COMPILED POST PROPOSAL REVISIONS

Legend:
Yellow – Ma’am Navarra
Green – Ma’am Caimbre
Blue – Ma’am Abarracoso

Title:

 Parenting Styles and Students’ Self-efficacy

CHAPTER I
General Recommendation:

 In the title page, Chapter I, Chapter II, and Chapter III no need to put their page number.

 Instead of writing Chapter 1 it must be in Roman Numerals, therefore it must be Chapter

I, and its title must not be INTRODUCTION, it must be THE PROBLEM.
Background of the Study:

 Include some explanation why these parenting styles in your research gap.
 Introduce the different parenting styles
 Relating statements to the study
 Add citations

Statement of the Problem:

● Give reason for acquiring listed info in the demographic files

Scope and Delimitation:

● Improve sentence construction

● 1st year science majors must be changed to science major students

CHAPTER II
General Recommendation:

● Justify everything

Review of Related Literature:

 ● Cite more related studies

● Cite local studies

● Delete paragraph that are not related to the study

● Discuss the variables in Conceptual Framework

Conceptual Framework

 Put the term Figure in your diagram

Hypothesis

 Indicate the null and alternative hypothesis

Definition of Terms

 Add opening paragraph or sentence

 Explain how these terms (parenting styles, self-efficacy, authoritative, authoritarian, and
permissive) are to be used in the study.

CHAPTER 3
General recommendations:

● Add formula and justify suitability with the paper

● Add opening paragraph like in your RRL

Research Design:

● Grammatical error

Research Locale:

● Include the vision, mission and core values of LNU

● Add a little description to the figure

● Put Title in the Figure 1

Research Respondents:

● Fix inconsistencies in respondent’s info

Research Instrument:
 ● Specify “adopted research instrument”

● Add consent form

● Cite authors

Validation of Instruments:

● Explain Bolarinwa’s instrument

● Add and explain formula

● Must be Validation of Instruments and Pilot Testing

Data Gathering Procedure:

● Fix grammatical errors

Analysis of Data

 In the statistical tool of research question no. 5, you must include the hypothesis and the
significance level
 Interpret Strongly Disagree, Disagree and so on in Likert-Scale Description.

Ethical Considerations:

● Fix grammatical errors

Bibliography:
References:

● Classify references: books, unpublished materials, documents, internet websites and

periodical
● Fix spacing

● Follow APA format

● use indents