POINT 4

WHAT DID YOU LEARN IN THIS TASK?

In this assignment, I learned that the featured video is about social media and how it can
affect our perception of life, our mental health, and how we compare ourselves to others
online. The idea that social networks can show an idealized version of people's lives instead
of reality is also mentioned.

WHAT DID YOU FIND MOST INTERESTING ABOUT THE TASK?

The most interesting part of the task is the reflection on how social networks influence our
daily life and our perception of ourselves and others. In addition, the fact of addressing how
information on social networks can inspire our actions and how it affects our mental health
is relevant and current.

WHAT AREA OR TOPIC WOULD YOU LIKE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT?

Based on the content of the task, it could be interesting to delve into the influence of social
networks on mental health and how we can use the platforms in a more conscious and
balanced way to reduce potential negative effects.

AREAS TO WORK ON: (GRAMMAR/VOCABULARY/SPELLING/WRITING.

 GRAMMAR:

In the first paragraph, the sentence "Bill Murray wrote the guy on it" seems incomplete or
confusing. It could be clearer if more context is provided or the structure is corrected.

 VOCABULARY:
In the second paragraph, the phrase "Do we think we compare?" it would be more natural if
replaced by "Do you think we compare?".
In the third paragraph, the sentence "I think people do their best on social media" could be
improved by using a more common expression, such as "I think people do their best on
social media."