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By the Book Writing, Writing Curriculum Using Classic Literature, Middle School, Student Text
Copyright © 2017 written by Rusty Gorby
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In order to better assist the teacher, the Teacher Edition of By the Book Writing,
Middle School Writing Curriculum, includes detailed lesson plans and sample
essays for each writing assignment.
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Student’s Syllabus
Lesson Plans Pages
19. Checking Note Cards, Sorting Note Cards, and Beginning the Outline 91-94
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23. Editing and Final Touches 106-109
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Lesson 1—Handout 1 SAMPLE
Hamburgers and Paragraphs
Fixings = Supporting
Meat = Supporting sentences Details
Business person
Street Address Inside Address
City, State Zip Code
[1single spaced line]
____________________ :}Salutation
Indent [1 single spaced line ] [1 inch right margin]
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Body ___________________________________________________________________
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Closing{______________
[1inch left margin] Signature{____________
[2 single spaced lines for signature]
Typed Name{_________
I. Purposes of Writing
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II. Process of Writing
A. _________________
1. ________________ (Web Diagram)
2. ________________ __________
B. _________________
C.__________________
At what time of day or night does most of your story take place?
In how many different locations does the action of your story take place? List them
all.
Describe each location in full detail. Include colors and other sensory details.
4. Characters:
Main Character (name, age, appearance, personality traits, best quality,
weakness, noticeable habits):
10. What is the high point (climax or part with most intensity)?
1. The topic sentence makes a general statement about the __________, captures
______________, or sets the __________.
2. The supporting sentences tell the story, _________ by _________, of ______ the
problem or situation developed, ________ happened at its height, and ______ it was
___________.
Sample Paragraph
My birthday swimming party brought fifty friends to our house, even though
it was the end of November with a forty-degree wind and even though we did not
have enough food for my guests. For what seemed like hours, people kept arriving
and arriving. In fact, an endless line of cars covered our driveway, and I prayed that
we would have enough food for the masses to eat. Immediately, as boys and girls
crowded into our home, I led them across the rustic, open living room to the bathrooms so that
they could change into their swimsuits. Then, wrapped in towels of greens, reds and blues and
every color imaginable, fifty-two skinny middle schoolers waited impatiently in my family room
for the party to begin. I wondered again if snacks would need to be rationed. After I let my
friends eat one or two chips, I asked Susan to lead the swarm to the pool area. Susan—the head
cheerleader, a beautiful blonde with long brown legs—barked orders to the half-dressed cluster,
and they all obeyed, moving to the door. Sadly, as we moved outside in the cold air, we noticed
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Lesson 3—Handout 1
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that the pool’s cover, the bubble—a large dome-like structure lifted by an air compressor—was
slowly deflating. My short little mom flew in like a paratrooper to rescue my reputation, quickly
patched the bubble wall, and we crammed into the pool area. Tiptoeing teenagers slid into our
heated pool, and the party began. Squeals and laughter filled the water. Next, Susan and I
showed off, jumping and flipping off the diving board in our similar blue one-piece swimsuits—
swimsuits that we (like most middle school girls) had taken considerable time to find at the local
Walmart. We loved having an audience. It built our silly, girly self-esteem. Soon, everyone
started getting hungry, and I remembered that I had a dilemma. Would there be enough food for
this large assembly? Thankfully, the cold breeze stung and preoccupied the group, swarming
together to keep warm, and it bought us time to send my older sister Teresa to buy more chips,
cookies and two-liter bottles of soda, the predictable party food. I was relieved. The party’s
success, having enough food and fun, would save my standing amongst my peers. Teens finally
filled their stomachs with unhealthy goodness, and I learned a big lesson: have friends RSVP for
a party.
My birthday swimming party brought fifty friends to our house, even though it was the
end of November with a forty-degree wind and even though we did not have enough food for my
guests. For what seemed like hours, people kept arriving and arriving. An endless line of cars
covered our driveway, and I prayed that we would have enough food for the masses to eat. As
boys and girls crowded into our home, I led them across the rustic, open living room to the
bathrooms so that they could change into their swimsuits. Wrapped in towels of greens, reds and
blues and every color imaginable, fifty-two skinny middle schoolers waited impatiently in my
family room for the party to begin. I wondered if snacks would need to be rationed. I let my
friends eat one or two chips, I asked Susan to lead the swarm to the pool area. Susan—the head
cheerleader, a beautiful blonde with long brown legs—barked orders to the half-dressed cluster,
and they all obeyed, moving to the door. Sadly, in the cold air, we noticed that the pool’s cover,
the bubble—a large dome-like structure lifted by an air compressor—was slowly deflating. My
short little mom flew in like a paratrooper to rescue my reputation, quickly patched the bubble
wall, and we crammed into the pool area. Tiptoeing teenagers slid into our heated pool, and the
party began. Squeals and laughter filled the water. Susan and I showed off, jumping and
flipping off the diving board in our similar blue one-piece swimsuits—swimsuits that we (like
most middle school girls) had taken considerable time to find at the local Walmart. We loved
having an audience. It built our silly, girly self-esteem. Everyone started getting hungry, and I
remembered that I had a dilemma. Would there be enough food for this large assembly? The
cold breeze stung and preoccupied the group, swarming together to keep warm, and it bought us
time to send my older sister Teresa to buy more chips, cookies and two-liter bottles of soda, the
predictable party food. I was relieved. The party’s success, having enough food and fun, would
save my standing amongst my peers. Teens filled their stomachs with unhealthy goodness, and I
learned a big lesson: have friends RSVP for a party.
Using transitional words creates flow (coherence) and links ideas in your writing.
They are usually placed at the beginning of a sentence and are followed by a
comma, or they can also be set off with commas and placed anywhere in the
sentence. Be sure to place them in a variety of places within your sentences
(in the beginning, middle, and end).
2. to show location:
3. to show comparison:
4. to show contrast:
6. to show a conclusion:
7. to show emphasis:
8. to show summary:
You have written a report on C.S. Lewis, the British writer. Rereading your
report, you realize that many of your sentences lack FLOW (coherence). To
improve the coherence of your report, complete the sentences below with
transitional words and phrases from the following list; however, you many use
each transition or transitional phrase once.
as a result however yet on the other hand
consequently later for instance
eventually likewise for example
“C.S. Lewis.” Wikipedia, the Free Encyclopedia. Wikipedia, n.d. Web. 21 Dec. 2013.
Leads
I. Typical
It was a day at the end of June 2001. My whole family, including my mom, dad, sister
and me, were waiting for all of my guests to arrive for my birthday party. We prepared the pool
area and cleaned the house the night before so that the day of the party would not be stressful.
The next morning when I was eating breakfast, my mom started yelling for me from the pool
area because there was something wrong.
I ran to the pool area as fast as my legs could carry me, my feet pounding away on the old
wooden deck, hurrying me toward the sound of my mom’s panicked voice. “Rusty!” she
hollered again.
“Coming, Mom!” I gasped and picked up my speed.
I could not imagine what my mother could be hollering about already at 7:00 in the
morning. I thought hard and fast about what I might have done to get her so riled up. Had she
found out about the C that I had made on my Algebra I test? Or had she found out about the way
I had talked to my sister the night before, when we argued about the chores I was supposed to
do? Before I could consider a third possibility, my mom’s voice shattered my thoughts.
“Rusty! Hurry! You’re not going to believe this!”
Narrative Edit
Writer ___________________________ Reader____________________________
1. Does the topic sentence capture attention by using an action, dialogue, or reaction
type of lead?
3. Are the characters developed enough so that the reader can picture them clearly?
5. Is the narrative in chronological order with FLOW because of the transitional words?
8. Does the concluding sentence summarize the story or make a point about its meaning?
9. Are there any misspelled words, errors in punctuation or grammar, or any changes that
need to be made to make the writer more successful?
Title
[1 inch Indent and begin the text of your paper. You should have double spaced
left margin]
after the title. Be sure to meet the length requirement of each essay. Make sure
that you check all of your margins. Learn MLA form, and you will be ready for
college essay format. If you need to go beyond one page text, be sure to follow
[ 1 inch
bottom margin]
Begin typing the rest of your essay 1 inch from the top of the paper. You
will double space after your last name and page number. The entire document is
double spaced. The top margin is always ½ inch. The bottom margin, left margin,
ASSIGNMENT: After you finish the Lead activity and the Narrative Edit,
make a final copy of the narrative in MLA Format. Be prepared to turn the final
copy into your teacher.
I. Purposes of Writing
(Name the purposes of writing, and choose which purpose you will choose with this paper.)
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II. Process of Writing
(Name the steps in the Process of Writing.)
A. ________________
1. ______________: Listing (See Theme Park
Designer handout.)
2. ______________: Drawing
3. Audience: _______________
B. ________________
C. ________________
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Lesson 5—Handout 2 SAMPLE
Theme Park Designer
Directions: On this page brainstorm a list of rides and attractions that you would enjoy
putting in your park. Pretend that the wealthy businessman or businesswoman has
given you an unlimited budget to design your park. Funding is not a problem. Be
creative. Dream big!
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