERARY ELEMENTS

    The genre she use is the personal essay and she use the elements properly. However, if she comply sa
    the sequence of events on her draft, for the readers to understand well.

    EFFECTIVENESS OF THE COMBINATION OF IDEAS AND ELEMENTS

    I understand clearly the ideas of her draft because of the flow of the piece. The way she use the
    elements hooked me up.

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