By: Chong & Lee

Multicultural
Society
IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY
Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic
peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Cosmopolitan cities, international countries and

diversifying communities are an image of the
world in the current time.

The multicoloured is probably the strongest part

of our nature and it does accelerate the
development of the specific country.

Consequently, I completely agree with this

statement and will discuss it below.
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First of all, different races and nations are like countless shades
connecting with each other to create a beautiful portrait on canvas.

Bewitching appearances of various ethnic individuals are not the only

achievement, it was scientifically proven that a child born from parents
with distinctive ethics is more adequate and successful in many fields.
It may occur from the collision of two differed genes and cultures,
making an individual a special case.

For example, the new sci-fi podcast "The Cipher" tells a story of a
young girl named Sabrina who is in the end appears to be a perfect child
with bloodlines of myriad nations and population. The girl is proficient in
many spheres like math, music, chess and history.

This example even if it is fictional proves that the civilization binding

with each other may build something extraordinary.
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Secondly, every country and nation has it is own distinctive
advantages and powerful sides that in addition to others
can erect an efficient union.

In the world of shortage and hunger, the bonding of those

cultures can tackle vital economical, political, and
environmental problems.

For instance, the technologies made by British and

American nation, the environmental solutions and laws
published by the German nation and other countries can
easily demolish the mistakes our community is facing.

Moreover, the discrimination between associations can be

finally broken as the world would be completely equal and
fair with the same conditions around the earth.
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In conclusion, the mixture of nations and races

is a brilliant thing

that can destroy the chains of terrors that

our nature is fighting every day.

Vanishing the borders that divide us, even

more, is the only solution to take care of and
to protect our humanity.