Dear Admissions Committee,

I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Laurus Nag and I am writing to express my
continued interest in joining Trinity college as a member of the incoming class and report
personal updates since the time of submitting my application.

While I was disappointed not to receive an immediate acceptance, I am genuinely grateful to

the admissions committee for considering me and placing me on the waitlist. I understand the
competitive nature of admissions and appreciate the opportunity for further consideration. I
remain hopeful that there may still be room for me in the incoming class.

I want to assure you of my unwavering commitment to attending Trinity college if admitted. I

am fully dedicated to contributing to the academic community and making the most of the
resources and opportunities available at your institution. Given the chance, I would immediately
rescind all other offers and wholeheartedly commit to your institution.

Since submitting my application, I have taken proactive steps to further my knowledge and skills
in both engineering and other areas. Specifically, I conducted an independent research project
and published a scientific journal in the International Journal of Creative Research Thoughts
titled "An Investigation to Find Out the Extent to Which Organic Fertilizer Made with Domestic
Waste Can Emulate the Efficiency of Inorganic Fertilizer in Agricultural Food Production
Systems." Additionally, I completed five courses aligned with Trinity college’s computer science
and engineering syllabus, including Introduction to Programming C++, Basics of Computing and
Programming, Information Security - Introduction to Information Security, Creative Coding, and
Theories of Media and Technology.

Furthermore, I have gained valuable entrepreneurial experience by running an online clothing

store called "Caretex" through growing e-commerce market platforms. Additionally, I served as a
project manager for "Transend.BD," a trans-rights organization in Bangladesh. In this role, I
organized fairs and managed funds distribution to upskill marginalized transgender
communities.

Lastly, I am passionate about creative writing and have authored a novel titled "Ophelia" in the
fiction/fantasy/love genre. Although the book has not been officially published yet, I am
determined to share it with the world in the future.

I acknowledge that my initial application may have had weaknesses, particularly due to my
lower-than-expected final IB scores. However, I believe my academic achievements and
extracurricular endeavors demonstrate my resilience, determination, and potential for success
at Trinity.

In conclusion, I am confident that I am a perfect fit for Trinity college, and I am fully committed
to seizing the opportunity to study and grow within your community. I eagerly await the
possibility of joining your institution and contributing to its rich legacy of innovation and
excellence. Finally, to repeat, I am a 100% committed to attending your institution, and if I am to
be accepted, I would immediately rescind all other offers from any other university.

Thank you for considering my application once again. I appreciate your time and attention to my
candidacy.

Sincerely,

Laurus Nag