‭IELTS WRITING STRUCTURE‬

‭Topic: video games‬

‭->‬‭When students are fond of playing video games, they have no time for homework, they‬
‭completely forget to do their homework.‬
‭●‬ ‭sacrifice: to give up something valuable to you for something else considered more‬
‭important.‬
‭→ This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school,‬
‭when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console.‬

‭khi em muốn nói về hậu quả của cái B ( hậu quả của cái B thì sẽ dẫn tới không được‬
‭không hoàn thành được cái A) thì em viết hậu quả của B ranging from…, when A be‬
‭sacrificed for …..< lợi ích của B>)‬

‭→‬‭When people‬‭too rely on‬‭smart devices for entertainment, their quality time for activities‬
‭with family and friends is sacrificed for a few hours surfing the internet alone without any‬
‭specific purpose.‬
‭→ Factories around the world have been trying to boost productivity, releasing tons of‬
‭untreated emissions daily. This means air quality is sacrificed for a little saving on waste‬
‭treatment costs.‬

‭●‬ ‭When we have A and B, you need to balance between A and B in terms of their part‬
‭of speech and their overall meaning.‬
‭Your A is mature (adjective) but your B is “economically independent” ( a adverb + adj)‬
‭→ mentally mature and economically independent.‬

‭●‬ ‭otherwise (adverb): used to state what the result would be if something did not‬
‭happen or if the situation were different‬
‭1.‬ ‭in a different way, differently‬
‭→ I wanted to take the bus, but it was full; otherwise, I would have reached the destination‬
‭earlier.‬
‭2.‬ ‭as an alternative, in a different manner‬
‭→ You can complete the task manually, or otherwise, you can use the automated system‬

‭Example for otherwise‬

‭-> The project‬‭had given‬‭children opportunities they would never otherwise have had.‬
‭→ The scholarship program provided students with educational resources and mentorship‬
‭they would never otherwise have received.‬
‭-> The investment from developed nations brought potential resources for VietNam that‬
‭we never otherwise have had access to.‬
‭A cho B cái gì đó mà B never otherwise have had (có thể có được)‬

‭Ielts speaking part 3‬

‭Do you think children are well behaved because they are influenced by their parents?‬

‭imitate/ mimic / internalize‬

‭one piece of the puzzle (khi nói 1 cái gì đó không thể bao quát được tất cả thì dùng structure‬
‭này)‬
‭apples do not fall far from tree‬
‭with A comes B‬

‭→ Apples do not fall far from trê. Well-mannered children might inherit good character‬
‭from their parents, such as having a good heart of gold that desires to make people happy.‬
‭Having good character is the very first step towards having good behaviors‬‭I believe.‬
‭On top of that, with a decent upbringing comes with a decent human being, or at least‬
‭comes a higher chance for being one. Parents would know what constitutes a moral‬
‭framework and can steer their children to act within‬‭one.‬

‭one = a moral framework‬

‭with A comes B ( A và B phải chung format (danh từ) )‬
‭decent: phù hợp, tốt, tiêu chuẩn‬
‭being one = being a decent human being ( dùng one khi muốn thay thế lại từ trước nó mà‬
‭không cần lặp lại)‬

‭●‬ ‭a good heart of gold= to be a very kind person‬

‭INTRODUCTION‬
‭It is no longer uncommon for one to venture miles away from home in search of a brighter‬
‭career prospect.‬‭Such a move, however, comes with a trade off:‬‭ạn absence of friends and‬
‭family. While there are both upsides and downsides associated with the relocation, I am of‬
‭the opinion that the psychological burdens one‬‭has to bear‬‭far outweigh the rewards that‬
‭can be reaped.‬