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Poetic Conventions On Leaves of Grass - Lois Ware
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POETIC CONVENTIONS IN LEAVES OF GRASS
BY Lois WARE
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48 Poetic Conventions in "Leaves of Grass"
later verses he used such lines not infrequently; indeed that some
of his poems, like the " Prayer of Columbus," fall into fairly
regular iambic verse, while others adopt an equally regular sequence
of trochees or anapests. Almost as significant is the fact that
he not infrequently inverted his word order in the interest of a
better rhythm. This happens, by my count, in two hundred and
sixty-two instances.
Again, despite his avowal that he had discarded poetic diction,
Whitman condescended to admit now and then a word that we
should at once pronounce to be poetic. The examples that I have
noted are: agone (1), Atlantica (3), atomies (1), babe (1),
bale (1), beseems (1), betimes (2), betwixt (1), cerulean (2),
charnel (2), climes (2), darkling (1), the deep (2), derring-do
(1), diminute (2), e'en (6), e'er (2), eld (2), emprises (1), ere
(2), eterne (1), eve (2), halcyon (1), haply (18), isle (2),
jocund (6), Ikine (1), limn (2), list (listen) (5), list (please)
(1), lorn (1), methinks (5), ne'er (3), o'er (10), swart (1),
'tis (9), twain (4), 'twas (4), 'twill (1), wend (8). There are
also numerous archaic forms: aimedest (1), ascended'st (1), art
(5), bear'st (10), beholdest (3), breathest (1), bringest (1), canst
(1), carriest (1), changest (1), considerest (1), copest (1),
couldest (1), cullest (1), darest (1), didst (1), disportest (1),
dost (1), drawest (1), enterest (2), fillest (1), freest (1), frontest
(1), furl'st (1), gain'st (1), givest (1), groan'st (1), had'st (1),
hast (4), hear'st (2), holdest (1), infoldest (1), journeyst (1),
knowest (7), lackest (2), lagd'st (1), laughest (1), launchest (1),
lived'st (1), loolest (3), lovest (1), makest (1), masterest (1),
matest (1), maturest (1), melt'st (1), might'st (1), missest (1),
mournest (1), movest (2), pickest (1), playest (1), pleasest (2),
reappearest (1), revel'st (1), ridest (1), sat'st (1), se.ek'st (2),
seest (1), sendest (1), shalt (3), sittest (1), smilest (1), soundest
(1), sport'st (1), stridest (1), swellest (1), takest (1), tellest (1),
thee (207), thine (25), thy (183), thyself (17), thou (179),
'twould (1), unfoldest (1), unitest (1), voyagest (1), waitest (2),
watled'st (1), walkd'st (1), wert (1), wilt (1), would'st (1), ye
(23), yieldest (2).
But I am less concerned in this inquiry with such sporadic
conventions as I have noted than with certain conventions that
appear in virtually every poem of any length that Whitman wrote.
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8Since the same line frequently has both consonantal and vowel
alliteration and therefore is included in both counts, the proportion will
be somewhat less than 80 per cent.
4"
Crossing Brooklyn Ferry," § 3, 1. 23, p. 135.
"Song of Myself," § 13, 1. 1, p. 33.
6 " Starting from Paumanok," § 13, 1. 11, p. 19.
7"A Song of Joys," 1. 85, p. 152.
8 Song of the Broad-Axe," § 9, 1. 9, p. 163.
Out of the Cradle Endlessly Rocking," § 1, 1. 1, p. 210.
10 "As I Ebb'd with the Ocean of Life," § 1, 1.1, p. 216.
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50 Poetic Conventions in "Leaves of Grass"
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Here the reader will observe that the letter r, which appears only
three times initially, occurs six times medially-nine times alto-
gether.
Whitman employs also an abundance of repetition. This over-
laps obviously with alliteration; but to keep the two as distinct as
possible, I have listed the repetition of a single word within a line
for the sake of alliteration under alliteration only, not under
alliteration and repetition, unless, as in the case of the words
soothe and loved in "out of the Cradle Endlessly Rocking," the
effect is largely dependent upon the repetition or unless the repeated
word is part of an "answering phrase," one form of what Amy
Lowell calls return. Of these latter I have noted some four hun-
dred and sixty cases, representative examples of which are:
With whistling wind and music of the waves, the large imperious
wanves.22
Nor these the universe, they the universe.23
The real life of my senses and flesh transcending my senses and
flesh.24
She less guarded than ever, yet more guarded than ever.26
But far more frequent than the answering phrase, is the use of the
same word to begin a number of parallel lines. Altogether there
are 3,330 parallel lines arranged in groups beginning with the
same word. Of these groups, section 11 of " Salut au Monde," in
which the word you begins twenty-seven consecutive lines, has, per-
haps, the longest sustained repetition. Aside from the answering
phrase and "initial repetition," the most noteworthy single
instances of repetition in Leaves of Grass occur in the short poems
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54 Poetic Conventions in "Leaves of Grass"
Indisputably the first and the third lines have internal balance;
and I am inclined to consider that the second has also despite the
fact that the auxiliary is omitted and the command is expressed
negatively. Still other examples are:
I chant America the mistress, I chant a greater supremacy.84
The sign is reversing, the orb is enclosed,
The ring is circled, the journey is done.35
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7"
Song of Prudence," 11. 1, 2, p. 313.
88 "The Mystic Trumpeter," § 2, 11. 1-3, p. 389.
89 " Eidolons," 11. 69, 70, p. 6; the other examples of run-on lines are:
Leaves of Grass, Inclusive Edition, p. 3, 1.4; p. 5, 1.27; p. 6, 1.27;
p. 169, 1. 9; p. 194, 11. 7, 8 (?); p. 206, 1. 2 (?); p. 248, 11. 23 (?), 24 (?);
p. 249, 11. 3 (?), 4 (?); p. 254, 1. 13; p. 265, 1. 18; p. 284, 11. 7, 22, 23, 27;
p. 300, 1. 22; p. 317, 1. 29; p. 326, 1. 24; p. 341, 1. 13; p. 389, 1. 16; p. 390,
1. 21; p. 402, 1. 11; p. 422, 11. 2, 3; p. 425, 1. 6; p. 426, 1. 13; p. 429, 1.10;
p. 437, 11. 1, 2; p. 440, 11. 5, 13; p. 436, 11. 13, 15; p. 459, 1. 7; p. 462,
11. 14, 21; p. 403, 11. 1, 8 (?).
' My discussion of the uncollected poems is based upon the poems in
The Uncollected Prose and Poetry of Walt Whitman edited by R. E.
Holloway (New York, 1922), together with the three short poems-
"Dough-Face Song," "Blood-Money," and "Sailing the Mississippi at
Midnight "-which do not appear therein.
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