Why Do We Choose to Go to the Space?

Ⅰ. Introduction
Hook: Quoting J. F. Kennedy's speech ("We choose to go to the Moon") and the recent
success of South Korea's Nuri launch
Connecting Information: The Impact of Speech Challenges on Space Exploration

Thesis Statement: Space exploration is essential because it can serve as an opportunity to

improve our lives through technological advancement, discover ways to survive in the future,
and even become a driving force for new ideas.
Ⅱ. Body 1 (Point 1: technology)
Topic Sentence: Advanced science and technology developed in the course of space
exploration can improve human life.
Supporting Details
A. Application to the private sector: GPS, household water purifier, fire alarm
device (specific examples)
B. Medicine: My case using MRI and CT
Ⅲ. Body 2 (Point 2: future)
Topic Sentence: Through the process and results of space exploration, future survival
methods can be explored.

Supporting Details

A. Addressing future threats: global warming, resource depletion, etc. (research,

paper citation)

B. Diplomatic cooperation: Diplomatic cooperation between countries through

space exploration, which can lead to peace (cited in news article)

Ⅳ. Body 3 (Point 3: new thinking)

Topic sentence: Space exploration expands human thinking and can be a driving force for
new ideas.

Supporting Details

A. A History of Expansion of Thought through Space Exploration: Astronomy

and the Renaissance (citing book)

B. Career Search: My Case of Dreaming to Become an Astronomer

Ⅴ. Conclusion
A restatement of the thesis statement: With the examples mentioned above, mankind can
advance through space exploration and can pioneer the future, so it must be pursued.

Summarize the main points: technology, future, new thinking

A concluding statement: Since space exploration not only satisfies curiosity, but can also
innovatively improve the lives and future of mankind, we should always be interested in
space. (opinion)