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Shir Hashirim - English Transtropilation (Len Fellman 2021)
Shir Hashirim - English Transtropilation (Len Fellman 2021)
an English version by Len Fellman to be sung to the trope melodies from Joshua R. Jacobson’s CHANTING THE HEBREW BIBLE
based on the translations of Ariel and Chana Bloch, H.L. Ginsberg, Marcia Falk,
and the J.P.S. Tanach, the Jerusalem Bible, and the New King James Bible.
Current version: March 24, 2021
Chapter 1
מה׃ ֹ ֽ א א א ִׁש ֥ יר ַהִּׁש ִ ֖ירים ֲאֶׁש ֥ ר ִלְׁש ֹל 1:1 The Song of Songs , which is of Solomon.
ֹּדדיָך ֖ ֶ י־טֹובים ִ֥ ֽ ב יִ ָּׁש ֵ ֙קנִ ֙י ִמְּנ ִׁש ֣יקֹות ִּ֔פ יהּו ִּכ 2 [Let him kiss me] with the kisses of his mouth, for better is your love than wine.
ּתּורק ֣ ַ טֹובים ֶׁש ֖ ֶמן ִ֔ יח ְׁש ָמ ֶנ֣יָך ֙ ַ ִמָּי ֽיִ ן׃ ג ְל ֵ ֙ר 3 For the fragrance of your ointments [are so good], oil [poured forth] is your name.
ְׁש ֶ ֑מָך ַעל־ֵּכ ֖ן ֲע ָל ֥מֹות ֲא ֵה ֽבּוָך׃
Therefore the young women desire you.
יאנִ י ַה ֶּ֜מ ֶלְך ַ֨ ּוצה ֱה ִב ָ ד ׇמְׁש ֵ ֖כנִ י ַא ֲח ֶ ֣ריָך ָּנ ֑ר
4 Draw me: [after you] we will run. He brought me––the king––[into his chambers].
֤ילה וְ נִ ְׂש ְמ ָח ֙ה ָּב֔ ְך נַ זְ ִּכ ֤ ָירה ד ֶ ֹ֙ד ֙יָך ָ ֲח ָד ָ ֗ריו נָ ִג
ִמ ַּ֔י יִ ן ֵמיָׁש ִ ֖רים ֲא ֵה ֽבּוָך׃ [We will be glad] and rejoice, [you and I]. We savor our love more than wine; rightly [do they want you].
ִאוה ְּב נ֖ ֹות יְ רּוָׁש ָל͏֑ם ֔ ָ ָחֹורה ֲאנִ ֙י ְ ֽונ ֤ ָ ה ְׁש 5 Dark I am but lovely, daughters of Jerusalem, like the tents of Kedar, like the pillars of Solomon.
מה׃ ֹ ֽ יעֹות ְׁש ֹל ֖ ְּכ ׇא ֳה ֵל֣י ֵק ָ ֔דר ִּכ ִיר 6 [Don’t stare at me] [because of my dark] complexion; [it was gazed on] by the sun.
ו ַאל־ִּת ְר ֙אּונִ ֙י ֶׁש ֲא ִנ֣י ְׁש ַח ְר ֔חֹ ֶרת ֶׁש ְּׁש זָ ַ ֖פ ְתנִ י The sons of my mother [turned their anger on me]. [They made me] guard the vineyards.
רּו־בי ָׂש ֻ֙מנִ ֙י נ ֵֹט ָ ֣רה ִ֗ ַהָּׁש ֑ ֶמׁש ְּב ֵנ֧י ִאִּמ ֣ י ִ ֽנ ֲח
The vineyard belonging to me , I did not guard.
ת־הְּכ ָר ִ֔מים ַּכ ְר ִ ֥מי ֶׁש ִּל ֖ י ֥ל ֹא נָ ָ ֽט ְרִּת י׃ ַ ֶא
ז ַהִּג ָ֣ידה ִּ֗ל י ֶׁש ֤ ָ ֽא ֲה ָב ֙ה נַ ְפ ִׁ֔ש י ֵא ָיכ֣ה ִת ְר ֔ ֶעה 7 [Now tell me]—[reveal to me], since you are loved by my soul: [where it is] that you feed––
יכה ַּת ְרִּב ֣ יץ ַּב ֽ ׇּצ ֳה ָ ֑ריִ ם ַׁש ָּל ָ ֤מה ֶ ֽא ְהיֶ ֙ה ֖ ָ ֵא [where you rest] your flock at noontime?
ְּכ ֣עֹ ְט ָ֔יה ַ ֖על ֶע ְד ֵ ֥רי ֲח ֵב ֶ ֽריָך׃ For why [should I be] [one who loses] the way among the flocks of the shepherds?
י־לְך
ָ ֞ עי ֔ ָלְך ַהָּי ָ ֖פה ַּב ָּנ ִׁש ֑ ים ְ ֽצ ִא ֙ ִ ם־ל ֹא ֵ ֽת ְד ֤ ח ִא 8 [If it is not] known [to you], O loveliest of women, [go then and follow] the tracks [made by the sheep],
ֹּיתיִ ְך ַ ֖על
ַ֔ עי ֶאת־ְּג ִד ֙ ִ ְּב ִע ְק ֵב֣י ַה ֹּ֗צאן ְּור
and graze [your little goats] beside the tents of the shepherds.
ִמְׁש ְּכ נ֥ ֹות ָהר ִ ֹֽעים׃
9 To a mare in the chariots of Pharaoh, [I liken you], my beloved.
יתיְך ַר ְעיָ ִ ֽתי׃ ֖ ִ תי ְּב ִר ְכ ֵב֣י ַפ ְר ֔עֹה ִּד ִּמ ֙ ִ ט ְל ֻ ֽס ָס
רּוזים׃ ֽ ִ ארְך ַּב ֲח ֖ ֵ ֹּתרים ַצָּו ֔ ִ ח יִ ְ֙ך ַּב ַ֙י נָ או֤ ּו ְל ָ י 10 Fair are your cheeks [with plaited wreaths], your neck [with strings of jewels].
ּתֹורי זָ ָה ֙ב ַנ ֲֽעֶׂש ה־ ָּ֔ל ְך ִ ֖עם נְ ֻק ּ֥דֹות ַהָּכ ֽ ֶסף׃ ֤ ֵ יא 11 Earrings of gold [we will make for you], with filigree of silver.
יחֹו׃ ֽ יב ַעד־ֶׁש ֤ ַה ֶּ֙מ ֶל ְ֙ך ִּב ְמ ִס ּ֔בֹו נִ ְרִּד ֖ י נָ ַ ֥תן ֵר 12 While the king [was on his couch], my spikenard gave forth its fragrance.
ּדֹודי ֔ ִלי ֵּב ֥ ין ָׁש ַ ֖די יָ ִ ֽלין׃ ֙ ִ יג ְצ ֨רֹור ַה ֹּ֤מר ׀ 13 A bundle of myrrh is my beloved [to me], between my breasts lying all night.
Chapter 4
תי ִהָּנ ְ֣ך יָ ֔ ָפה ֙ ִ ָד א ִה ָּ֨נ ְך יָ ָ ֤פה ַר ְעי 4:1 Ah, how fine, my love, [how you are] fine! Your eyes like doves, behind your veil.
יֹונים ִמַּב ֖ ַעד ְל ַצָּמ ֵ ֑תְך ַׂש ְע ֵר ְ֙ך ְּכ ֵע ֶ֣דר ִ֔ ֵע ַינ֣יִ ְך Your hair like a flock of goats [bounding down] the slopes of Gilead.
ָ ֽה ִע ִּ֔ז ים ֶׁש ָּג ְל ׁ֖שּו ֵמ ַ ֥הר ִּג ְל ָ ֽעד׃ ב ִׁש ַּנ֙ יִ ְ֙ך ְּכ ֵע ֶ֣דר 2 Your teeth [like a herd of sheep] climbing up [from the washing pool].
ן־ה ַר ְח ָ ֑צה ֶׁש ֻּכ ָּל ֙ם ָ צּובֹות ֶׁש ָע ֖לּו ִמ ֔ ַהְּק [All of them] alike, barren ones there are none, among them.
ימֹות וְ ַׁש ֻּכ ָל֖ה ֵ ֥אין ָּב ֶ ֽהם׃ ג ְּכ ֤חּוט ַהָּׁש נִ ֙י ֔ ַמ ְת ִא
3 Like a thread of crimson [are your lips], your words are enchanting.
ּמֹון
֙ או֑ה ְּכ ֶ ֤פ ַלח ָ ֽה ִר ֶ ָּומ ְדָּב ֵ ֖רְך נ ִ תֹותיִ ְך
ַ֔ ִׂש ְפ
ַרָּק ֵ֔תְך ִמַּב ֖ ַעד ְל ַצָּמ ֵ ֽתְך׃ ד ְּכ ִמגְ ַּד ֤ ל ָּד וִ ֙יד Like a slice of pomegranate [are your cheeks] behind your veil.
ארְך ָּב נ֖ ּוי ְל ַת ְלִּפ ּי֑ ֹות ֶ ֤א ֶלף ַהָּמ גֵ ֙ן ָּת ל֣ ּוי ֔ ֵ ַצָּו 4 [Like the tower] of David [is your neck], raised in splendor.
ֹּברים׃ ה ְׁש ֵנ֥י ָׁש ַ ֛דיִ ְך ֽ ִ ָע ֔ ָליו ֹּ֖כל ִׁש ְל ֵ ֥טי ַהִּג A thousand shields hang upon them, all the quivers of the warriors.
רֹועים֖ ִ אֹומי ְצ ִבָּי ֑ה ָה ֣ ֵ ִּכ ְׁש ֵנ֥י ֳע ָפ ִ ֖רים ְּת 5 Your [two breasts] are like two fawns , twins of a gazelle, grazing in a field of lilies.
ּוח ַהּי֔ ֹום וְ ָנ֖סּו ַהְּצ ָל ִ ֑לים ֙ ַ ַּב ּׁשֹוַׁש ִּנ ֽ ים׃ ו ַ ֤עד ֶׁש ָּי ֙פ
6 Before there breathes the day, [and there flee away] the shadows,
בֹונֽה׃ ָ ל־הר ַה ּ֔מֹור וְ ֶאל־ִּג ְב ַ ֖עת ַהְּל ֣ ַ ֵ ֤א ֶלְך ִ ֙לי ֶא
ּומּום ֵ ֥אין ָּב ֽ ְך׃ ֖ ז ֻּכ ָּל ְ֤ך יָ ָפ ֙ה ַר ְעיָ ִ֔תי [I will make] my way to the mount of myrrh, to the hill of frankincense.
נֹון ַּכ ָּ֔ל ה ִאִּת ֖ י ִמְּל ָבנ֣ ֹון ֙ ח ִאִּת ֤ י ִמְּל ָב 7 You are all fair, my beloved, no blemish is in you.
ֹואי ָּת ׁ֣ש ִּורי ׀ ֵמ ֣ר ֹאׁש ֲא ָמ ָ֗נה ֵמ ֤ר ֹאׁש ִ ָּת ֑ב 8 [Come with me] from the mountains, my bride––[with me] from Lebanon do come. [Look down]
יר וְ ֶח ְר ֔מֹון ִמְּמ עֹנ֣ ֹות ֲא ָרי֔ ֹות ֵ ֽמ ַה ְר ֵ ֖רי ֙ ְִׂש נ from the top of Amana, from the peak of Senir and Hermon, from dens of lions, from haunts of leopards.
נְ ֵמ ִ ֽרים׃ ט ִלַּב ְבִּת ֖ נִ י ֲאח ִ ֹ֣תי ַכָּל ֑ה ִלַּב ְב ִּ֙ת נִ ֙י
9 [My heart you ravish], my sister––my bride,
באחד ְּב ַא ַ ֣חת ֵמ ֵע ַ֔יניִ ְך ְּב ַא ַ ֥חד ֲע ָנ֖ק
[my heart you capture] [with one glance] of your eyes, with one jewel of your necklace.
ִמַּצ ְּו ר ָֹנֽיִ ְך׃ י ַמה־ָּי ֥פּו ד ַ ֹ֖דיִ ְך ֲאח ִ ֹ֣תי ַכָּל ֑ה
ה־ֹּטבּו ד ַ ֹ֙דיִ ְ֙ך ִמ ַּ֔י יִ ן וְ ֵ ֥ר ַיח ְׁש ָמ ַנ֖יִ ְך֤ ַמ 10 How sweet is your love , my sister––my bride,
ִמׇּכ ל־ְּב ָׂש ִ ֽמים׃ [how much better] than wine is your love, the fragrance of your oils than any spice.
Chapter 5
מֹורי
֙ ִ יתי ִ ה ָא ִ ֤ר ֒ אתי ְלגַ ִּנ ֮י ֲאח ִ ֹ֣תי ַכָּל ִ ֣ ה א ָּב 5:1 I have come [to my garden], my sister––[my bride]. [I have gathered] my myrrh and my spices,
ִעם־ְּב ָׂש ִ֔מי ָא ַ ֤כ ְלִּת י יַ ְע ִ ֙רי ִעם־ִּד ְב ִׁ֔ש י
eaten of my honeycomb with its honey, drunk my wine and my milk.
ם־ח ָל ִ ֑בי ִא ְכל֣ ּו ֵר ֔ ִעים ְׁש ֥תּו ֲ יתי יֵ ִינ֖י ִע ִ ָׁש ִ ֥ת
[Eat now], my friends, and drink––get drunk on love.
ּדֹודים׃ֽ ִ וְ ִׁש ְכ ֖רּו
א* ב ֲא ִ ֥ני יְ ֵׁש ָנ֖ה וְ ִלִּב ֣ י ֵע֑ר ֣קֹול ׀ 2 I was asleep , but my heart was awake. [I bid you hearken now]! My beloved [surely now is knocking]!
תי יֹונָ ִ ֣תי ֙ ִ ָי־לי ֲאח ִ ֹ֤תי ַר ְעי ִ ֞ דֹופק ִּפ ְת ִח ֵ ֗ ּדֹודיִ֣ “[Open to me], my sister, my love, my dove, my perfect one.
יסיֵ ּצֹותי ְר ִ ֥ס ֖ ַ ֻא־טל ְקו ָ֔ ַתָּמ ִ֔תי ֶׁש ֹּראִׁש ֙י נִ ְמ ָל For my head [is drenched with dew], my hair with the dewdrops of night.”
יכ ָכה ֖ ָ ָ ֽליְ ָלה׃ ג ָּפ ַׁש֙ ְטִּת ֙י ֶאת־ֻּכ ׇּת נְ ִּ֔ת י ֵא 3 [But I have taken off] my clothes.[How can I] [put them back on]?
יכ ָכה ֥ ָ ת־רגְ ַל֖י ֵאַ ֶא ְלָּב ֶׁש ֑ ָּנ ה ָר ַ ֥ח ְצִּת י ֶא
I have washed my feet . How then can I get them dirty?
ֲא ַטְּנ ֵ ֽפם׃
ּומ ַ ֖עי ָה ֥מּו ֵ ן־ה ֔חֹר ַ ּדֹודי ָׁש ַל֤ח יָ ֙דֹו ִמ ִ֗ ד 4 [My beloved one] [stretches out] his hand for the latch, and my heart leaps for him.
דֹודי וְ יָ ַ ֣די ֑ ִ ָע ָ ֽליו׃ ה ַ ֥ק ְמִּת ֽ י ֲא ִנ֖י ִל ְפ ֹּ֣ת ַח ְל 5 Then I arose to open [for my love].
ֹתי ֣מֹור ע ֵֹ֔בר ַ ֖על ַּכ ּ֥פֹות ֙ ַ פּו־מֹור וְ ֶא ְצְּב ע ֗ ָנ ְֽט [My hands] [are dripping with myrrh]; my fingers [with myrrh] running onto the handle of the lock.
ַהַּמ נְ ֽעּול׃
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דֹודי ָח ַ ֣מק ָע ָ ֑בר ֖ ִ ְדֹודי ו ֔ ִ ו ָּפ ַ ֤ת ְחִּת ֽ י ֲאנִ ֙י ְל 5:6 I opened the door for my beloved, but my beloved had turned and was gone. My soul [went out of me]
יהּו וְ ֣ל ֹא
֙ נַ ְפִׁש ֙י ָי ְֽצ ָ ֣אה ְב ַדְּב ֔רֹו ִּב ַּק ְׁש ִּ֙ת [when he spoke]. [I sought him out], [but did not] find him. I called him, but he did not answer.
אתיו וְ ֥ל ֹא ָע ָנֽנִ י׃ ז ְמ ָצ ֻ ֧אנִ י ֖ ִ אתיהּו ְק ָר ִ֔ ְמ ָצ 7 [They found me]––[the town watchmen], who patrol the city . They beat me; they bruised me.
ֹּסב ִ ֥בים ָּב ִ ֖עיר ִה ּ֣כּונִ י ְפ ָצ ֑עּונִ י ְ ֹּׁשמ ִ ֛רים ַה ְ ַה
They tore my shawl from my shoulders, these keepers of the walls.
ֹׁשמ ֵ ֖רי ַהח ֹֽמֹות׃ ְ ת־ר ִד ִיד֙י ֵ ֽמ ָע ֔ ַלי ְ נָ ְׂש ֤אּו ֶא
8 I hereby charge you , daughters of Jerusalem,
ִח ִהְׁש ַּב ֥ ְעִּת י ֶא ְת ֶ ֖כם ְּב נ֣ ֹות יְ רּוָׁש ָל͏֑ם
ת־ּדֹודי ַמה־ַּת ִּג ֣ידּו ֔לֹו ִ֔ אּו ֶא֙ ִ ֽאם־ִּת ְמ ְצ if you find my beloved, this [you should tell him]: that in the fever of love am I.
ה־ּדֹודְך ִמ ּ֔דֹוד ֵ֣ חֹולת ַא ֲה ָ ֖בה ָ ֽאנִ י׃ ט ַמ ֥ ַ ֶׁש 9 [How is your lover unlike] [any other lover], O fairest of women?
ה־ּדֹודְך ִמ ּ֔דֹוד ֶׁש ָּכ ֖ ָכה ֵ֣ ַהָּי ָ ֖פה ַּב ָּנ ִׁש ֑ ים ַמ [How is your lover unlike] [any other lover], that you so do charge us?
ּדֹודי ַצ ֙ח וְ ָא ֔דֹום ָּד ג֖ ּול ֥ ִ ִהְׁש ַּב ְעָּת ֽ נּו׃ י 10 My beloved is clear-skinned and ruddy, standing out [among ten thousand].
ּצֹות ֙יו
ָ ֻאׁשֹו ֶּכ ֶ֣תם ָּפ ֑ ז ְקו ֖ ֹ ֵמ ְר ָב ָ ֽבה׃ יא ר 11 His head is finest gold; the mane of his hair black like the raven.
עֹורב׃ יב ֵע ֕ ָיניו ֽ ֵ ַּת ְלַּת ִּ֔ל ים ְׁש ח ֹ֖רֹות ָּכ 12 [His eyes] are like doves at the brooks of water, bathed in milk, resting [by brimming pools].
צֹות ֶּב ֽ ָח ֔ ָלב֙ ל־א ִ ֣פ ֵיקי ָ ֑מיִ ם ֽר ֹ ֲח ֲ יֹונ֖ים ַע ִ ְּכ 13 His cheeks are like beds of spices, like banks of scented herbs.
רּוג֣ת ַ ל־מֵּל ֽ את׃ יג ְל ָחיָ ֙ו ַּכ ֲע ִ יְֹׁש ֖בֹות ַע
His lips are like lilies, dripping with flowing myrrh.
תֹות ֙יוָ ַה ֹּ֔בֶׂש ם ִמגְ ְּד ל֖ ֹות ֶמ ְר ָק ִ ֑חים ִׂש ְפ
14 His arm is a scepter of gold, studded with fine jewels.
ֽׁש ֹוַׁש ִּ֔נ ים נ ְֹט ֖פֹות ֥מֹור ע ֵ ֹֽבר׃ יד יָ ָד ֙יו ְּג ִל ֵיל֣י
His belly is polished ivory, inlaid with sapphires.
זָ ָ֔הב ְמ ֻמָּל ִ ֖אים ַּב ַּת ְרִׁש ֑ יׁש ֵמ ָע ֙יו ֶעֶׁ֣ש ת ֵׁ֔ש ן
ׁשֹוק ֙יו ַע ּ֣מ ֵּודי ֵׁ֔ש ׁש ָ ְמ ֻעֶּל ֶ֖פת ַסִּפ ִ ֽירים׃ טו 15 His legs are pillars of marble, set [in bases of fine gold].
הּו ַּכ ְּל ָבנ֔ ֹון ֙ י־פז ַמ ְר ֵ֙א ֑ ָ ֵל־א ְדנ ַ ְמיֻ ָּס ִ ֖דים ַע His countenance [is that of Lebanon], stately as the cedars.
ּכֹו ַ ֽמ ְמ ַת ִּ֔ק ים וְ ֻכּל֖ ֹו ֙ ָּב ֖חּור ָּכ ֲא ָר ִ ֽזים׃ טז ִח 16 His mouth is most sweet. He is altogether delightful.
דֹוד֙י וְ ֶז֣ה ֵר ֔ ִעי ְּב נ֖ ֹות ִ ַמ ֲח ַמִּד ֑ ים ֶז֤ה Such is my beloved, such is my friend, O daughters of Jerusalem.
יְ רּוָׁש ָ ͏ֽלםִ׃
ּדֹודְך ַהָּי ָ ֖פה ַּב ָּנ ִׁש ֑ ים ָ ֚אנָ ה ֔ ֵ ו א ָ ֚אנָ ה ָה ַלְ֣ך Chapter 6
ּדֹוד֙י יָ ַ ֣רד
ִ דֹודְך ּונְ ַב ְקֶׁש ֖ ּנּו ִעָּמ ֽ ְך׃ ב ֔ ֵ ָּפ ָנ֣ה 6:1 Whither [has your beloved] gone, O fairest of women?
עֹות ַּב ַּג ִּ֔נ ים
֙ ְלגַ ּנ֔ ֹו ַל ֲע ֻרג֖ ֹות ַה ֹּ֑בֶׂש ם ִל ְר Whither [has your beloved] turned? [Let us seek him] with you.
וְ ִל ְל ֖קֹט ֽׁש ֹוַׁש ִּנ ֽ ים׃ 2 My beloved has gone down to his garden, to the beds of spices,
to graze in the gardens, and to gather lilies.
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דֹודי ֔ ִלי ָהר ֶ ֹ֖עה ַּב ּׁשֹוַׁש ִּנ ֽ ים׃ ֣ ִ ְדֹודי ו֙ ִ ג ֲא ִנ֤י ְל 6:3 [I am] my beloved’s, and my beloved is mine. He browses among the lilies.
או֖הָ ָתי ְּכ ִת ְר ָ֔צה נ ֙ ִ ָד יָ ֨ ָפה ַ ֤אְּת ַר ְעי 4 Beautiful [you are], my love, as Tirzah, fair like Jerusalem, awesome [as the stars in their courses].
ִּכ ירּוָׁש ָל͏֑םִ ֲאיֻ ָּמ ֖ ה ַּכ ִּנ ְדָּג ֽלֹות׃ ה ָה ֵ ֤סִּב י ֵעינַ֙ יִ ְ֙ך
5 [Turn away] your eyes from me, because they overwhelm me.
ִמֶּנ גְ ִּד ֔ י ֶׁש ֥ ֵ ֖הם ִה ְר ִה ֻיב֑נִ י ַׂש ְע ֵר ְ֙ך ְּכ ֵע ֶ֣דר ָ ֽה ִע ִּ֔ז ים
Your hair is like a flock of goats [bounding down] [the slopes of Gilead].
ן־הִּג ְל ָ ֽעד׃ ַ ֶׁש ָּג ְל ׁ֖שּו ִמ
ן־ה ַר ְח ָ ֑צה ָ ו ִׁש ַּנ֙ יִ ְ֙ך ְּכ ֵע ֶ֣דר ָ ֽה ְר ֵח ֔ ִלים ֶׁש ָעל֖ ּו ִמ 6 Your teeth are like a flock of ewes [climbing up] [from the washing pool].
ימֹות וְ ַׁש ֻּכ ָל֖ה ֵ ֥אין ָּב ֶ ֽהם׃ ֔ ֶׁש ֻּכ ָּל ֙ם ַמ ְת ִא All of them alike, [barren ones] there are none, among them.
ּמֹון ַרָּק ֵ֔תְך ִמַּב ֖ ַעד ְל ַצָּמ ֵ ֽתְך׃ ֙ ז ְּכ ֶ ֤פ ַלח ָה ִר 7 Like a slice of pomegranate are your cheeks behind your veil.
ח ִׁש ִּׁש ֥ ים ֵ֙הָּמ ֙ה ְמ ָל ֔כֹות ּוְׁש מ ִֹנ֖ים ִּפ ֽ ַילגְ ִׁש ֑ ים 8 Sixty there are of queens; eighty [of the king’s women], and maidens without number.
וַ ֲע ָל ֖מֹות ֵ ֥אין ִמ ְסָּפ ֽ ר׃
9 One alone is my dove, [my perfect one], the only one of her mother.
יא ְל ִא ָּ֔מ ּה ֙ יא יֹונָ ִ ֣תי ַתָּמ ִ֔תי ַא ַ ֥חת ִה ֙ ט ַא ַ ֥חת ִה
ּוה
ָ נֹות ַוֽיְ ַאְּׁש ֔ר ֙ ּוה ָב ָ ֹול ְדָּת ֑ ּה ָר ֤א ַ ָּֽב ָ ֥רה ִ ֖היא ְלי Pure is she [to the one who bore her].
ּוה׃
ָ ּופ ַילגְ ִׁש ֖ ים ַוֽיְ ַה ְל ֽל ֽ ִ ְמ ָל ֥כֹות [They see her]––the maidens––[and call her blessed]. The queens and the concubines praise her.
י־ז ֹאת ַהִּנ ְׁש ָק ָ ֖פה ְּכ מֹו־ָׁש ֑ ַחר ֥ י ִמ 10 Who is that rising like the dawn,
יָ ָ ֣פה ַכְּל ָב ָ֗נה ָּב ָר ֙ה ַּכ ֽ ַח ָּ֔מ ה ֲאיֻ ָּמ ֖ ה ַּכ ִּנ ְדָּג ֽלֹות׃ bright [as the white moon], radiant [as the blazing sun], awesome [as the stars in their courses].
גֹוז יָ ַ ֔ר ְדִּת י ִל ְר ֖אֹות ֙ יא ֶאל־ִּג ַּנ ֤ת ֱא
11 [To the orchard] of walnuts [I went down], to see the new green by the brook.
אֹות ֲה ָ ֽפ ְר ָ ֣חה ַה ֶּ֔ג ֶפן ֵה ֵנ֖צּו֙ ְּב ִאֵּב ֣י ַהָּנ ַ֑חל ִל ְר
To see: [had they blossomed]––the grapevines? Had they flowered––the pomegranates?
ֹּמנים׃ יב ֣ל ֹא יָ ַ ֔ד ְעִּת י נַ ְפִׁש ֣ י ָׂש ַ֔מ ְתנִ י ֽ ִ ָה ִר
ַמ ְרְּכ ֖בֹות ַעִּמ ֥ י נָ ִ ֽדיב׃ 12 And before [I knew it], my soul [had set me] upon the chariots of my people so noble.
Chapter 7
ּוביִ ּובי ׁ֖ש ִ ּול ִּ֔מ ית ׁ֥ש ַ ּובי ַה ּׁ֣ש
֙ ִ ּובי ׁ֙ש ִ א ׁ֤ש 7:1 Do it again, O Shulamite! Dance again , [that we may watch you].
ּול ִּ֔מ ית
ַ וְ נֶ ֱחזֶ ה־ָּב ֑ ְך ַ ֽמה־ֶּת ֱח ֙זּו ַּב ּׁ֣ש
“[Why will you gaze] at the Shulamite, as she whirls [down the row of dancers]?”
ִּכ ְמח ַ ֹ֖לת ַ ֽהַּמ ֲח ָנֽיִ ם׃ ב ַמה־ָּי ֧פּו ְפ ָע ַ ֛מיִ ְך
ּמּוקי יְ ֵר ַ֔כיִ ְך ְּכ ֣מֹו ֲח ָל ִ֔אים
֣ ֵ ַּב ְּנ ָע ִ ֖לים ַּב ת־נָ ִ ֑דיב ַח 2 [How lovely] [are your steps] in sandals, [O daughter of nobles]!
ַמ ֲעֵׂש ֖ ה יְ ֵ ֥די ׇאָּמ ֽ ן׃ ג ׇׁש ְר ֵר ְ֙ך ַאַּג ֣ן ַהַּס֔ ַהר The curves of your thighs [are like] ornaments, work of the hands of a craftsman.
סּוג֖הָ ַאל־יֶ ְח ַ ֖סר ַהָּמ ֑ זֶ ג ִּב ְטנֵ ְ֙ך ֲע ֵר ַ ֣מת ִחִּט֔ ים 3 Your navel is the bowl of the moon. [May it not lack] [its fill of wine].
ַּב ּׁשֹוַׁש ִּנ ֽ ים׃ Your belly is a heap of wheat, surrounded by lilies.
Chapter 8
יֹונ֖ק ְׁש ֵ ֣די ִאִּמ ֑ י
ֵ ח א ִ ֤מי יִ ֶּת נְ ָ֙ך ְּכ ָ ֣אח ֔ ִלי8:1 If only you were a brother to me, [if you had nursed] at the breast of my mother,
חּוץ ֶאָּׁש ֣ ְק ָ֔ך ַּג ֖ם לֹא־יָ ֻ ֥בזּו ִ ֽלי׃
֙ ֶ ֽא ְמ ָצ ֲאָך֤ ַב
[then if I met you] on the street I [could kiss you], [and none] would despise me.
יאָך֛ ֶאל־ֵּב ֥ ית ִאִּמ ֖ י ְּת ַלְּמ ֵ ֑דנִ י ֲ ב ֶאנְ ָ ֽהגְ ָ֗ך ֲא ִ ֽב2 [I should lead you], [I would bring you] to the house of my mother ,[of her who bore me].
אלֹו
֙ ֹ ֹּמני׃ ג ְׂש מ ֽ ִ [ ַאְׁש ְק ָ֙ך ִמַּי ֣יִ ן ָה ֶ ֔ר ַקח ֵמ ֲע ִ ֖סיס ִרI would let you drink] spiced wine, my pomegranate wine.
ְּבקנִ י׃
ֽ ֵ ימינ֖ ֹו ְּת ַח
ִ ַּת ֣ ַחת רֹא ִׁ֔ש י ִ ֽו3 [His left hand] was under my head; [his right hand] embraced me.
The texts can be used to do consecutive translation, i.e. leyning a phrase in Hebrew, followed by the corresponding phrase sung in English.
Some of my recordings demonstrate this. I do this frequently when leyning for groups that either know little Hebrew, or that don’t have a chumash in
front of them.
I favor literal translations (e.g. “cut a covenant”) to call attention to Hebrew idioms, and towards simpler (even if less accurate) words (e.g. Ex.
12:7 “beam above the door” rather than “lintel”) to be easier to follow. If my readings provoke a discussion of the Hebrew, I consider that as justification
for using less-than-idiomatic English. I try to find just the right balance between “literalness” and “listenable-ness”. A primary goal is throwing light
on the Hebrew syntax.
In order to adapt the trope symbols to a left-to-right language like English, I reversed the direction of the trope symbols:
mercha tipcha munach tevir mapakh or yetiv kadma or pashta geresh gershayim telisha katana telisha gedola
(Generally speaking the conjunctive tropes such as mercha, munach, mapakh, kadma, and telisha katana “lean toward” the words they “conjoin” to, while the
disjunctive tropes such as tipcha, geresh, gershayim, and telisha gedola “lean away” from the words that follow, so as to create a sense of separation.)
The trope symbol is normally placed under the accented syllable, unless it is a pre-positive accent (telisha gedola, placed at the beginning of the word
or phrase) or a post-positive one (telisha katana or pashta, placed at the end of the word or phrase).
The Hebrew text frequently puts a makkeph (which is like a hyphen) between words in order to treat them as a single word to be chanted. I
use a different system for English: If an entire English phrase is to be chanted to a single trope melody, I place it between grey brackets, as in this
phrase from the Book of Lamentations:
[clings to her skirts]
The leyner is invited to fit this phrase to the Eicha “rivi’i” melody in whatever way seems most natural.
Again, the leyner should decide on the most natural way to fit the phrase to the combined trope melody.
I put words in gray which I consider essential but which don’t strictly match the Hebrew. I also “pad” some phrases with extra words in gray
to fill out a musical phrase nicely. Different trope systems vary widely in the length of the musical phrase used, so the words in gray may or not be
used depending on the leyner’s cantillation system. In particular, the tropes telisha g’dola ( ), legarmeh, metigah-zakef, and pazer vary widely in the
muscial phrases used for chanting. (And please indulge me in my whimsical treatments of shalshelet.)
“Metigah-zakef”is a special trope combination which can be recognized by a kadma and a zakef katon appearing on the same Hebrew word
(again, a makkeph makes two words into one). (There are several examples in Genesis 18 & 19, beginning with 18:16). I indicate this by placing the
corresponding English phrase in grey brackets:
[Take heed––take care for yourself]
In some trope systems (viz. cantor Moshe Haschel in “Navigating the Bible II”) this is given a distinctive melody—I add extra syllables to fill out
the musical phrase (as in “take care” in this example). Haschel’s system also chants the trope munach as legarmeh more often than other systems do.
I don’t write a single word of translation without first hearing the melody of the phrase in my mind, following one of two trope systems:
The one by Portnoy and Wolff (The Art of Cantillation) or the one by Joshua R. Jacobson (Chanting the Hebrew Bible).
I transcribe the name as YHWH (in small caps). I almost always chant this as yud-hey-vav-hey, which I have discovered fits marvelously into
several of the trope melodies. But of course the leyner can choose to pronounce it as “God” or “Adonai”.
Warning on the Hebrew text: The text I use for the English trope system is from Aryeh Kaplan; the Hebrew text I display is from Wikisource.
Occasionally (but rarely) a phrase will use different tropes in the two systems.
The English translations I mostly use (besides several scholarly commentaries) are the following:
Aryeh Kaplan, ‘The Living Torah’ (1981) (also my source for proper names & transliterations)
Richard Elliott Friedman, ‘The Bible With Sources Revealed’ (2003)
Everett Fox, ‘The Five Books of Moses’ (1997)
The Stone Edition ‘Tanach’ (1996)
JPS ‘Hebrew-English Tanach’, (2nd Ed. 2000), along with Orlinsky, ‘Notes on the New Translation of the Torah’ (1969)
Robert Alter, ‘The Five Books of Moses’ (2004)
Commentaries in the ‘Anchor Bible’ series
Rotherham, The Emphasized Bible (1902)
The Jerusalem Bible (1966) (also my source for topic headings)
The New King James Bible (1982)