MY ENGLISH A/B SCHOOL BASED ASSESSMENT

ON THE EFFECTS OF CIGARETTE SMOKING ON TEENAGERS.

Name: Alpha Beststudent

Candidate number: 1000220000

Centre Number: 100022

Year of examination: 2024

Theme: “The Effects of Drug Abuse on Teenagers”

Topic: “The Effects of Cigarette Smoking on Teenagers”

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 TABLE OF CONTENTS

Title Page

Cover 1

Table of Contents 2

Plan of Investigation 3

Reflection 1 4

Reflection 2 5

Reflection 3 6

Written Report 7

Plan of Oral Presentation 8

References 9

Appendix: 10 – 16

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 PLAN OF INVESTIGATION

(a) Title, Theme, Topic & Why did you choose this issue/topic/theme/event? /4

(b) What are the expected benefits to you as a student of English? /3

(c) How do you intend to collect relevant information on your issue/topic/theme/event and use this /3

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REFLECTION 1 Commented [B1]: In the first entry the student must indicate
how each piece of data helped shape his or her thinking about
the issue/topic/ theme/event.

164 words
5/5

All three reflections demonstrated adherence to the guidelines

and word limits, good control of language and grammar and
ability to identify and analyse the required elements.

15/3=5

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REFLECTION 2 Commented [B2]: The second entry should discuss the use of
language in the material selected.

159 words
5/5

3 Different techniques were provided, supported by examples

from the text and discussed. Use of language was good.

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REFLECTION 3 Commented [B3]: The third entry should state how the
process of doing the SBA helped the student to become a better
person
170 words
5/5

The student explored her growth and transformation and her

future plans for utilizing the information gained from the
experience.

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WRITTEN REPORT Commented [B4]: 1.Content of report, summarised articles
and completely explained group interaction. 4/4,
2.Evidence of investigation/inquiry/research 3/3, articles were
well summarised and referenced.
3.Language use and vocabulary 3/3. Few errors, paragraphs were
well organised.
4.TOTAL 10/10

350 words

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 PLAN OF ORAL PRESENTATION Commented [B5]: The candidate performed her poem to an
excellent standard.

Her diction was well paced, fluid and confident, with rich
Name: vocabulary to discuss the topic of cigarette smoking and its
effects. She maintained good control of grammar throughout the
poem
Topic: “The Effects of Cigarette smoking on Teenagers”
She was awarded 10/10.

Theme: “The Effects of Drug Abuse on Teenagers” 1.Fluency of delivery 3/3

2.Structure, Comprehensibility, and development of topic 3/4
3.Language use and vocabulary 3/3
Genre: Poetry (Rhymed Poem)

Language: Standard Jamaican English

Sources: Original Piece

Overview:

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 REFERENCES

Captain Crochet, (2019, March 3) Your Brain on Cigarettes- Why Teenagers Smoke (video)

https://youtu.be/L_0wrr3_CHA

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Appendix A

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Appendix B

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Appendix C

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