GIVEN SENTENCE

WORDS AND PHRASES

DEMENTIA

My friend have dementia. *

They experiencing memory lose as a form of

dementia.

Dementia is a worldwide problem of old people that

is difficult to cure.

Dementia is a disease that effect a person memory

and cognitive disabilities.

My brother is cured from covid 19 infection way

back 2 years ago.
Dementia is a serious worldwide problem that
occured in old people.

Several people were killed during the exchange of

gunfire.

She had a cure reaction to the doctor's given

medication.

I gave my sister in law a hug in exchange of gifts.

Olderly people suffers dementia.

Dementia and stroke has been always a serious

problem of old people. /Dementia and stroke has
been serious problem among of old people.

They suffers from dementia. *

 Dementia mostly effect older adults.

Dementia follow from brain damage. *

Dementia and stroke is a common illness of old

people.

My father have diagnosed from dementia

CURE

My illness has been cure.

 The only cure will rest.

The doctors cured his illness.

She go to a clinic to make his disease cure. *

WHITE DAY EXCHANGE

My brother and I exchange gifts during the

Christmas.

We exchanged address and gift cards.

We exchanged my toys to a candies.

 He was exchange his gift for two candy.

IDEALLY

His skill make him ideally suitable for the job. *

Ideally, I like to be work at home.

Ideally, they will be staying on the cabin.

ANSWER THE QUESTIONS

Received - receive
Reciprocated - reciprocate
 CORRECT SENTENCE

My friend has dementia.

They are experiencing memory loss as a form of

dementia.

Dementia is a global health concern among older

adults and is difficult to cure.

Dementia is a disease that affects a person's

memory and cognitive abilities.

My brother was cured from COVID-19 infection two

years ago.
Dementia is a serious global health concern
affecting older people.

Several people were killed during the shooting.

She had a positive reaction to the doctor's given

medication.

I gave my sister-in-law a hug in exchange for gifts.

Elderly people suffers from dementia.

Dementia and stroke have always been serious

problems for older people. / Dementia and stroke
have been serious problems among older people.

They suffer from dementia.

 She was diagnosed with dementia.

Dementia mostly affects older adults.

Dementia is a result of brain damage.

Dementia and stroke are common illnesses of older

people.

My father has been diagnosed with dementia.

My illness has been cured. / ask for another

sentence
 The only cure will be rest.

She goes to a clinic to cure her disease.

My brother and I exchanged gifts during

Christmas.

We exchanged addresses and gift cards.

We exchanged our toys for candies.

 He exchanged his gift for two candies.

His skills make him ideally suitable for the job.

Ideally, I like to work at home.

Ideally, they will be staying in the cabin.

receive
reciprocate
 EXPLANATION | GRAMMAR RULE

We are going to change the verb used in the sentence, from have to has sin

HAS = singular subject | HAVE = plural sub

add the missing verb 'are' before the word 'experiencing' to complete the sentence and change 'lo

paraphrase the sentence to use the right term, instead of 'worldwide problem,’ we should use 'glob
term, and replace 'that' with the verb 'is' to give more context.

We need to change 'effect' to 'affects' because we need a noun and put apostrophe on the word
to abilities.

We just need to change the verb 'is' to 'was' and paraphrase the rest of the sentence.
We need to paraphrase the sentence to use the right term, instead of 'worldwide problem,’ we shoul
appropriate term and change 'occured' to 'affecting older people.’ to use the right term for the sente

This is good, but we can just change the word 'gunfire' to 'shooting' to make it sound more neutral.

We just need to rephrase 'cure' to ' a positive' to make it grammatically correct. (or rephrase 'given'
wording.)

We need to change the preposition of to for, to indicate that the gifts are what

olderly-elderly, suffers to suffer, to fix the agreement mistak

Since we have two subjects, dementia and stroke, we are going to change the verb has to h
interchange the places of always and been since we are using the adverb of frequency, 'alwa
thing is that instead of using 'of old people' we can say 'for older people' because it clarifies that
than indicating possession.

We need to transform the verb to its plural form, with no -s to fix t

 This sentence needs improvement, instead of using the preposition of, we will use

effect to affects because effect is used as noun form, we need affec

paraphrase the sentence to make it grammatically c

change is to are, illness to illnesses, and change old- older to give a wider range of popu

have to has been, of - with

We're going to change the verb to past participle * / ask for another
We can make it better if we’ll add a linking verb “be” to complete the sentence. The correct

Your sentence is correct. However, you used it as a verb. Can you try to use it as a

go-goes = to fix the agreement mistake, change the pronoun his to her and p

exchange - exchanged, remove article the

We can make it better by changing address to addresses since it shou

my-ours, / to-for
remove was and change exchange-exchanged to make it in simple past tense, and tra

We can improve this sentence by changing skill to skills to fix the agreemen

paraphrase

On to in for us to use the appropriate preposition in the sentence. / change to in, t

Since gift giving on white day is a continuous tradition, it should not be in the past t
Since we are using the modal verb MUST which is fixated to future tense, we are usin
 VERBATIM

Alright, you said

Okay, your sentence is

 Why always?

Another reason is that dementia and stroke are already existing

since a long time ago until this day.