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Em nhớ lùi đầu dòng mỗi đoạn và dùng từ “it” cho cho cụm S để tránh bị lặp từ
em nha

Đề 1: Advantages and disadvantages of multiple textbooks in education

/advantages and disadvantages of textbooks for learning foreign languages

In recent years, multiple textbooks are becoming increasingly popular. People

hold different opinions about it. In my opinion, everything in this universe has
positive and negative sides, depending on each person’s perspective. To clarify
the pros and cons of multiple textbooks, in the following essay, I will give my
own perspective to analyze in detail they’s its bad and good points.

On the one hand, we cannot deny that multiple textbooks bring people many
benefits. First and foremost, multiple textbooks play an important role in the
development of education, improving the quality of studying for students.
Besides, multiple textbooks => they (e sửa lại để tránh lặp cụm S quá nhiều
nha, sửa thành “they” vì S bên trên là số nhiều, nên phải dùng “they” để thay
thế e nha) can provide suitable knowledge for all types of teachers and learners.
In particular, multiple textbooks will help teachers teach easily and effectively.
I think that multiple textbooks => they are (e thêm động từ nha) not only are
usefull useful but also nescessary necessary. For example, they help us open
our eyes (E thêm), (e bỏ dấu phẩy nha) because they will help us better
understand many things around the world, and discover new things as well as
expand our knowlegde. Furthermore, information is the most important
advantage that multiple textbooks bring. They is a are (S nhiều + V nhiều e
nha) real treasure troves (e thêm nha, S nhiều + V tobe nhiều + O nhiều e nha)
of knowlegde as all kinds of information about any subject is available on it.
Furthermore, multiple textbooks can help us have many choices in finding
information. It can be seen that multiple textbooks is are (S số nhiều + V số
nhiều em nha) actually very beneficial in many ways.
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On the other hand, we must also admit that multiple textbooks aslo also have
various negative aspects. In the first place, multiple textbooks can make
teachers and learners feel difficult when they choose suitable documents. And it
=> Besides, they (e sửa lại nha) can create the financial burden for students, (E
bỏ dấu phẩy nha) because it the (E thêm) costs are relatively high. Additionally,
multiple textbooks cannot help we us develop soft skills, (E bỏ dấu phẩy nha)
because they limit the ability to communicate directly, without direct
interaction and communication. It can be proved that multiple textbooks also
have quite a few limitations.

- Em tham khảo thêm nha:

+ multiple textbooks can easily be boring for everyone, so they will be
difficult to concentrate, leading to low efficiency.
In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own opinions on
this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of the
problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. But, in my own opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages of multiple
textbooks far outweigh the disadvantages. People should have further
consideration on this issue.

Đề 3 (ý 3): Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the effects of

tourism on local communities.

In recent years, tourism on local communities is becoming increasingly

popular. People hold different opinions about it. In my opinion, everything in
this universe has positive and negative sides, depending on each person’s
perspective. To clarify the pros and cons of tourism on local communities, in
the following essay, I will give my own perspective to analyze in detail its bad
and good points.

On the one hand, we cannot deny that tourism on local communities brings
people many benefits. First and foremost, tourism on local communities plays
an important role in the (E thêm nha) economic development of the country and
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improves the quality of life for everyone. Besides, tourism on local

communities => it (e sửa lại để tránh lặp cụm S quá nhiều e nha) helps us open
our eyes because it can make us better understand cultures, religions and people
in other places. In particular, tourism on local communities is an indispensable
factor in the process of international integration. Furthermore, tourism on local
communities => it creates jobs for many people. As a result, it helps reducce
reduce unemployment rate. Last but not least, tourism on local communities
contributes to introducing the country’s image to the world. It can be seen that
tourism on local communities is actually very beneficial in many ways.

On the other hand, we must also admit that tourism on local communities also
has various negative aspects. Firstly, tourism on local communities still creates
waste, dust, and (E thêm) noise during construction (e bỏ ý này nha). Managing
and disposing of this waste is a challenge to ensure minimal impact on the
environment. Additionally, tourism on local communities => it can contribute
to increasing greenhouse gas emissions into the environment and increasing the
need for fossil fuels as well as the depletion of natural resources. And,
Furthermore, tourism on local communities also contributes to increasing air
pollution that is increasingly having an impact on human life and the common
ecosystem. Especially, tourism on local communities => it can create insecurity
for people living in local communities that are tourist destinations. When there
are many tourists, it will cause the political chaos if not strictly controlled. It
can been be proved that tourism on local communities also has quite a few
limitations.

In order to resolve such problems, people should take some concerted

measures. The first solution is the responsibitily responsibility of the authorities
and government. The government needs to ensure that there are enough laws to
prevent such problems from happening. In addition, each person should also
share their responsibility by raising personal awareness and trying to
accumulate enough knowledge about this issue. However, education is the main
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way to tackle this issue. People need to be aware of the effects so that they can
avoid this problem.

In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own opinions on
this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of the
problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. But, (E thêm nha) in my own opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages
of tourism on local communities far outweigh the disadvantages. People should
have further consideration on this issue.

Đề 5: What are the advantages and disadvantages of the internet

In recent years, the (E thêm) internet is becoming increasingly popular. People

hold different opinions about it. In my opinion, everything in this universe has
positive and negative sides, depending on each person’s perspective. To clarify
the pros and cons of the (E thêm) internet, in this the following essay, I will
give my own perspective to analyze in detail its bad and good points.

On the one hand, we cannot deny that the (E thêm) internet brings people many
benefits. Firstly, information is the most important advantage that the (E thêm)
internet brings. Internet => it (e sửa lại để tránh lặp cụm S quá nhiều e nha) is a
real treasure trove of knowlegde knowledge as all kinds of information about
any subject is (E thêm V nha) available on it. I can see, Additionally, the (E
thêm) internet is not only usuful useful but aslo also effective. For example, it
helps us contact with others quickly and simplily simply. Besides, internet => it
can helps (ko có đuôi s em nha, can+Vnt) us meet and talk with many new
friends in other places, so this is a great way to tie people’s relationships
together tightly, (E bỏ dấu phẩy nha) and makes make our life more
meaningfull meaningful. And the (E thêm) internet can helps (ko có đuôi s em
nha, can+Vnt) us access usefull useful information sources around the world as
well as expand our knowledge. Lastly, we can work or study online at home, (e
thêm) and this is a very effective way to reduce traffic congestion during rush
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hours because it helps reduce the number of private vehicles significantly. It

can be seen that the (E thêm) internet is actually very beneficial in many ways.

On the other hand, we must also admit that the (E thêm) internet aslo also has
quite a few limitations various negative aspects. First and foremost, the (E
thêm) internet can be the cause of diseases such as obesity, disc herniation,
spinal degeneration, or cervical spondylosis when we spend too much time on
it without time for exercise and sports. Furthermore, internet => it is the main
of culprit that makes students lose focus in their studies because a good video
on social networks (E thêm s nha) can attract their attention. Especially, the (E
thêm) internet will negatively affect people’s soft skills because it limits the
ability to communicate directly, without direct interaction and communication.
I admit that internet => it is very bad and harmful,. (e dùng dấu chấm nha) for
example, it makes people lazy in (e thêm) thinking and dependent in studying
and working. It can be proved that the (E thêm) internet also has quite a few
limitations.

In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own opinions on
this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of the
problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. But, (E thêm) in my own opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages of
the (E thêm) internet far outweigh the disadvantages. People should have
further consideration on this issue.

Đề 10: Discuss the pros and cons of living in a nuclear family with 2
generations/ a small family/ a large/ extended family?

In recent years, living in (E thêm nha) a nuclear family with 2 generations is

becoming increasingly popular. People hold different opinions about it. In my
opinion, everything in this universe has positive and negative sides, depending
on each person’s perspective. To clarify the pros and cons of living in (E thêm
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nha) a nuclear family with 2 generations, in the following essay, I will give my
own perspective to analyze in detail its bad and good points.

On the one hand, we cannot deny that a nuclear family with 2 generations
brings people many benefits. Firstly, when everyone is reeling under the
pressure of life, a nuclear family with 2 generations is a great way to tie
people’s relationships together tightly, making life more meaningful. Besides, a
nuclear family with 2 generations => it (e sửa lại nha) can help us learn how to
love others and have a tolerant and altruistic heart. This can help us become
more mature and responsible for ourselves, our family, (E thêm dấu phẩy nha)
and society. Especially, it plays an important role in the development of the
society, improving the quality of life for everyone. Last but not least, I think
that a nuclear family with 2 generations is not only meaningful but also happy
because it can help people less stress and have more energy in life. It can be
seen that a nuclear family with 2 generations is actually very beneficial in many
ways.

Lặp lại S quá nhiều, em dùng “it” để thay thế, tránh lỗi lặp từ nha

On the other hand, we must aslo also admit that a nuclear family with 2
generations also has various negative aspects. First and foremost, a nuclear
family with 2 generations can easily be boring for everyone and sometimes
make people feel stressed because it can create the financial burden. Lastly,
women will not have many opportunities to develop themselves because they
need to spend more time on their family without time for them. It can be proved
that a nuclear family with 2 generations also has quite a few limitations.

In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own opinions on
this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of the
problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. But, (E thêm nha) in my own opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages
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of a nuclear family with 2 generations far outweigh the disadvantages. People

should have further consideration on this issue.

Đề 11: The pros and cons of working from home for employees and
employers

In recent years, working from home is becoming increasingly popular. People

hold different opinions about it. In my opinion, everything in this universe has
positive and negative sides, depending on each person’s perspective. To clarify
the pros and cons of working from home, in this the following essay, I will give
my own perspective to analyze in detail its bad and good points.

On the one hand, we cannot deny that working from home brings people many
benefits. Firstly, working from home is not only useful but also effective
because it allows to handle works quickly and simplily simply. Besides,
working from home => it (e sửa lại nha) is very money-saving and time-saving.
Therefore, it helps them reduce the financial burden and have more time for
their family. In particular, working from home can contribute to reducing
greenhouse gas emissions into the environment and reducing the need for fossil
fuels as well as the depletion of natural resources. And Furthermore, working
from home => it also contributes to reducing air pollution that is increasingly
having an impact on human life and the common ecosystem. Last but not least,
working from home allows employers to reduce costs (ý này nghĩa bị trùng với
giảm gánh nặng tài chính ở trên rồi e nha). It can be seen that working from
home is actually very beneficial in many ways.

Em có thấy cụm S của em lặp quá nhiều k, thay bằng từ “it” ở một vài chỗ đi, k
là lỗi lặp từ đó nha

On the other hand, we must aslo also admit that working from home also has
various negative aspects. First and foremost, according to recent scientific
research, artificial light emitted from electronic devices can cause
nearsightedness, insomnia, and (E thêm nha) even cancer. Furthermore,
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working from home will negatively affect people’s soft skills because it limits
the ability to communicate directly, without direct interaction and
communication with friends. Lastly, working from home => it can easily be
boring for everyone, so it will be difficult to concentrate, leading to low
efficiency. It can be proved that working from home also has various quite a
few limitations.

In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own opinions on
this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of the
problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. But, (E thêm) in my own opinion, I firmly believe that the advantages of
working from home far outweigh the disadvantages. People should have further
consideration on this issue.

Em lưu ý: Trên bài cụm S bị lặp quá nhiều nên e thay bằng từ “it” (với chủ nhữ
số ít)/ “they” (với chủ ngữ số nhiều) ở một vài chỗ để tránh lỗi lặp từ e nha.
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