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Analytic Essay-Jauregui - 2
Analytic Essay-Jauregui - 2
uncomfortable? How about sports? I chose the article "Elite Female Athletes
Performance" from the Scandinavian Journal of Medicine & Science in Sports. I chose
this article because it was a combination of a hobby and interest of mine, along with a
little bit of research regarding the career I may pursue in the future. In the future, I would
like to become a physical therapist specializing in sports and athletes. Reading about
athletes and injuries will help me visualize my future and help me decide if that's
something I'd be interested in doing down the road. I also found the article interesting
because it talks about female athletes. This article spoke to me because I grew up
playing sports, which made it relatable. The reason why I also choose this specific topic
for my genre translation is because both sport and health news in social media has
continually gained popularity with a large audience over time. I knew that by using social
media, my awareness on menstrual cycles and athletes would spread across the
In the sports world, the ratio of male coaches to female coaches is significantly
different. Male coaches dominate the majority of the coaching industry which is why I
chose to target the male coaches. Male coaches have to gain awareness and
knowledge about how their athletes perform. Many coaches consider "periods" as an
excuse for their athletes and their lack of performance. However, research has shown
that it does cause both physical and psychological challenges to the body. This is why I
decided to reach the male audience, to help them understand the anatomy of our
bodies better to help us work with it and not against it. Coaches play a huge role in the
success of their athletes, and by being able to work and understand with the athletes it
increases the success rate. I'm not only referring to wins, but also personal performance
and health. Menstrual cycles can be an uncomfortable topic for many, including women.
However, it's normal and part of our body's anatomy. It is essential to learn how our
bodies and brain function to take care of ourselves and improve our performance.
I will use TikTok to reach the male coaches' audience for my translated genre.
Throughout a couple of years, the TikTok platform has grown exponentially. It has
personally been my most significant source of entertainment, which is way too many
hours. TikTok has been shown to be a very effective way of communicating information
and resources to the public and its intended audience. For example, many professional
athletes use the platform to advocate and talk about their experiences. TikTok is the
perfect example since they are short videos that quickly get to the point. Coaches are
they can plan new training sessions to accommodate their players' needs better. TikTok
specifically would help me establish my goal because it's all about algorithms. I myself
have used Tiktok to search for specific training techniques or for certain topics of
conversation. Once you search up something once, more videos related to your original
search will eventually start popping on your feed. If a coach is on TikTok and looks up
gurus to in this case athletes and sport advocators. An example of this genre in action
would be the following influencer Brittany Wilson; she is a former professional soccer
player. She is a female soccer player who continues to share her experience and
communicate about what it's like being a professional athlete and a woman
simultaneously. What brings Wilson so many viewers is the way she grasps her
audience’s attention. She edits her videos and uses many different elements like color,
text size, sound effects, and subtitles. Since it's her talking in front of a camera her
audience is able to relate to her or seek her opinions. In my own genre translation I
followed a very similar technique. Just like her I stood and talked in front of a camera to
talk to my audience. This way the connection that I’m trying to establish is more real and
taken more seriously. You may also think that this platform would only target women,
but there are also male advocates like James Smith; he also talks about how the
being conducted that give credibility and a visual representation of what a female
athlete goes through and how coaches go about it. By using things like visuals,
When reaching my audience, I must use the proper diction. According to "Four
Things Social Media Can Teach You about College Writing—and One Thing It Can't" by
Ann N. Amicucci, it stated, "On social media, we use emoji and stickers to add meaning
to the words and images we share" and "You have to decide how to present
yourself…The genre you're writing in and how much freedom you have within that genre
will guide your choices in constructing your ethos. (pg.47)" This tells us that every
choice I decide to make will impact how my audience takes it or if I'll reach them overall.
This will include things like my music choice, hashtags to get the audience, punctuation,
color, text, and first impression that will be incorporated into my genre translation. These
choices may not seem that important, however, they are key features that capture the
attention of the audience in the first place. Especially on social media, it is hard to pay
Another important thing while completing this process was ensuring I wasn't
following a template. According to "Navigating Genre" by Kerry Dirk, “all genres matter
because they shape our everyday lives. And by studying the genres that we find
familiar, we can start to see how specific choices that writers make result in specific
actions on the part of readers; it only follows that our own writing must too be
purposefully written. (pg.254)” With this text I was able to realize that genre is
creativity and writing style so that the audience can understand and relate to my content
better. When creating my genre translation, I had this text in the back of my mind. Since
When translating my genre I did run into a couple of challenges. I wasn't sure
what was the right method to capture my audience's attention. I didn't know if it should
be a slide show or something more personal like a personal video. At first I did a
slideshow, and it was not enough. Which I later switched to a voiceover to hopefully
reach my audience on a more personal level. I used bright bold colors to capture the
eye. With this, I also included things like Capitalization and exclamation marks to
With this translation I was able to not only grasp and gather my audience’s
attention, but I did so in a creative manner. I was able to speak about a highly debated
this by using my creativity and likes/dislikes to accomplish the overall goal. I did this by
combining different elements like lighting, sound, color, visuals, data, and most
concern for this topic but doing so in a way where I was also able to show personality
and a little about who I am. This translation mattered to me because speaking from
personal experience I'm more of a visual learner. I learn by seeing visuals while
-Amicucci, Ann N. Four Things Social Media Can Teach You about College
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& Science in Sports, vol. 31, no. 1, 2021, pp. 52–69, https://doi.org/10.1111/sms.13818.
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-M, Pheba. “Soccer Team Changes Uniforms to Make Women Players Feel ‘comfortable and
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-Okamoto, Nadya, director. Michelle Betos: Building Training Regiments around Your MenstrualC
ycle.TikTok, Itsaugustco, 5 June 2023,https://www.tiktok.com/@itsaugustco/
-Victoria Druehl, MS. “Coaching Female Athletes on Their Period: The Physiological and Emotional
Impacts on Performance.” Human Performance Blog · Volt Athletics, Human Performance Blog ·
-Wilson, Brittany, director. Things I’ve Learned the Hard Way as a D1 and Professional
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