OPINION ESSAY

MODEL OF THE STRUCTURE

INTRODUCTION
Nowadays, students do many on-line classes.
Many people like this type/kind of classes, mainly because they save time. However, I think
that it’s better to learn any subject face-to-face for many reasons.

1ª RAZON First and foremost, students are more concentrated /focused on a face-to-face
class.
EXPLICA This happens because students lose concentration when they have a class through a
screen.
AMPLIA Moreover, when the teacher is in front of you/close to/near you, you can use a paper
book instead of an e-book, which allows you to write notes.

2ª RAZON In addition to this, when students are in front of the teacher, it seems that they
understand explanations better. / (they seem to understand explanations better. + nivel)
EXPLICA I think that this is because the teacher is close to you and feedback seems easier.
EJEMPLO I know people who have taken online classes, for instance my friend Lisa, and she
never got used to it.

CONCLUSION
To sum up, on-line classes are very useful/convenient as/since/because you can take them at
home however, I think that face-to-face classes are better.

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- las oraciones condicionales.
- las pasivas.
- las estructuras/expresiones que te suben el nivel, por ejemplo: the more you you study, the
more you learn.
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