1. Is the introduction clear enough to understand? ✅
2. Is there any grammatical mistakes?✅
3. Is there any pronunciation mistake?✅
Step3 :Body
1. Are there enough3 main ideas (as in 3 bullet points)?✅
2. Does the speaker develop each main idea?✅
3. Does the speaker link the ideas? ✅
Step 4 :Body 1. What are 3 main ideas? -Japan will be a fantastic country. -The speaker wants to go with his girlfriend - There are many activities the speaker want to do
2. What are the supporting ideas for each main idea? ✅
- His uncle showed him pictures of Japan, which were beautiful picture -He will have a great time with his girlfriend - The speaker will take many pictures, attend the cherry blossom festival, and try dishes at the restaurant
3. What are the linking words that the speaker used?✅
Example : Example: So, absolutely, to be honest, if, when, in my opinion, moreover. firstly, secondly, finally.
4 Is there any irrelevant ideas ✅
+ I’m an advented person Step 5: Body
1 Is there any frequent grammatical mistake ?✅
-Japan will be a fantastic countries. It should be “country”. -Uncle show me a lot of pictures, instead it will be “ showed me” -There are many activity. It should be “activities”. -Enjoy many cuisine many cuisines -Go a lot of restaurant . It should be “restaurants”
2. Is there any vocabulary that the speaker misused? ✅
-I’m an advanted person. It should be “ Adventurous person “ 3. Is there any pronunciation mistake? Is it frequent? ✅ Examples : Uncle, picture, attractive, famous, especially, festival, cherry blossom, cuisine, reason, is, restaurant. -The speaker added ending sound in unnecessary words “t”, “s” : Japan, finally, now, country or no ending sound: that, restaurants, activities, cuisines. 4. Did the speaker use a lot of linking words or just basic ones? The speaker just uses basic linking words : So, absolutely, to be honest, if, when, in my opinion, moreover, firstly, secondly, finally. Step 6: Conclusion - The speaker does not mention the conclution. Step7. Overview
1. Is his speaking interesting and attractive?✅
I don't think so, because the speaker often stutters, pauses, and has little impressive vocabulary, sometimes with incorrect vocabulary.
2. Does the speaker try to emphasize the words? ✅
-The speaker does not emphasize words.
3. Is he very good or not very good or not very good?✅
-He's quite fluent. He is also trying to use linking words to make sentences coherent.
4. Is his speaking within the required limit time (1-2 mins)?✅
-The speech is about 2:35 minutes long beyond the required limit time.
My name is Mong Thi Van, my student code is 22702142
For the introduction is quiet easy to comprehend : “ Today i will talk about the country i want to go if i have a chance For the body : -Where :Japan -Who go with : His girlfriend -What he does: Taking many photos, attending festival, go to a lots of famous restaurants to review delicious foods Overall, he is speaking quite fluently