NAME: Arman Rizki Ramdani

CLASS: 1B

NIM: E1D02310177

A. Peer Editing Example

Discovering the Musical Charms of Nadin Amizah

Nadin Amizah is a young singer and songwriter who has captured the attention of many
music enthusiasts in Indonesia. With a beautiful voice and emotionally charged lyrics, Nadin
Amizah has proven herself as one of the leading talents in the Indonesian entertainment
industry. Nadin is known for her authentic and character-filled style of performance, as well as
her ability to tell compelling stories through her songs. With a steadily growing career, Nadin
Amizah serves as an inspirational example for the younger generation pursuing their dreams in
the world of music.

Peer Editing Sheet

Writer : Arif Maulana Date:19 October 2023

Peer Editor : Arman Rizki Ramdani

1. What is the general topic of the paragraph? Discovering the musical charms of
Nadin Amizah
2. What is the writer’s purpose? (in 15 words or less)
Introduce Nadin Amizah and highligth her musical talent and influence.
3. Is the paragraph indented Yes / No
4. How many sentences does the paragraph have? 6 sentences.
5. Is the first word of every sentence capitalized? Yes / No
If you answered No, circle the problem(s) on the paper
6. Does every sentence end with correct punctuation? Yes / No
If you answered No, circle the problem(s) on the paper
7. Are there any other capitalization or punctuation errors? Yes / No
If you answered Yes, circle the problem(s) on the paper
8. Write the topic sentence here. The topic sentence is: “Nadin Amizah is a young
singer and songwriter who has captured attention of many music enthusiast
Indonesia.”
9. Do you think the topic sentence is good for this paragraph? Comments?
The topic sentence is suitable for this paragraph as it provides a clear introduction
to Nadin Amizah and her musical career.
10. Does the paragraph talk about just one topic? Yes / no
If you answered No, what is the extra topic?
In what sentence is the extra topic introduced?
11. Does every sentence have a verb? Yes / No
If you answered No, circle the error(s) on the paper.
12. Write any mistakes that you found. Add appropriate corrections.
Error 1: No errors were identified in the paragraph.
Correction:-
13. Do you have any trouble understanding this paragraph? Yes / No
If you answered Yes, tell where and/or why.
14. What questions do you have about the content? What other information should be
in this paragraph?
No questions or additional information are needed in the paragraph.
15. What is your opinion of the writing of this paragraph?
The writing in the paragraph is clear and well-structured.
16. What is your opinion of the content of this paragraph?
I think the content of the paragraph is informative and provides a good overview
of Nadin Amizah’s musical talents and influence in Indonesia.