SCHOOL-BASED ASSESSMENT FOR CXC

(GENERAL PROFICIENCY)
PRESENTED TO
THE ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
MANNING’S SCHOOL
JAMAICA, W.I.
IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT FOR CERTIFICATION
IN CSEC ENGLISH A

NAME: Kimmarie Whyte

REGISTRATION NUMBER: 100068
TEACHER: Mrs. Foster-Lee
DATE: 2024

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Table of Contents
Plan of Investigation 3
Reflection 1 4
Reflection 2 7
Reflection 3 8
Written Report 9
Plan for Oral Presentation 11
Oral presentation 12
References
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Appendix 15

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 Plan of Investigation
Crime above Our Capacity.” Prime Minister Andrew Holness has admitted that the
country's crime problem has “evolved currently, over and above our established
capacity to address it.” Firstly, in an exclusive interview with the Gleaner on
Tuesday, the prime minister said that his administration was fighting back by
deploying technology systems, and increased personnel to tackle what many
believe in Jamaica's number one people. However, Holness said it would take time
to reduce the current levels of crime in society. “I am confident that we are at a
good place now in terms of investment that we have made, and those investments
will bear fruit,” said Holness. Furthermore, the prime minister said that the effort
of the security forces was bearing fruit with the number of gangs that had been
targeted and brought before the court. The article shaped my intelligence on the
topic “crime” moreover it was very educating. It exposed me to the level of the
growth of crime and how it is above our Capacity to address it.
The second item was a crime documentary I gathered from a website which
revealed the unattractiveness and ascendancy of being a victim of crime this helped
me to acknowledge that crime makes a person feel powerless and unprotected.
Many youths of today's society believe that crime is not always substandard; little
do they know that crime degrades the quality of life for all.
The final piece was the song “Gangsta's Paradise” by Coolio. The song
helped me to apprehend that crime does not pay and the killer might have felt some
guilt later on; it is so true, especially today. The criminals don't pay it is the victims
who do. The lines in the song competently narrate how crime doesn't pay and the
laws seem not to work. It shows me that crime is running rife and it seems to get
worse.

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 Reflection 1
The first article, an internet article, a song, offers a relationship to the topic of
crime above capacity by showcasing the damaging impact of urban poverty and
how it can contribute to criminal behavior. It describes how individuals resort to
criminal activities as a means of survival and the devastating impact it has on their
families and communities. The song's underlying message reminds us that crime is
often a symptom of deeper systemic issues like inequality, and we must tackle the
root causes to create long-term solutions.
"Gangsta's Paradise" is a song that explores the challenges and hardships faced
by people living in impoverished and dangerous neighborhoods. The song, by
Coolio, featuring L.V., highlights the struggles of individuals who must resort to
crime to survive and provide for themselves and their families.

Despite the message of the song being a stark and sobering portrayal of reality,
the composition and arrangement of the music are intricate and cohesive. The
chorus, featuring the lyrics, "Living in a gangsta's paradise," represents the
feelings of hopelessness and despair that permeate many urban areas.

The song emphasizes the cyclical nature of poverty and how it can lead people
down a path of crime and desperation, often with devastating consequences. The
rap verses offer a glimpse into the lives of people in these communities and how
they are often viewed as disposable by mainstream society.

Overall, the song speaks to the need for change and reform in our society, to break
the cycle of poverty and violence that affects so many people. The song serves as a
powerful reminder to society to address poverty and inequality and to create
opportunities for individuals to break free from the cycle of gang violence and
poverty.
My second article is which is a crime documentary entitled “The Deadly Story of
Sarah Hartsfield [True Crime Documentary]” "The Deadly Story of Sarah
Hartsfield" is a true crime documentary that investigates the shocking murder case
of Sarah Hartsfield, a young woman who was found dead in her Texas apartment
in 2016. The documentary delves into the details of the investigation, the

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prosecution, and the defense, revealing the story of what happened leading up to
Sarah's death and the trial that followed. Throughout the documentary, interviews
with witnesses, friends, family members, and experts provide insights into Sarah's
character and the events that led up to her tragic passing. The documentary is a
harrowing and emotional journey that offers firsthand accounts of a crime that
highlights the fragility of life and the dark side of human behavior.

"The Deadly Story of Sarah Hartsfield" is a true crime documentary that provides
a detailed depiction of a young woman's tragic and gruesome murder in her Texas
apartment in 2016. The film is a gripping and emotional journey that delves deep
into the events that led up to Sarah's death and the trial that followed. Through
interviews with legal experts, witnesses, and family members, the documentary
delivers an intimate and detailed examination of the case that is complex and
layered. The film also highlights the devastating impact of violence on individuals
and communities.
Overall, "The Deadly Story of Sarah Hartsfield" is a sobering reminder of the
fragility of life and the dark side of human behavior. The documentary is a
powerful tool for raising awareness about the devastating impact of violence and
offers an urgent call to action to address these issues in our society. The film is a
must-watch for anyone interested in true crime stories and those concerned about
the urgent need for social change and reform.
My third article, an interview with The Prime Minister, Andrew Holness, titled
Crime ‘above capacity’ Crime 'above capacity' is the title of an interview with the
Prime Minister of Jamaica, Andrew Holness, in which he discusses the country's
ongoing struggle with rising crime rates. Jamaica has long been known for its
high incidence of violent crime, with murder rates consistently among the highest
in the world. In the interview, Holness acknowledges that the country's crime
problem is "above capacity" and that there is an urgent need for reform to address
this issue.

The Prime Minister also highlights some of the challenges faced by law
enforcement authorities in tackling crime in Jamaica, including a lack of resources
and personnel. He speaks of the need for greater cooperation between the

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government and the private sector to create more job opportunities and improve
economic conditions, which are often seen as major contributing factors to crime.

Overall, "Crime 'above capacity'" offers a candid and insightful analysis of

Jamaica's ongoing struggle with rising crime rates. The interview underscores the
urgent need for social, economic, and criminal justice reforms to address the root
causes of crime and violence and to create a safer and more equitable society.

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 Reflection 2

The piece entitled "Crime 'above capacity'" speaks about the ongoing struggle of
Jamaica with rising crime rates. The writer's purpose is to raise awareness about
the gravity of the issue and call for urgent reform to tackle this problem. The
writer achieves this purpose through the effective use of several language devices
such as statistics, quotes, and anecdotes.

Firstly, the writer deftly employs the use of statistics to demonstrate the severity of
the issue. This is evident in the interview with the Prime Minister, where he cites
the consistently high murder rates in Jamaica. Secondly, the writer also uses
quotes from expert sources to provide insight into the challenges faced by law
enforcement in tackling crime in Jamaica.

The piece also highlights the need for cooperation between the government and the
private sector to create more job opportunities and improve economic conditions.
Through the use of anecdotes and real-life examples, the writer can bring to life
the devastating impact of crime on individuals and communities, emphasizing the
urgent need for change.

Overall, the writer achieves their purpose of raising awareness about the issue of
crime 'above capacity' through a range of effective language devices. The piece
offers a sobering reminder of the importance of social, economic, and criminal
justice reforms to address this pressing issue.

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 Reflection 3
Based on the previous reflections provided, I have gained insights into the issue of
crime above capacity and the need for urgent social, economic, and criminal
justice reforms. By reading and reflecting on the points made in the reflections, I
have gained a deeper understanding of the complex and multi-dimensional nature
of this issue and developed a greater sense of empathy and concern for those
affected by crime.

Furthermore, the use of effective language devices such as statistics, quotes, and
anecdotes taught me the value of using rhetorical techniques to communicate my
ideas and arguments more compellingly and persuasively. I now can apply these
skills to my writing and communication, making myself a more effective
communicator and advocate for the issues I care about.

In addition, the paragraph emphasizes the importance of social cooperation and

collaboration in addressing complex social issues. I took this message to heart and
sought opportunities to collaborate with others in my community and beyond, to
work towards creating positive social change and making a difference in the
world.

Overall, reflecting on and engaging with these reflections, I can inspire you to be a
more compassionate, informed, and engaged citizen, capable of making a
meaningful impact in your community and beyond.

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 Written Report
In order to complete this section of the SBA we had to work together in groups
which enhanced the process and brought different perspectives to the table. The
selection of our artefacts as a group was straightforward, given our easy
collaboration and complete agreement. With each member focusing on distinct
subtopics, we collectively chose one artefact from each individual theme that best
summaries crime and violence. The result was a combination of two newspaper
articles and one video. The artifacts chosen by the group members were a
newspaper highlighting domestic violence, another unraveling the mystery of ghost
guns, and a video addressing sexual assault, as we all decided that these
collectively provide a comprehensive portrayal of the various nature of crime and
violence in our society.

1. What are some long term effects of domestic violence?

2. How does emotional impacts on communities contribute to the broader

issue of gun violence?

For the selected pieces, we used the PASTA method which helps in
examining the different elements of a text to better understand its message and
intent. The PASTA method requires us to identify the Purpose, Audience, Subject,
Tone and Author’s Bias.

Domestic violence, predominantly affecting women and children, has

profound and lasting effects beyond immediate physical injuries. Survivors may
experience psychosomatic illnesses, mental health issues, and diminished self-
perception. Children witnessing such violence face mental health challenges and
are at risk of exhibiting adverse behaviour. Suggestions for survivors include
seeking support from local resources, therapy, safety planning, and exploring
legal options. The cyclical nature of violence emphasizes the importance of
comprehensive intervention and societal awareness to prevent and address
domestic violence effectively.

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 The article emphasizes the emotional toll on communities through personal
stories, highlighting that the impact of gun violence extends beyond statistics.
Challenges include community trust issues and the need for deterrence and
confidence in the judicial system. Understanding these emotional impacts is
essential for comprehensive solutions, as it requires the need for not only law
enforcement strategies but also community-based approaches to address the root
causes of violence. Jamaica faces challenges with illegal firearms, with over
11,000 murders in a decade

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 Plan for oral presentation
The researcher selected the topic “Crime capacity” Crime is a subject that
deserves our attention and understanding, as it affects us all in various ways, both
personally and as a society.

The article that helped the researcher to add context to the expository speech is a
song called “GUNMAN SHIFT”,

The genre I have chosen for this presentation is expository speech, as it allows me
to provide factual information, delve into the topic's significance, and raise
awareness about its importance.

The language register employed in this expository speech will be Standard

Jamaican English. This choice acknowledges the cultural diversity and richness of
our audience while ensuring clear and effective communication.

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 Oral Presentation

Name: Kimmarie Whyte

Theme: Crime and Violence
Topic: Crime Capacity
Genre: Poem

Here there, there here, it’s crime capacity

A precondition of criminal liability
That the defendant is a person with sufficient capacity
And is to be held with full responsibility

We have S.O.E’s , but small decrease

Compared to 2019, murders increased to 10%
Criminals had no fear of police presence
Andrew says “there is a crime decrease”
But when I look, bad man a beat police
(The Gleaner, Published:Thursday | February 27, 2020 | 12:00 AM
Edmond Campbell/Senior Staff Reporter)

“Intellectual, murda people edition

Kakam fire, full a gun like remington”
(Gvnman Shift by Skeng)
Even the pastor tun criminal
Hide the murder weapon, lying Christian

What is greater, crime of course

We need law and no remourse
Drugs, murder and illegal guns

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Dudus 23 years, in the slums

Buju Banton had 10 years but lost 2

Just for weed he smuggled through
Roshane Bartley, 4 children and a mother
Slaughtered inhumanely without a bother

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 References

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vc1FV4d--x4

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 Appendix
Article #1

Crime above capacity

Published: August 1, 1995

https://youtu.be/V79D8__4W9g?si=xuGfkzVmUV43bcyu

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Article #2

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_g8b1oi1RY

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Article #3

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https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=318405499119766

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