IELTS

Evening slot

Writing task 2
9 March 2024
Idp & BC
 Ielts, evening slot, 9 March 2024
india
writing task 2

Many people believe that family has the

strongest influence on a child's development,
while others believe that external factors such as
televisions, friends, and music play a big role.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The family's influence on a kid's upbringing
is undeniably prominent, although there are
some advocates of other elements to be the
most impressive to raise a human being.
Among these ,cases they refer to the
children mates and social media. Following,
I will argue why I think the latter is more
similar to my point of view.
First of all, there is much evidence that indicates the
significant importance of parents in their sons and
daughters' future. According to the statistics, not
only the part they are playing in their children's
behaviour is substantial, but also many people show a
great resemblance to their ancestors' actions. For
instance, studies have illustrated higher rates of
divorce in couples whose parents had been separated
when they were young. Furthermore, the offsprings
of fathers or mothers who have been alcoholics, are
more likely to be addicted during their lives.
On the other hand, we would be too ignorant if we did
not pay attention to the effect buddies and other
surrounding factors of teenagers have on them. For
example, we can imagine the kind of wording they use
after watching some soap operas. To elaborate more,
there is a lot of differences between the siblings with
the same parents, same home, and even same school.
Sometimes one of them will be more introverted and the
class's nerd and the other an extrovert who seek to play
football or sees his tomorrow in fame. All these
distinctions stem from the specific environment they are
exposed to.
In conclusion, despite the key role that
family members have in their heirs' manners,
we must be so naive if we do not conceive
the huge power of pupils' close friends as
well as mediums of broadcasting. However,
these two groups of supporters can not be
wrong in many cases. Recent investigations
shed light on the impact of the environment
as much as genes in a person's doings.
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