Name: May ann D.

Balao Course/Year: BEED 3

The letter is easy to understand, in which it is an application letter. The letter or the
experience of the of the applicant are indicated and what work she has been. In the letter we feel
the self-confidence of the applicant in applying the position in the company. Also, the letter has
used accurate words, direct to the point, and has a conciseness.
As I read the letter, my only suggestion is don’t use abbreviation word like “CV”,
because as a first time reader or not familiar in application letter we need to ask or research what
is it. Write what is it and don’t use abbreviation.
The letter is almost perfect, it is used words that easy to understand or it use familiar
words. We feel the respect of the applicant to the company, and we amaze to the experiences of
the applicant that suited to the position in the company. All in all, the letter is good and the
applicant is considering the 8 C’s in writing a letter.