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Overall/Looking from an overall perspective, while A witnessed an

upward trend/a downward trend, the opposite can be seen in/was true
for B. Another striking feature is that/It is also obvious/evident/clear
that the highest value can (ALWAYS) be recorded in the data of X (in
năm.)
 Looking from an overall perspective, while the numbers of
commuters using cars and trains are expected to witness an
upward trend, the opposite can be seen for that travelling by
buses. Another striking feature is that the highest value can
ALWAYS be recorded in the data of people commuting by
cars./cars are thought to be the most popular vehicle over the
period.

Body 1: 1970 – 2010


- Câu 1: car: 5 in 1970 – remained almost unchanged until 1980 –
increased dramatically to about 7 in 2000 – stayed the same at 7
in 2010 (S + V + ADV)
Starting at 5 in 1970, the number of people travelling by cars remained
almost unchanged until 1980, and then increased dramatically (V+ADV)
to about 7 in 2000. After that, this figure stayed the same at 7 in 2010.
- Câu 2: train: 2 in 1970 – rose gradually – 3 in 2000 – stabilized at 3
until 2010 (There)
Similarly, there was a gradual rise from 2 to 3 in the figure for train
users in the first 30 years before this data stabilized at 3 until 2010.
- Câu 3: bus: first ten years plateau at 4 – decreased steadily to
approximately 3.5 in 2010 (witnessed)
In contrast, buses saw a plateau of 4 in the number of travellers
between 1970 and 1980, followed by a steady decrease to
approximately 3.5 after 30 years.
Body 2: 2010 - 2030

TƯƠNG ĐỒNG:
- LIKEWISE,
- SIMILARLY,
- HAVING/SHARING THE SAME TREND/PATTERN,
TƯƠNG PHẢN:
- IN CONTRAST,
- ON THE OTHER HAND,
- MEANWHILE,

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