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Different regions of the United States have their own traditions foods.

Yoga is an excellent form of exercise for several reasons.

There are several reasons why people not eating breakfast.
Travelers to the Grand Canyon need to consider many details of their trip before traveling.
 They should be an honest person.

They should think positively most of the time.

They should be fun to be around.

make a good schedule for read a books

having a relax time when read a books.

study with other classmate and friends.

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I love to eat fast food such as KFC.

I love to eat fast food, such as KFC, McDonalds, and Burger King.
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In conclusion, students who are involved in campus life get more out

of school.
 In conclusion, there are several healthy food choices available in the college cafeteria.

In conclusion, children's TV show provide many advantages for learning language.

In conclusion, children's TV show are great for learning language because the actors speak slowly, the

vocabulary is not difficult, and the show are easy to follow.

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