It is said that in many countries around the world,youngsters are being

allowed to have more sense of freedom.This essay will explore the positive
and negative aspects of both approaches before giving a definitive conclusion
on this phenomenon.

There are several benefits of giving children more freedom in their private
life.First,they can have more opportunities to achieve the wider amount of
knowledge and get on well with more new friends.For example,the
Vietnamese government has given many policies about human’s right to
access the information and news.Therefore,it provides an equality
environment between people from all walks of life in daily basis and keep up
with lasted trend. Moreover , through being accepting to have freedom,young
people can explore their preferences and focus on their professional growth
with more advices.Last but not least,youngster also have a chance to express
their own perspectives with their parents.As a result,it not only enhance
family relationship but also bridge the generation gap among each member.

However, opponents of this suggestion also highlight other drawbacks of the

dangerous problems about this phenomenon.Regarding the first argument, if
there are uncontroled freedom given to children,they may face with some
social issues like cyberbullying or body shaming.Many young people
nowadays are immersing themselves in the internet with their online friends
or imagine life.As a consequences, the children’s life could be affected and
prevent them from fully experience their childhood.Furthermore,the sense of
freedom also a risk that enable youngsters to make unhealthy relationships
with some people that are not educated well.Consequently,this can shape
children’s personality and characteristics so that they cannot pay attention to
their personal development.

In conclusion,there are pros and cons to each approach presented in this

essay.The idea of giving children more freedom is a useful method to educate
them but should have limitation.Therefore, both proposals are not mutually
exclusive but rather compatible,and parents ought to consider wheter it is
positive or negative to guide their children to a correct career path.