Reviewer: Muhammad Rickza Fadila Sya’ban

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1. Muhammad Fikry The way he wrote the story is He needs to improve the

Alfarabi really good. expression and the

pronounciations.

2. Muhammad Hafidz He is good at the He needs to improve the way he

Hakami pronounciation, and the story is share the story, intonation,

easy to understand expression.

3. Muhammad Haykal The story is really good and the Sometimes he just need to be

way he speak is prefect, he calm down and not too

entertain the audience. dramatized every words, but so

far he did really good!

4. Muhammad Nabhan He choose simple sentence to He needs to improve the

Hanif say, so its good to make every pronoun, intonation, and he need

audience to understand easly. to relax and keep practice in

story telling to get confort on it.

5. Muhammad Nail The pronoun is really good, and He needs to improve how to

he looks confident, so audience make audience still get

could get his attention easly interesting in every story so he

should use intonation and some

expression.

6. Muhammad Rickza Im good at pronounciations, I should memorize it more to

Fadila Sya’ban and make it like conversation to make it good at the flow of the
 get audience attention. story line.

7. Muhammad Rizky I really like the way he use the He needs to memorize the story

Mulyana Syahika intonation and it works to make to make it better, and need to

audience more interesting about improve some of

the story. pronounciations.

8. Muhammad Sazidan I love the way he tell the story He needs to improve about word

confidently choice, the intonation and

expression.

9. Muhammad Subhan He good at making audience He speak too fast and he needs to

intersting about the story. improve the intonations and

memorize the story.

10. Muhammad Usamah The way he use intonation is He needs to memorize the story

Syamil good to make audience and the improve the expression.

interesting, and he speak so

confident.

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