Activity 7

The following erroneous statements are taken from the application letters made by students. Rewrite the
statements by correcting all errors in grammar, capitalization, and punctuation marks.

Answer

1. In this connection, I wish to apply for the position.

2. With regards to my character, ability, and experiences, here are some personnel you can refer to.

3. I wish to come for an interview anytime you need me.

4. I intend to write you because, as a social work graduate, I would like to apply to your agency as a

social worker.

5. I also serve as student aid from the president and reach-out office, where I am further trained.

6. I have heard that your department needs a secretary. When I heard that, I got interested.

7. I heard from Ms. Ammay that you have a vacant position in teaching. And I wish to apply in your

respective office.

8. I’m 21 years old and presently a resident of Sto. Nino, Cagayan. I’ve had experience as one of the

assistants in our town for one year.

9. I wish to apply for the position of secretary, which I heard about from Ms. Tayad on February 1,

2003.

10. I’m presently residing in St. Nino, Cagayan, where I spent my 2-year experience at the St. Nino

DSWD office as a social worker assistant.