1.

NGUYÊ N

[TOPIC SENTENCE] ? THERE ARE … FIRST, Celebration helps strengthen the bonds
among people.The THESE occasions are usually the only timeS for family members to
enjoy together.The second advantage is that THIS IS a great way to preserve the culture
of A nation.For example,lunar new year is a important part of the vietnamese culture
and is necessary to remind younger generations of this tradition. Last but not least,
celebration bringS joy to the people. Whenever people are into celebrating festival,
THEY ARE ABLE TO … .In summary, celebration is beneficial for everyone in many
ways.

2. KIỆ T

There are several benefits of the celebration that I have known. First, celebration helps
strengthen the bonds among people. These occasions are the only times for family
members to have time and enjoy together. The second advantage is that this is a great
way to preserve the culture of a nation. For example, Lunar New Year is an important
part of Vietnamese culture and holding celebrations for this occasion is necessary to
remind younger generations of this tradition. Last but not least, celebration brings joy to
the people. Whenever people are into celebrating festivals, then they are able to forget
the pains and sorrows for at least some moments. In summary, celebration is beneficial
for us in many ways.

3. BẢ O HÂ N

There are several benefits of celebration. To begin with, celebration is the best way to
preserve the culture of a nation or a country. For example, Lunar New Year is one of the
most important part which is a meaningful time for all of THE families and it is
necessary to preserve it/ THIS TRADITION. The second advantage is that this is a great
way to bring joy to people. For example, whenever people join in some celebrations,
they will enjoy themselves and forget the sorrowS and pains. Last but not least, having a
celebration makes your relationshipS become better. Whenever people have
celebrations, they can meet and talk each other so their relationship will become better
than before.--> BE STRENDTHENED.

4. VIỆ T Ý – BENEFITS OF CELEBRATIONS  BENEFITS OF TET

There are several benefits of Tet. Firstly, it's the time to enjoy meals and spend time with
our family. We can also go back to our hometown and visit our relatives. It's also a great
way to help our mom with the housework. That's necessary to help your family because
we have to make everythings clean and new before the new year. Last but not least,
making Banh Chung or some more traditional foods on Tet holiday with your family is
also a good idea  ALLOWS US TO LEARN MORE ABOUT VIETNAMESE’S TRADITIONS .
Then, we can enjoy the food and talk together. In summary, Tet is beneficial for not only
students, the adultS and elders  THE ELDERLY love these days too.

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5. THANH THANH - BENEFITS OF CELEBRATIONS  BENEFITS OF TET

There are several benefits of Tet. First, I can have a chit chat with my relativeS or
cousinS. It makes  HELPS US strengthen the bonds among people.The second
advantage is that this is a great way to sleep without being annoyED by anyone. In  ON
the normal dayS, I usually wake up very early to go to school and BUT on Tet holiday, I
can sleep without being annoy  SPEND MANY HOURS RELAXING IN MY BED. Last but
not least, it brings a lot of time to relax. Whenever they are into CELEBRATING Tet, they
can buy new things. In summary, Tet holiday is beneficial for lazy people like me in
many ways.
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 RELATED SUPPORTING SENTENCES
6. THƯ

There are A variety OF benefits of celebration. To begin with, celebration helps

strengthen the bonds among the people. These occasions are always the times for family
members to reunion  REUNITE. The second advantage is that this is brings joy to
people. Whenever people enjoy celebrating, they will forget the pains and sorrows for
some moments. Last but not least, this is a great way to preserve the culture of a nation.
For example, Lunar New Year is an important part in Vietnamese culture and it is also
necessary to remind younger generations OF THIS TRADITION. In summary, celebration
is beneficial for among people in many ways.

7. BẢ O TRÂ N

There are several benefits of celebrations. First, It’s  THESE OCCASIONS can 
HELP/ALLOW US strengthen the bonds among people. It could be a break from dailiness
and gathering families and  A FAMILY REUNION TO connect the generations. The
second advantage is that it’s a great way to preserve the culture of nation. For example,
people OFTEN cook special food and do special movementS or dance SUCH AS … .It also
can attract tourists easily. TouristS can buy foods, souvenirs, clothes and it’s help people
earn money.  WHICH ATTRACTS A HUGE NUMBER OF TOURISTS TO THE AREA AND
THEN THEREFORE HELPS THE LOCALS IMPROVE THEIR LIFE. / WHICH SHOULD BE
MAINTAINED FROM THIS GENERATIONS TO OTHERS. Last but not least, WHEN people
have enjoy ENJOY the traditional celebrations and, they can people feel that they part
of something meaningful  A SENSE OF RELAXATION AND EXCITEMENT FOR AT
LEAST SOME MOMENTS. In summary, it’s a beneficial way to forget the pains and
sorrows in many ways.
 LENGTHY AND NOT EFFECTIVE SUPPORTING IDEAS!!!
 APPLY BETTER STRUCTURES (It can …  … allow/ enable / is a … way to … )
8. CHI

There are several benefits of celebration./ Benefits of celebration are varied. First, these
occasionS are usually the only timeS for family members to enjoy reunite  THE
REUNION. Second, that is a great way to preserve culture off a nation. For example,
Lunar New Year is an important part of Vietnamese culture for this occasion to remind
younger generations. Last but not least, celebration brings joy to the people. Whenever
people in  CELEBRATE this occasion, then they are able to forget the pains and
sorrows for at least some moments. In summary, celebration is beneficial for everyone
in many ways.

9. MINH

There are several benefits of celebration. First, It ís  HELPS strengthen the bonds
among people. It’s  THESE OCCASIONS ARE the only times FOR the family members
TO reunite. Secondly, celebration is the best way to preserve the culture of a nation. For
example, Lunar New Year is one of the most important partS for Vietnamese culture TO
remind younger generations OF MAINTAINING THIS TRADITION. Last but not least, it is
a great way to bring joy to people. It helpS people forget the pains and  AND
SORROWS FOR AT LEAST some moments. In summary, benefits CELEBRATION is
beneficial for people in many ways.

10. DUY VŨ

There are several benefits of Tet.First, I can have lucky money and new clothes from
adults. In the normal day, I always wake up very early to go to school but on Tet holiday
I can sleep without being annoy. The second advantage is that this is a great way to go
out or play games with friends. Last but not least, it helps me forget the pains and
sorrows and brings for me lot of luaght and many time to relax. Whenever they are into
Tet, they can buy new things, watch the firework and gatherning with there family. In
summary, Tet holiday is beneficial for lazy people like me in many ways.