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The 5 Big Flaws in Creative
The 5 Big Flaws in Creative
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Creative
Briefs
✓ The smart creative brief starts with one very clear objective
that should come from your brand plan.
✓ What is the PROGRAM? Who is the main target, and what
underlying ACCELERATOR will make this work? And what is
the expected performance RESULT?
✓ This simple objective will “attract new consumers using our
‘guilt-free’ positioning.” I prefer to leave out the ‘share gain’ as
it could complicate/confuse the objective.
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Communicate Gray’s new “guilt-free” positioning to a growing “proactive preventer” target who live a
low-carb keto life to attract and tempt them to try Gray’s
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P&L forecast
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Key Issues Advertising
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$30,385 1.What’s the priority choice for growth: find new
(87 / 93 = 94%) 94% cookie jar? Wouldn’t it be great if you could just sneak a
• Gross Margin $17,148 users or drive usage frequency among “Proactive Preventers”, suburban working
• GM % 56% loyalists? women, 35-40. Main Message of “guilt-free
87% cookie without worry that you have gone off your diet? • Marketing Budget $8,850 2.Where should the investment/resources focus snacking, so you can stay in control of your
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• Contribution Margin
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77% still tastes great. In blind taste tests, Gray’s cookies
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Inhibitors presence at retail. • Support Q4 retail blitz with message focused
63% Purchase matched the market leaders on taste, but has only • Low familiar yet to turn our sales into loyalty 3.Build defence plan against new entrants to on holding shelf space during the competitive
Consumer
• Awareness held back due to weak Creative. defends with consumers and at store level. launches. Q2 specialty blitz to grow
100 calories, with 2g of fat and 3g of sugar. In a
2 12-week study, consumers using Gray’s once a
• Low distribution at specialty stores. Poor
coverage.
Goals
• Increase penetration from 10% to 12%,
distribution at key specialty stores.
Innovation
25% night as a dessert lost 10 pounds. • Low Purchase Frequency among most loyal.
Risks
specifically up from 15% to 20% with the core
target. Monitor usage frequency among the
• Launch two new flavours in Q4, improved
taste for 2025, convenience pack for 2026.
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3 (Pepperidge Farms and Nabisco). • Increase awareness from 33% to 42%, Competitive Defence Plan
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ThinkBox Gray’s Cookies are the best tasting yet
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guilt free pleasure so you can stay in
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Core Strength
That’s because Gray’s is low in fat and calories, yet
1 still tastes great. In blind taste tests, Gray’s cookies
matched the market leaders on taste, but has only
100 calories, with 2g of fat and 3g of sugar. In a
2 Consumer 12-week study, consumers using Gray’s once a
night as a dessert lost 10 pounds.
Brand Vision: Be first ‘healthy cookie’ to generate craving, popularity and sales of a mainstream cookie. $100 Million by 2030.
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Analysis Issues and Strategies Execution Plans
B Absolute P&L forecast Key Issues Advertising
• Sales 1.What’s the priority choice for growth: find new • Drive awareness and trial of Gray’s. Target
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$17,148 users or drive usage frequency among “Proactive Preventers”, suburban working
• GM % 56% loyalists? women, 35-40. Main Message of “guilt-free
Scores • Marketing Budget $8,850 2.Where should the investment/resources focus snacking, so you can stay in control of your
• Contribution Margin $6,949 and deployment be to drive our awareness and health.” Media uses 30/15-second TV,
• CM% 23% share needs for Gray’s? specialty health magazines, health event
93% Awareness Drivers 3.How will we defend Gray’s against the signage, digital, and social media.
• Taste drives high conversion of Trial to proposed Q1 2014 ‘healthy cookie’ launches Sampling
Purchase from Pepperidge Farms and Nabisco? • Drive trial with in-store sampling at grocery,
(87 / 93 = 94%) 94% • Strong Listings in Food Channels Strategies Costco, health food stores and event sampling
• Exceptional brand health scores among 1.Continue to attract new users to Gray’s at fitness, yoga, women’s networking, new
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87% Familiar Early Adopters. Highly Beloved Brand 2.Focus investment on driving awareness and moms.
among niche. trial with new consumers and building a Distribution
Inhibitors presence at retail. • Support Q4 retail blitz with message focused
94% • Low familiar yet to turn our sales into loyalty 3.Build defence plan against new entrants to on holding shelf space during the competitive
• Awareness held back due to weak Creative. defends with consumers and at store level. launches. Q2 specialty blitz to grow
82% Consider • Low distribution at specialty stores. Poor Goals distribution at key specialty stores.
coverage. • Increase penetration from 10% to 12%, Innovation
• Low Purchase Frequency among most loyal. specifically up from 15% to 20% with the core • Launch two new flavours in Q4, improved
77% Risks target. Monitor usage frequency among the taste for 2025, convenience pack for 2026.
63% Purchase • Launch of Mainstream cookie brands
(Pepperidge Farms and Nabisco).
most loyal to ensure it stays steady.
• Increase awareness from 33% to 42%,
Explore popup cookie shoppe for 2027.
Competitive Defence Plan
• De-listing 2 weakest skus weakened our in- specifically up from 45% to 50% within the core • Pre-launch sales blitz to close distribution
store presence target. Drive trial from 15% to 20%. Close gaps. At launch, TV advertising, heavy
25%
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• R&D has 5 new flavors in development. Grow 11% post launch gaining up to 1.2% • Sales story focuses on "any new healthy
• Sales Broker gains at Specialty Stores share. Target zero losses at shelf. cookies should displace under-performing and
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We want to help people re-discover the lost secret that the most amazing tasting food is made of natural ingredients.
The best Values Consumer first, great taste, healthy, natural ingredients, fast-to-market, family owned.
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• Dominate every shelf
• Attack competitive
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• Geographic expansion
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• New flavor launches
• Leverage influence of
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